Cackletta Returns

[PokemonChampion2K4]

Hello! I am startin comics again! this one Is goin to come out pretty well I think! Well here they are

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ok tell me what u think so far it will get better. :D
(Cred goes to the spriter resource for the sprites)
(I will let some people in my comic) :laugh:

 

[armadilloHD]

Eh it's ok right now the story isn't cliched atleast :)

8/10 practice makes perfect!

Edit: Wait it IS cliched! Just no one makes mario comics really rght now :P

 

[PokemonChampion2K4]

OOOOOKAY.Well there is a new issue.(and what do u mean?)

 

[armadilloHD]

It's a cliched story because you ripped it from the games. You could have made up a original story like. Mario becomes a drug dealer or something.

 

[Steel]

Lol,I can just picture that.Him selling mushrooms and then Toads dressed as cops do a drug bust >xD

Nice comic,8.5/10.

 

[PokemonChampion2K4]

that is kinda stupid and i did say I would let people join the comic.

 

[armadilloHD]

My sprites are in my sig :P

 

[PokemonChampion2K4]

new issue everyone! this one starts the first battle!

 

[armadilloHD]

Those aren't arrows...those are SPEARS :P

 

[Omega Latios]

can i be in this comic? heres my sprite

 

[PokemonChampion2K4]

can I have a better sprite? I am sorry if that is rude.

 

[armadilloHD]

*Cough*givehimTDT'srevampofyoursprite*cough*

 

[Omega Latios]

OK PokemonChampion2K4 heres better sprite

 

[Lizzie]

It's a very nice comic, it's very funny too! problem is you're jumping to scenes WAY too fast, slow down a bit, like when Peach was talking to 'prince pea' (or whoever) you immedetly transformed him into that bad guy XD maybe have a tiny humorus canvo while she's still oblivious and then reveal, it makes the story longer and funnier, anyway you did a great job! I think it's comming out great! I hope to see more soon ^_^

 

[Esupio]

could I be in it as Link you pick the sprites to your liking please cause its your comic