Broken.Promise's Pixel Art (Mk II)

[Broken.Promise.]

It looks nice but isn't it a bit big for a sprite? :S Also, its legs and tail look a bit unnatural but apart from that, good job! :D
Yeah, I suppose :P I like it being tall though, more intimidating Mwaha!

It looks a bit...like Mew...(its head does anyway.) Also, its body looks a bit circular. I like its purple flame though :D
I saw the Mew resemblance too... kooky eh?? :P

It looks a bit...strange O_o. Its anatomy is slighty awkward too, but it does look like a possible concept for an Pachirisu evolution! :D
Lol, I know the anatomy of Avirisu looks awkward, but it was actually based on a flying squirrel, which does look highly strange :P

This actually looks quite good! The mouth/pipe thing (XD) looks a bit strange but apart from that, it looks great! I love the flame.
lol, the snout thing?? yeah, it kinda does look a bit strange :/ but I couldn't make it any better :P

It looks quite good, but its tail looks a bit strange in my opinion and it doesn't really seem like a possible Eevee-lution.
I know it doesn't look possible, but I just wanted to make an Eevee-lution that resembled a lion, and I figured 'why not make it into a total BAMF' so I tried :P

This sprite looks really nice! It looks cute, really elegant and something I'd want on my team! I think the wings and tail were sprited quite well. It just...doesn't really look like a Psyduck evolution. It looks more like a completely new pokemon! :D
Hehe, thanks :D Don't ya just wish you had a Psydove?? :P
And I know it doesn't look like a Psyduck evo, but on the same note, would you expect Milotic and Gyrados to come from Feebas and Magikarp?

thankyou for the comments, greatly appreciated :D

 

[Deja Vu]

I really like the Final Fantasy sprites, Psydove and your fusions.

 

[DarkTails]

That Gyara-Drevus is super-scary! @_@

PsyDove could look official with some shading (and if it lost a few pounds :P)

 

[Broken.Promise.]

UPDATES:

I have a Fakemon for you all :)

Grossum, the Possum Pokemon
Normal/Ground

And three trainer sprites:

It's RIKKU from Final Fantasy X :) I'm quite proud of this :D

I really like Flannery's hairstyle, so I decided to keep that and just change the colour. I call her Ciara.

I'm not too keen on the shading, or the hair on this. Still; an update's an update :) This one's name is Alice.

C&C??

 

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

due to the submition of a fakemon sprites ( and custom lucario sprite ), you have just been visited by the semi beginner sprite critique.o.0


custom sprite lucario:




problems:

1. this is one of the biggest problems. it looks like it hasnt been eating enough lately so the the main torso is a smigen on the skinny side.


2. marked ( faintly ) on the red dotted line are areas that i think are too straight. please fix them.

3. the legs have no leg shading at all ( ok the is one pixel above the toe line ) id suggest you shade them much more.

comments: i really like this one. it looks close to official but i still think you need to shoot for D/P/Pt style ( unless thats what your already doing ).

the rating: 7/10

grossum:



problems:

1. when i use the term double pixel this is exactly what i mean. the two red dots indicate where the pixels are that should be removed.

2. not a really big problem,the back just looks a little to hunched thats all.

3. the entire area in the ovalish thing has a monotony of an entirely black outline. pokemon sprites most always have a different colored pixel in these lines. notice i said most so its not to big of a deal.

4. up on the tippy top of the tail is a lone pixel that is a sign that says there needs to be a pixel there.

comments: this is inprovment B.P. your best scratch fakemon sprite and i think its D/P/Pt style. i hope to see more sprites like this!


the rating: 8/10


ill do the other ones in a bit my brother is having trouble beating MMX2

 

[Broken.Promise.]

Hey StaraptorX, thanks for the comments, very much appreciated :)
The Lucario wasn't me aiming for D/P/Pt, it was just a quick sprite-y thing :) tho I see what you mean about the tail being pointed and Lucario being a tad skinny. Will work on that when I have time :)

And thanks for the Grossum crit. I thought it wasn't that great, but obviously not :) Glad to see that you like it :D

UPDATE:
I have the final evo in Equa's evo line :) I haven't got a 2nd stage, but that could be done soon:

Aquicorn, the Water Unicorn Pokemon
Water
Evo line: Equa --- ??? --- Aquicorn

And just another Final Fantasy sprite; this time of a Moogle:

C&C?? I'm not too sure about these..

EDIT: AAAAH, forgot to do the outline on Aquicorn, it's all black :/
I'll fix that now :)
Here's the better Aquicorn :) please rate THIS one :)

 

[st.jimmy]

wow.
well done! ^^
i must admit your recoulors are better than mine and your thread isnt even dedicated to them :P
keep up the good work ;)

 

[Superjub]

The shading on the moogle is awkward (specifically its legs/feet/lower body), but the Aquicorn looks really good, well done! :D

 

[icycatelf]

Cool. The Suicune & Milotic recolors, Regina trainer sprite, Shinx-Rotom fusion, all the devamps, the Vulpix revamp, and Grossum are my favorites.

 

[KostK2Boss]

Here's a quick tip, if you want to improve your shading: First, you have to choose the starting shade of a colour (the brighter one) and then, from the colour select option of MSpaint, gently lower the bar to the darker shades - but gently - otherwise the overall shading won't be smooth.
I can hardly understand what I'm saying right now, so if you made no sense whatsoever, I don't blame you. You could also use an already-existing palette - There are over 490 of them!

 

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

aquicorn:

problems:




1: not a big problem but the horn isnt big enough and its bent.

