Burst ninja's sprite explosion

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

Heh.
Hunter is going to be a fun chariter to use in Pokemon odd. :P

OMG! it's a me, Achamo! :D

Great Job, Bro.

I give you a 9/10
for the high quality and finally using PNG this time.

 

[BurstX]

ok an update, heres some sprites i did for achamo

 

[BurstX]

ok heres my very first scratch sprite, its of a fakemon i did a while ago called gargite

or

which one is better
please comment on it so i can get better
EDIT: heres the second form, this one came out better, gremlare

 

[Zorin]

Nice work, especially for someone who has only been spriting for a month. Your revamps are fine, though they look more like recolours to me. You might want to change some things like the outlines or the fire on Charmander.

Your scratch sprites are okay, but to be honest, not great.. the shading is kinda square and so is the outline. But they're your first sprites so.. just keep practicing.

 

[BurstX]

yeah scratches are not my forte, thanks for the advice though, ill try and edit them

 

[Zorin]

My first scratches were WAY worse. Just compare them to Nintendo sprites for shading and anatomy etc. It's very hard in the beginning but in a while you'll see you're improving and it will get easier. ;D
Edit: omg sorry for the crappy English. T_T I hope you understand me.

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

My first scratches were WAY worse. Just compare them to Nintendo sprites for shading and anatomy etc. It's very hard in the beginning but in a while you'll see you're improving and it will get easier. ;D
Edit: omg sorry for the crappy English. T_T I hope you understand me.

hm...
your english is perfectly fine,
don't worry about it.

 

[BurstX]

ok i edited the second form tell me wat you think

now heres the 4 versions
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EDIT: ok heres my very first eeveeloution, its spiriteon

 

[BurstX]

...heres just a minor update, just some trainers i did

 

[Momoko]

Wow i never you were a spriter! I like olmost all of them! I really like ur revamps,ur recolors need a bit of work but i love the electric haunter! Ur overworlds are also nicely done! I had no idea u were this good..

-Luk-

 

[BurstX]

thanks that was really nice...not many people come by to see wat i do...its a shame, but thats not gonna stop me from spriting

 

[Momoko]

Your very skilled, have you thought about spriting in a hack? I think you would very easily get a job doing that. :classic:

 

[BurstX]

actually im working on a hack now...im not sure if ill put in fakemon though...but heres a new one...its
largub...the burrow grub pokemon bug/ground

this ones iffy, but i made it bigger, so yay...

ok heres his evo
sheiloon the sheild cacoon pokemon bug/ground

 

[DrakO]

I think you have the 'spriter skill' inside of you, but the sprites you create are kinda weird, you know?
Some scratches are really good... Some other are bad... I think you should work more in that kind of skill, in order to rise your performance.

I search forward for your sprites!

 

[Momoko]

Dude that sheiloon needs a lot of work, it's not bad for a first attempt at it tho :p oh and that spiriteon i think u shuld rename spriteon..:D

 

[BurstX]

I think you have the 'spriter skill' inside of you, but the sprites you create are kinda weird, you know?
Some scratches are really good... Some other are bad... I think you should work more in that kind of skill, in order to rise your performance.

I search forward for your sprites!

thanks thats really nice, but could you tell me which are good/bad, just so i can work on them, thanks

Dude that sheiloon needs a lot of work, it's not bad for a first attempt at it tho :p oh and that spiriteon i think u shuld rename spriteon..:D

ok wat do i need to work on the sheiloon, and if i renamed spiriteon spriteon id be copying pixelchu on pokecharms...so im not gonna do that

 

[Momoko]

Okay well no offence but it looks like a wierd fuzzball with really small wings,which is why you should fix up it's body shape..other than that i think it's fine..maybe edit the mouth a big,tho. And i didn't know about spriteon srry ^^

 

[BurstX]

...but sheiloon doesnt have wings or a mouth...im very confused

 

[Momoko]

That's why i said it LOOKS like it has wings...and no mouth?I can see one! It's all scribbley :D gud luk n happy new year..

 

[BurstX]

ok here is the new and inproved sheiloon, i know you though tthat part was a mouth, but it was his shell covering itself