Cineris Titan Academy

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(I play Fire Emblem too! But I never got round to training my Necromancer. Ewan was so much better as a druid.)

Since they're shadows, they still fit under dark. I'm going to apply for an OOC so this thread doesn't get crowed with Pointless messages like this one!
 
The Kricket: Reserved. We need a few more Guardians and Spys, so Tell your friends!
 
my sister would love this rp too bad she doesn't get her computer back until this weekend
 
Why don't you let her sign up on your comp?
 
she doesn't live with me
 
If you change the necromancy ability to perhaps resurection wouldn't that make it more light? It's only a sugestion but necro does come from the greek word Necros (probably misspelled) or the latin verb neco, necare to kill.

Um also, I'm new to PC and also pokemon roleplays but I wanted to see if this perhaps could be my first and could I reserve Natu.

I'm working on the rest of my info but I posted the closest thing I have to an Rp sample. It's part of a fan-fiction I started before joining PC. If you want I could try writing something more roleplayish and relevant to the RP. Could someone tell me what they think?

A little girl in a green dress with red flowers flourishing across her body and a beautiful lilac flower crown peers over a green verdant hill. She spots three people and shouts "Hey what are you doing here". She obviously is irritated.

The group looks back in dismay. Travis is almost furious and he yelps "What's the little squirt doing here?"

The little girl even more furious overheard their conversation and screams "Well the
"Little Squirt" just happens to be the Verdure City Gym Leader.

Keight shocked exclaims "What how did she every become Gym Leader?"

Travis more calm and nice shouts to the girl"Hey Poaaap how about I challenge you to a Gym battle" (Note her name is Pop but he is holding her name for more than one syllable.)

Pop also calm and more cruelly shouts "No way" and she sticks out her tongue and takes a step backwards but there is nothing for her to step on and she falls down the hill and onto sharp rocks that leaves bruises.

Travis shouts her name real loud in concern and runs towards her and picks her up. A woman runs to him from up the road and she frantically asks Pop "Poppy are you alright?" Travis calmly tells her "It's no use she's unconscious" They take her to a cottage. The cottage is surrounded by flowers that form a rainbow facing away from the house. There are also lakes irrigating and separating the "rainbow" beds.

Pop opens her eyes a few hours later. Travis kneels next to her bed and asks "May I have that Gym battle?" Pop is a little hesitant and the unknown woman walks in and says "Pop did you tell that lie again". Travis is shocked. Pop says "Yes sister, I'm really sorry Aurora… I just…" Miles comes from the same door that Aurora did and says "I thought so, it was a bluff". Miles then continues "Lady Aurora may my friend challenge you to a Gym battle" Travis and Keight are surprised.

Aurora is a little hesitant and then replies "I would but I've lost the title of Gym Leader".

Travis looks at her and then with his bright cheery face says "I'll just challenge the new gym leader"

Aurora then looks at him with a more depressed look and replies "That won't work either".

Pop then props up from her bed. Yeah the new Gym Leader cheats…no I'll never call him a Gym Leader; I'm siding with the resistance.

Travis, Keight and Miles look at Pop with a puzzled look and together say "A resistance?"

"Yes a resistance" answered Aurora. "After the day we believe Team Topaz formed we began getting more and more Team Topaz thugs coming to this city. They began stealing our business and the common man made less and less money, no one cared until Team Topaz began buying store after store closing down all of Verdure City's home-owned businesses and increasing poverty. Citizens have begun moving away from Verdure City and more Team Topaz thugs enter. Now the high positions such as Gym Leader and Mayor are filled with Team Topaz Executives and Admins. Some of the citizens have joined Team Topaz for a better life while those who are too poor to move or either not good enough to join Team Topaz or still believe in what is right have formed a resistance. They have asked me to become their leader "the strongest person still left" or so they say, but I'm not strong enough and I have to take care of Poppy." continued Aurora.

Poppy suddenly energetic shouts "Sis I told you my names Pop and if you're not gonna join the resistance then I'll join by myself." Pop then leaves out the door. Travis just realizing something says "Why is Pop still in Verdure City? She may be young but she is a Pokémon trainer and she has five badges. Shouldn't she get her next badge?" Aurora sighs then replies "Actually Poppy only has four badges; she never had a chance to receive my badge. She challenged the new Gym Leader but like she said he cheats. He uses several tricks and machinery to aid his Pokémon and if you actually manage to win he hands you a bottle cap instead of a badge. And besides she doesn't have enough money to cross the toll bridge to Seraphic Park. At the end of seraphic park there is a forest that leads to a town with a gym." Miles puzzled says "But there isn't a toll bridge on the map". Aurora sighs and replies "They added one".

Suddenly a scream shoots through the door. Aurora horrifically and scared whispers "It's Poppy".
 
If you change the necromancy ability to perhaps resurection wouldn't that make it more light? It's only a sugestion but necro does come from the greek word Necros (probably misspelled) or the latin verb neco, necare to kill.