2: i really think its to small. maybe you should resize it.


comments: this again is one of your best sprites. but it doesnt looks like a fully evolved pokemon. maybe you should make that the middle evo.

the rating: 9/10

avirisu:




problems:

1. the belly part is completely under shaded. but over all the sprite has little shading compared to a regular pokemon sprite.

2. the eyes dont look like they are facing in the bottom left corner which can be a mild problem.

3. the sprite over all is a little sloppy, and the pose makes it look like it had a mad run in with a slaming door if you know what i mean.

comments: this does look like a great concept for a pachirisu evolution. just sort out the problems and it should be another one of your better sprites.

the rating: 5/10

psydove:




problems:


1. it is very under shaded. ill use the term under palette. plz fix!

2. psydove looks like hyroglyphics ( dang thats hard to spell :( ) im not saying that very bad but i personly think it needs a better pose.


comments: was this your first try at this? dang its good. its something id love to have. but to tell you the truth it looks more like a porygon2 evo rather then a golduck evo. o.0

the rating: 7/10.

 

[Broken.Promise.]

UPDATE:

Re-did the Aquicorn, because it did look a bit small, decided to resize it, edit the horn, and it's also now the 2nd in the Equa line.

I've also made the final in the line. Aquasus

Aquasus: the Winged Horse Pokemon
Water/Flying

Evo line:

---

---

I've also made a trainer sprite. It's not great, but not terrible.

I call him Brett.

And a trainer sprite of Yellow, from the manga:

C&C?

 

[Broken.Promise.]

Just a lil' update :D

I decided to experiment with type changing :D
So we have a Cherrim, which has magically been changed into Fire type:

..oops, maybe Sunny Day was a bit too sunny

A really quick, and slightly sloppy, revamp of the G/S/C Clair sprite:

I'm not proud of it, but it's the first time I've ever revamped a trainer sprite, so be nice xP

C&C??

 

[Sophidius]

UPDATE:

Re-did the Aquicorn, because it did look a bit small, decided to resize it, edit the horn, and it's also now the 2nd in the Equa line.

I've also made the final in the line. Aquasus

Aquasus: the Winged Horse Pokemon
Water/Flying

Evo line:

---

---

I've also made a trainer sprite. It's not great, but not terrible.

I call him Brett.

And a trainer sprite of Yellow, from the manga:

C&C?

Ahh, Brett is the perfect guy for one of our Gym Leaders. He looks a lot like what I had in mind for the Flying Type Gym Leader in Newfound Town (which I had called Eric. I do think Brett is a better name, though). After you beat him you get the Aether Badge.

 

[Sophidius]

Ciara

Alice

Brett

Yellow

Looks like you really used original Trainer Sprites to create these. I can tell some of these aren't scratch sprites (Alice for example is actually an RSE May-sprite), but I like the transformation. You made them look unique (Especially Yellow, because I know no other Trainer poses like that). Bravo!

 

[tbone1094]

very nice i really like them

 

[Broken.Promise.]

sophidius: I know I originally used official trainer sprites. It's kinda obvious :D
But I just keep the poses, and sometimes the hair. But I try and change all the clothing though, because that's what makes the sprites unique. Glad you like them though :)

tbone1094: Thankyou :)

 

[Seadiga]

Ciara looks very weird.No neck, and it looks like Flannery's head was just ploped on there.The Shoulders are rectangular a bit too much.

The last 2 in the Equa line are terrific, but Equa looks weird. I can't put my finger on it though.

All in all, terrific!The other sprites are excellent! I can't find anything wrong with the others. :)

 

[Broken.Promise.]

Ciara looks very weird.No neck, and it looks like Flannery's head was just ploped on there.The Shoulders are rectangular a bit too much.
Yeah, I didn't realise that Ciara had madly broad shoulders and no neck until you mentioned that. Oops :/ really should take more care in my work.

The last 2 in the Equa line are terrific, but Equa looks weird. I can't put my finger on it though.
Equa was my first ever fakemon, and I wanted it to look quite comical and cartoonish. The fact that its head is a LOT larger in proportion to the rest of its body is intentional. Also, I like the way that, as it evolves, it loses its comical appearance to look a lot more different.

All in all, terrific!The other sprites are excellent! I can't find anything wrong with the others. :)
Thank you very much for your criticisms. They will be taken on board :D

Update!!!

This is a fusion of Leafeon and Drapion, with a few other little bits and pieces in it. I think it looks quite different, so although it goes in the Fusions section, I think it would be a good possibility for a Poison Eeveelution :D

Veneon. Its head is a little large, but it might be hiding a huge brain under there ;)

I've also taken to doing a few more devamps, as apparently I do them quite well (???)

C&C pleease??

 

[Sophidius]

I think you're the best at devamps, but that's probably because it's not a very intensively used genre. An important feature in devamps is that white isn't totally white, but a little blue-ish. With the Jirachi sprite you applied that feature really good. And the Suicune looks like it was actually the one from Crystal. The Porygon-Z just has some lighter colors and Lucario's colors are a tad too dark. But overall it's very well done ^^.

Jirachi: 9 (I really like this one's colors. Just like the sprite would appear in Crystal)
Suicune: 8,5 (The colors look very much alike the original from Crystal)
Porygon-Z: 7 (Not too fond of this one, I must say. The colors are good, but it was not really a challenge in my opinion)
Lucario: 6,5 (I see you tried hard on this one, but it doesn't stand out much. The colors are too dark, so it'd be very unlikely to see this one in GSC)