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February 8th

Pokémon Roleplay

pokemonmastertriplex's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. I'll be frank. One sentence does not equal a plot, and it certainly does not equal the 'ultimate journey', especially with the sheer amount of spelling and grammatical errors you have going there. Let's see a lot more effort from you.

Pikalover10's RP declined for lackings in plot. This RP is just...cut and paste from the generic journey RP mold with nothing at all to differntiate it from the countless practically identical RPs already out there. There's nothing wrong on the writing level, but you really need to do some work on that concept.

Lounge Threads

pokemonmastertriplex's and Pikalover10's OOC threads declined because the main threads were. jerocku's RP declined for being in the wrong place and for severe lackings all around. As I have said above, one sentence does not equal a plot. Please flesh your idea out a lot more.
 
February 14th

Pokémon Roleplay

Honey & Clover's RP approved.

zapdos926's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. Your plot was very haphazard and lacking, and your grammar and spelling could both use some work. Let's see a bit more effort here.

Other Roleplay

Pikalax's thread declined for not fitting section requirements. This is...not really a roleplaying game and it lacks the required sign-up sheet. I'd suggest trying this out in the Other Trivia section; that seems more suitable for this sort of thing.

Lounge Threads

killet513's OOC thread approved.
 
February 17th

Pokémon Roleplay

Zeta Dimentio's and gold1222's RPs approved.

§acred†Beo!'s RP declined for lackings in plot. This is the same thing you've submitted and had declined many times before already. Once again, you need to actually improve on your plot.

RocketExec.'s RP declined for lackings in plot. You kind of got carried away giving a detailed list of your own character's exploits where the plot should have gone. More information on the actual plot and what other people will get to do in your RP, please.

Winterfell's RP declined for lackings in plot. Now I don't usually pick on flawed logic in plots, but...if people are literally getting killed out there, how precisely is sending a bunch of child newbie trainers to their probable deaths going to change matters? Let's...have that plot make a bit more sense, okay?

Lounge Threads

Zeta Dimentio's OOC thread approved.
 
February 23rd

Pokémon Roleplay

Frostbiteकर्म's, tim0789's, §acred†Beo!'s, Wolfwhispers's, and The Jewel of Life's RPs approved. Legendarian Mistress's RP declined for lackings in plot. This same RP was submitted by Winterfell on the 17th and declined, see said note for reasons.

Lounge Threads

Dark Sceptile's and Wolfwhispers's OOC threads approved. Legendarian Mistress's OOC thread declined because the main thread was. jasonwolf's thread declined for not really fitting in. If you'd like to discuss your idea with people, put it in the Roleplay Discussion sticky please. It doesn't really need a new thread of its own.
 
February 25th

Pokémon Roleplay

EeveeEvolutionChain's RP approved.

PokeBlast's RP declined for lackings in plot. Just...very underdeveloped idea here. How precisely did this evil organization take over and somehow just wipe out all other good guys without anyone catching on to anything? You're...going to have to give some kind of explanation for that.

Rainbow Skittlez <3's RP declined for lackings in plot. The premise is solid enough, but I'd like to see a bit more detail to the workings of your RP and preferably also a justification for how...everyone seems to have starter pokémon in this situation? You'd think the ones with the stronger teams would have a better chance of surviving.

Lounge Threads

Frostbiteकर्म's and §acred†Beo!'s OOC threads approved.

jasonwolf's thread declined for the same reason as the last. See above.
 
March 2nd

Pokémon Roleplay

†sukuyomi's, Fera's, インフェルノの津波's and Swift!'s RPs approved.

Other Roleplay

Bubo's RP declined for lackings in plot. As much as I hate to decline the only ORP in such a long time, your plot is just...not up to standards at all. You've provided basically no setting, no idea of what the RPers' possibilties are, or any clue of how they're supposed to go about their vaguely defined goal.

Just...lackings all around. You're going to need to

Lounge Threads

EeveeEvolutionChain's and tim0789's OOC threads approved.
 
March 4th

Pokémon Roleplay

雷影 イチロ's RP approved.

Mew1's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. You're going to need to do quite a bit better than saying 'it's just like the show'. Let's see some effort, please.

