~BZumas Fakemon

[Ben.]

Hey i'm ~BZuma or Ben and i just want to release some fakemon i made.
Public Use:
Fire Starters:

Personal Use !:
Shuckle pre-evo
Shuci:

To be edited
Jpg to prevent theft

 

[~Kian~]

i like the fakes but the third one looks more like a psychic but o well

the shuckle looks ok but it looks too similer

~kian

 

[Ben.]

i like the fakes but the third one looks more like a psychic but o well

the shuckle looks ok but it looks too similer

~kian

It's a Fire/Psychic type pokemon
And Shuci? it's to slimier to shuckle?
thanks for the c&c

 

[Kotone]

oh those are amazing
way better than i could ever do!

 

[~Kian~]

no prob glad 2 help :)

just too help maybe make an evo maybe have an evo of it shell and eyes looking out then final evo it hatches!!!! out and looks cool

~kian

 

[Ben.]

oh those are amazing
way better than i could ever do!

Thanks these are quite old, i have improved since then ^_^

 

[NarutoActor]

your shadowing is backwards light comes from the left not the right and you make there eyes to big my rating B- You have talent you just need some practice

 

[Ben.]

I kinda agree with Pokekingkian with it just looking like a psychic type but other than that pretty good job with the coloring


:t354:TG

Thanks it means alot form someone aswell respected as you

 

[Spherical Ice]

Hey i'm ~BZuma or Ben and i just want to release some fakemon i made.
Public Use:
Fire Starters:

Personal Use !:
Shuckle pre-evo
Shuci:

To be edited
Jpg to prevent theft

Okay...

First, I swear that red sprite is an edited sprite of a sprite I've seen in a tutorial... I'll find it and check.

Anyway, the Shuci looks deformed, and saving it as .JPG to prevent theft is absolutely pathetic. Now no-body can easily comment on your shading and colour choice. Anyway, it has too small a shell and has nothing to do with what Shuckle is based one which seems to have escaped my mind. Anyway it's just a yellow.. 'snake' with a red lump on it. Oh, and it's head it huge, too.

 

[Ben.]

Okay...

First, I swear that red sprite is an edited sprite of a sprite I've seen in a tutorial... I'll find it and check.

Anyway, the Shuci looks deformed, and saving it as .JPG to prevent theft is absolutely pathetic. Now no-body can easily comment on your shading and colour choice. Anyway, it has too small a shell and has nothing to do with what Shuckle is based one which seems to have escaped my mind. Anyway it's just a yellow.. 'snake' with a red lump on it. Oh, and it's head it huge, too.

Okay first you have seen them before they were my first sprites, a tutorial by skeedles and we have spoke of it, He said i could use a edited version. Thanks for the C&C i will improve all of them and re upload them so i will not save them as .jpg That was my first backsprite and as every i will try to improve thanks alot for the help :)

 

[Ben.]

The fakes are good enough. I am waiting for more!

thanks i'm better than that now.
These are old so i wupload some new ones when i can.

 

[Blaziquaza]

Nice,but,I think the Shucki is a bit too small,and long.Don't worry though.

 

[Crosell]

Your getting there, I can see the way you shade.
The way you shade is with detail.
Even though it doesn't look great your trying to make it look great.

I wait for some newer sprites to give a good review on those...

 

[Ben.]

Your getting there, I can see the way you shade.
The way you shade is with detail.
Even though it doesn't look great your trying to make it look great.

I wait for some newer sprites to give a good review on those...

Thanks, so what you are basically saying is the shape and design of the fakemon isn't that good, But i'm a good spriter?