It's a very nice comic, it's very funny too! problem is you're jumping to scenes WAY too fast, slow down a bit, like when Peach was talking to 'prince pea' (or whoever) you immedetly transformed him into that bad guy XD maybe have a tiny humorus canvo while she's still oblivious and then reveal, it makes the story longer and funnier, anyway you did a great job! I think it's comming out great! I hope to see more soon ^_^