Menasay's RP declined for lackings in plot. I like your premise, but I'd like to see more detail on the setting and some way for RPers besides yourself to figure out what's going on in the RP and where, which is pretty essential for character creation.

Lounge Threads

†sukuyomi's, インフェルノの津波's, and 雷影 イチロ's OOC threads approved.
 
March 14th

Pokémon Roleplay

Royal's, ChrisTom's, and Strikit's RPs approved.

Editman's and GodofPH's RPs declined for lackings in plot. Both of you were close, but both of you were also a bit too vague about the setting and overall practical side of your RPs. Let's see some more clarification, please.

Zapdos926's and pokemonmastertriplex's RPs declined for severe lackings in plot. Both of you just...have basically no development on your ideas at all, you'll need to include a lot more detail and elaboration on your ideas if you want them approved. Both of you also have pretty bad issues with spelling and grammar, so try to work on that. Use an automatic spell checker if nothing else.

Other Roleplay

TurtleKing's Vorteld's RPs approved.

Lounge Threads

TurtleKing's, The Jewel of Life's, Swift!'s, and Fera's OOC threads approved.

TundraCanine's and pikachumaster's threads declined for being in the wrong place. RP submissions go in their respective subforums. RP idea discussion goes into the sticky.
 
March 23rd

Pokémon Roleplay

steffyace's, pokemongarnet's, Menasay's, THAT WONDERFUL PIXY GUY!'s and MasterfulD's RPs approved.

GodofPH's and Zapdos926's RPs declined for lackings in plot. I asked for clarification on the setting and practical side of the plot; not for empty fluff adjectives in the story. Your RPs are declined for the same reasons as before.

Dabutcha's RP declined for lackings in plot. You seem to have some kind of idea somewhere, but the way you present it is so disorienting and scattered that it's very hard to tell what. Cut down on the parenthesis abuse and order your writing properly, please.

Legendarian Mistress's RP declined for lackings in plot. You don't really sound sure at all as to what kind of RP you intend to run here, let's have a bit more focus on your idea.

Desert-Poke's RP declined for lackings in plot. It's an interesting idea, but your plot is pretty vague on the practical side of things and it's not getting to the point very well. Try to organize and elaborate a little.

Final Master's RP declined for failing to meet section requirements. Add a sign-up sheet, please.

Other Roleplay

Kobold Asylum's RP declined for failing to meet section requirements. This section is for running self-made RPs; this is not the place for the sort of thing you're proposing.

Lounge Threads

Menasay's, Strikit's, Royal's, and ChrisTom's OOC threads approved.

Dabutcha's OOC thread declined because the main thread was.

NeoRyu's thread declined for being in the wrong place. RP submissions go in their respective subsections. Before you submit this in pokémon roleplay, though, fair warning: you'll need to expand on your plot beyond 'this is a generic journey roleplay' quite a bit if you want it approved.
 
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April 2nd

Pokémon Roleplay

Feign's, eeveelution's, Dimenticato's, 雷影 イチロ's, pikakip's, and Deoxys55's RPs approved.

Dabutcha's RP declined for the same reasons as last time. Submitting the same thing again later on is not going to change the verdict.

DeluxeSilver's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. One sentence does not a plot make. Let's see a bit more effort on your part.

インフェルノの津波's RP declined for duplicate(s). Don't spam up the submissions with multiples, thank you.

Royal's RP declined for lackings in plot. Basically, all you have here is 'this is OT...except it's also Twilight with legendaries'. Please try to develop your ideas into a coherent whole.

Other Roleplay

DeluxeSilver's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. As said on your submission in PRP; one sentence does not a plot make.

Lounge Threads

perfectmonster's, MasterfulD's, steffyace's, THAT WONDERFUL PIXY GUY!'s, pokemongarnet's, and pikakip's OOC threads approved.

インフェルノの津波's and Royal's OOC threads declined because the main threads were.

Dark Mike's RP declined for being in the wrong place. RPs go in their respective subsections. This being the case, your OOC thread is also declined.
 
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May 1st

Alright, boys and girls, there's a lot of threads to moderate so for the sake of not delaying this any longer I'm only giving out the verdicts on this one. If you want the details, then ask and please include the name of the RP you're asking about when you do.

