( can't think of a title, nothing is catchy) You gotta read this!

CHAPTER FOUR

The next day, Cloe was awakened by the same humm that she heard when she was saving Izzy. She struggled to sit ip, but there was no solid (her bed) for her to push against. She was floating! (Sorry. I am really mad right now, i will finnish this later. My mom is being a bich.)
 
I am wierd i mean weird i mean (does anyone know how to spell wierd i mean weird i mean.....grrrrrr....)
 
oni fly, no offence, but your "tips" make me want to quit. Take this advice. If you have something to say, say it nicely. And if you can't say anything nicely, don't say anything at all....JERK!
 
by the way, I am having a birthday soon and i don't want it ruined by some jerk that won't tick off with his comments and complaints about spelling errors, being more descriptive, and using Microsoft Word! Plus,I told just about everyone that i was sorry about not finnishing the chapter and that i would finnish it later( i said , "...I am really mad right now, i will finnish this later...") because i was mad and i wan'ted to coll off. So i come back nice and calm and here some JERK IS GIVING ME A LECTURE ABOUT PERFECTION! HE POPPED MY TEMPER BUBBLE RIGHT AFTER IT FULLY COOPERATED BACK! SO JUST, SHUT UP oni fly ABOUT YOUR COMMENTS! I KNOW WHAT I AM DOING. ....*grrrrr* now i feel like quitting again........i am going to......sit.....in this corner........and.............try to egnore.......a jerk face who won't back off and give me some space.......Now i feel even worse for yelling at some kid who is just trying to help.....well....i don't need help right now and i just......*sigh*....i just want a friend. Yea i have a best friend...,..but that is it....I am so.....out. Everyone calls me "fatto", "pig", "over wieghted chubby bunny". And i feel so bad. And now i yelled at a kid. I am sooooooooooooooooooo sorry oni fly. I guess i went a little over board. I hope you forgive me. I just.......*sigh*......just need a friend.
 
Minunchu said:
oni fly, no offence, but your "tips" make me want to quit. Take this advice. If you have something to say, say it nicely. And if you can't say anything nicely, don't say anything at all....JERK!
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Boy, sorry... I'm just giving you some advice... some well... I wasn't on the offensive anyways... but you should learn to take up advice from others and not be offended by other's advice...

Minichu said:
by the way, I am having a birthday soon and i don't want it ruined by some jerk that won't tick off with his comments and complaints about spelling errors, being more descriptive, and using Microsoft Word! Plus,I told just about everyone that i was sorry about not finnishing the chapter and that i would finnish it later( i said , "...I am really mad right now, i will finnish this later...") because i was mad and i wan'ted to coll off. So i come back nice and calm and here some JERK IS GIVING ME A LECTURE ABOUT PERFECTION! HE POPPED MY TEMPER BUBBLE RIGHT AFTER IT FULLY COOPERATED BACK! SO JUST, SHUT UP oni fly ABOUT YOUR COMMENTS! I KNOW WHAT I AM DOING. ....*grrrrr* now i feel like quitting again........i am going to......sit.....in this corner........and.............try to egnore.......a jerk face who won't back off and give me some space.......Now i feel even worse for yelling at some kid who is just trying to help.....well....i don't need help right now and i just......*sigh*....i just want a friend. Yea i have a best friend...,..but that is it....I am so.....out. Everyone calls me "fatto", "pig", "over wieghted chubby bunny". And i feel so bad. And now i yelled at a kid. I am sooooooooooooooooooo sorry oni fly. I guess i went a little over board. I hope you forgive me. I just.......*sigh*......just need a friend.
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Whoa, whoa... slow down... look, I'm really sorry I sestroyed your birthday... look I'm really sorry. I'll delete my old post so that this never happened... this never happened... O_o
 
so sorry. OH. By the way, check your e-mail.
 
Hey, it is alright. You didn't destroy my birthday, although it is in 3 days! but, its cool now. I hope. Oni? Is is cool now?
 
You are funny. I literally laughed when you said you were expecting a flame. I can't prove it, but take my word, i did. :)
 
:laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh:
 
Well, me e-mail, i have AOL, doesn't have the flag up and hasn't said, YOUVE GOT MAIL! yet.
 
oh, uh, my story. I will start it up again.
 
The next day, Cloe was awakened by the same humm that she heard when she was saving Izzy. She struggled to sit ip, but there was no solid (her bed) for her to push against. She was floating! It was back.
"HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP! AAAAHAHHHHHHH! " She screamed over, and over again.
"Hey! it works! cool huh?! I made a device that makes things levetate! Cool! Um, youi know what, i uh, forgot to enstall somthing that makes you go back down again. Oh well. I will just put this remote back dow, and.....I have eerands to do. Bye!"
Izzzy had created a device to make enimies float, she tried it on Cloe, and left her in the air. What kind of freind is that>?! Cloe was in air for atleast an hour before Izzy came back.
"WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG GEEZ!! I THOUGHT ERRANDS ONLY TOOK 30 MIN.! NOT 60! i THOUGHT YOU HAD...."
Izzy interupted her.
"I got stuck in traffic. Well, i hope you have fun in the air for the rest of your life! P.s. I am not planning on being a friend with a geek you floats in the air."
And that is where she left her untill, one day, she came down.
 
THUMP!
"Ow. What? huh? I AM ON SOLID GROUND AGAION!!!!!" Cloe shouted. She got down on her hands and nees and started kissing the ground right when Izzy came storming in on her hands and kneesscreaming, "HELP1 I CAN'T STAND UP! I CANT STAND UP!"
"What do you mean you can't stand up ?"Cloe Replied.
(((sorry. i have to work and do some chores. See ya. Ill finnish later.)))
 
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