[33] NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO roflz that is NOT Allelujah Haptism. DDD: 'Tis Setsuna F. Seiei, resident Gundam freak, while Allelujah is much sexier and is a Marie freak.
Anyway, that's kind of an old tag, so I won't comment too far into it, but basically I really don't like the smudgework. xD; Feels kinda... all over the place.
[41] Is easily one of my favorites- I love the colors and the effects, they all fit really well. I don't usually mention flow, since I think it's kind of a take and give sort of effect, but I think this tag would do well with a little more flow- a little less blur. Like, that seems to be one major thing in all your graphics- there's way too much blur- and it's really unnatural blurring too.
Like, it doesn't make any depth, it's just there, on the very top like you added an applied image and just blurred the edges. I'd suggest blurring certain layers, rather than every single effect- it makes much more sense in terms of how the human eye actually works, and how depth varies in sharpness from far away, up close, and the middle ground.
And I hope you don't mind me pointing out that some of your focals seem really LQ. D: Like, your DOGS tag [75] is kind of... Like, it'd be awesome otherwise but it just looks like it went through the MS Paint factory on JPEG and BMP save settings. D:
You've definitely improved from the first post though- a lot of your stuff can make me pause when I'm scrolling down the screen, but mostly your more simplistic stuff- like your Hitsugaya Tag [63] which is awesome, though a little awkward in terms of the vectors in front of his arm.
Keep up the good work. :3
Edit: Holy crap it's Vivaa. D:
STOP CHANGING YOUR NAME. xDDDD [/hypocrite]