Pokémon Roleplay

Shadow_Dragon's, Silhouette's, Adâm's, steffyace's, Neo Pikachu's, Legendarian Mistress's, MrGhost's, Izanagi's, Jake♫'s, インフェルノの津波's, and IrishButSober's RPs approved.

mangeo90's, seal's, Data's, Relith's, X75flames's, 雷影 イチロ's, assasinn's, dragonitelover's, daveyp1997's, king wtch's, ~XxSaoshiKazexX~'s, Trainer_Kristoff's, Dark Mike's, and CeFurkan0's threads declined.

Other Roleplay

Rize's RP approved. Editman's and The Magus's RPs declined.

Lounge Threads

steffyace's, Legendarian Mistress's, Jake♫'s, Menasay's, THAT WONDERFUL PIXY GUY!'s, Feign's, Deoxys55's, and 雷影 イチロ's threads approved.

Eathan's, SorakuFett's, assasinn's, TundraCanine's, Charizard_Man's, Shadow_Angel's, Daftendirekt's, The Magus's, and Dark Mike's threads declined.
 
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May 2nd

Pokémon Roleplay

Vociferocity's and EeveeEvolutionChain.'s RPs approved.

123BOOM's seal's RPs declined for lackings in plot. Both of you need to flesh out your ideas and provide more specifics and details if you want your RPs approved.
 
May 3rd

Lounge Threads

Vociferocity's OOC Thread approved.
 
May 5th

Pokémon Roleplay

The Jewel of Life's RP approved.

Other Roleplay

LordSephy's RP approved.

Lounge Threads

seal's thread declined for being in the wrong place. RPs go in the appropriate subsections and OOC threads are only allowed if you have already submitted a main RP thread. If you want feedback beforehand then put your idea in the RP discussion thread.
 
May 6th

Pokémon Roleplay

Nisaku's RP declined for having no plot and no sign-up sheet. Please check the RP section rules and the approved threads to see what is expected of RPs in this section

seal's RP declined for lackings in plot. You've really provided no description at all as to what kind of setting you have, no information on all these numerous kingdoms you alluded to, nothing on how pokémon training works in this setting, or - for that matter - on what these ever-so-important stones do or why they're so important. You're going to have to add a lot more detail if you want your RP approved.
 
May 9th

Pokémon Roleplay

seal's and pokemongarnet's RPs approved.

Lounge Threads

MrGhost's and pokemongarnet's OOC threads approved.
 
May 11th

Lounge Threads

インフェルノの津波's OOC thread approved.
 
May 25th

Pokémon Roleplay

Strikit's, Wolf in the Rain's, Legendarian Mistress's, Kid Ghandi's and X75Flames's RPs approved.

Sprocket's and dajman1996's RPs declined for severe lackings in plot. These are very generic and vague plotlines, and you have provided very little in the way of evidence or general fleshing out to compensate. Let's see a bit more effort here.

Auragaurdian's, Ray Maverick's, WizardsGirl's, and DanMan74's RPs declined for lackings in plot. These nice enough ideas, but they need a bit more polish. Auragaurdian, WizardsGirl, I'd like to see a bit more detail on your plots in terms of setting and player goals. DanMan74, Ray Maverick, both of you are fixating too much on your own characters while offering very little for your fellow RPers to work off. RPing is not a one-man show.

KaraC's RP declined on request.

Other Roleplay

Decodedd's RP approved.

SorakuFett's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. You really have no setting, no plotline, no nothing except 'yeah, this is just like the game', and with a game that relies so much on user design for its own workings...just how precisely are you expecting this to work? For the love of all that is sweet and sugary, let's see some structure here.

Lounge Threads

Wolf in the Rain's and seal's OOC threads approved.

cooldude345's RP declined for being in the wrong place. Please submit your RPs in the appropriate sub-section; the main section is only for OOC threads and discussion topics.
 
May 26th

Pokémon Roleplay

KaraC's RP approved.

Lounge Threads

X75Flames's OOC thread approved.
 
May 27th

Lounge Threads

Kid Ghandi's OOC thread approved. cobraman228's RP declined for being in the wrong place. The lounge is for OOC and discussion only; RPs go in their respective sub-sections.
 
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