Um also, I'm new to PC and also pokemon roleplays but I wanted to see if this perhaps could be my first and could I reserve Natu.

I'm working on the rest of my info but I posted the closest thing I have to an Rp sample. It's part of a fan-fiction I started before joining PC. If you want I could try writing something more roleplayish and relevant to the RP. Could someone tell me what they think?

A little girl in a green dress with red flowers flourishing across her body and a beautiful lilac flower crown peers over a green verdant hill. She spots three people and shouts "Hey what are you doing here". She obviously is irritated.

The group looks back in dismay. Travis is almost furious and he yelps "What's the little squirt doing here?"

The little girl even more furious overheard their conversation and screams "Well the
"Little Squirt" just happens to be the Verdure City Gym Leader.

Keight shocked exclaims "What how did she every become Gym Leader?"

Travis more calm and nice shouts to the girl"Hey Poaaap how about I challenge you to a Gym battle" (Note her name is Pop but he is holding her name for more than one syllable.)

Pop also calm and more cruelly shouts "No way" and she sticks out her tongue and takes a step backwards but there is nothing for her to step on and she falls down the hill and onto sharp rocks that leaves bruises.

Travis shouts her name real loud in concern and runs towards her and picks her up. A woman runs to him from up the road and she frantically asks Pop "Poppy are you alright?" Travis calmly tells her "It's no use she's unconscious" They take her to a cottage. The cottage is surrounded by flowers that form a rainbow facing away from the house. There are also lakes irrigating and separating the "rainbow" beds.

Pop opens her eyes a few hours later. Travis kneels next to her bed and asks "May I have that Gym battle?" Pop is a little hesitant and the unknown woman walks in and says "Pop did you tell that lie again". Travis is shocked. Pop says "Yes sister, I'm really sorry Aurora… I just…" Miles comes from the same door that Aurora did and says "I thought so, it was a bluff". Miles then continues "Lady Aurora may my friend challenge you to a Gym battle" Travis and Keight are surprised.

Aurora is a little hesitant and then replies "I would but I've lost the title of Gym Leader".

Travis looks at her and then with his bright cheery face says "I'll just challenge the new gym leader"

Aurora then looks at him with a more depressed look and replies "That won't work either".

Pop then props up from her bed. Yeah the new Gym Leader cheats…no I'll never call him a Gym Leader; I'm siding with the resistance.

Travis, Keight and Miles look at Pop with a puzzled look and together say "A resistance?"

"Yes a resistance" answered Aurora. "After the day we believe Team Topaz formed we began getting more and more Team Topaz thugs coming to this city. They began stealing our business and the common man made less and less money, no one cared until Team Topaz began buying store after store closing down all of Verdure City's home-owned businesses and increasing poverty. Citizens have begun moving away from Verdure City and more Team Topaz thugs enter. Now the high positions such as Gym Leader and Mayor are filled with Team Topaz Executives and Admins. Some of the citizens have joined Team Topaz for a better life while those who are too poor to move or either not good enough to join Team Topaz or still believe in what is right have formed a resistance. They have asked me to become their leader "the strongest person still left" or so they say, but I'm not strong enough and I have to take care of Poppy." continued Aurora.

Poppy suddenly energetic shouts "Sis I told you my names Pop and if you're not gonna join the resistance then I'll join by myself." Pop then leaves out the door. Travis just realizing something says "Why is Pop still in Verdure City? She may be young but she is a Pokémon trainer and she has five badges. Shouldn't she get her next badge?" Aurora sighs then replies "Actually Poppy only has four badges; she never had a chance to receive my badge. She challenged the new Gym Leader but like she said he cheats. He uses several tricks and machinery to aid his Pokémon and if you actually manage to win he hands you a bottle cap instead of a badge. And besides she doesn't have enough money to cross the toll bridge to Seraphic Park. At the end of seraphic park there is a forest that leads to a town with a gym." Miles puzzled says "But there isn't a toll bridge on the map". Aurora sighs and replies "They added one".

Suddenly a scream shoots through the door. Aurora horrifically and scared whispers "It's Poppy".
Ew, so many grammatical errors X_X It's up to Elet, but... I personally don't like it...
 
I'll wait and see what your Sign Ups like. However, You must improve your grammer. I will Reserve you Natu, But I would like to see improvements.
 
I knew the grammer would be my downfall. I always have trouble with grammer. I am a quick learner, so maybe if you can give me a few pointers I can improve. I hope I'm not asking too much. I really just need help with grammer. Nobody ever corrects my grammer, instead they look at the overall appeal. By atempting to join an RP, I knew people would pay attention to the grammer forcing me to improve my grammer. I'm also used to writing scripts for plays and so some of the dialouge may only be used in dialouge. I think I might have misspelled dialouge, sorry. Oh, and I respect all opinions. I love hearing what people have to say. I promise to improve my grammer starting with my profile and maybe a new RP sample with proper grammer.
 
For Grammar, I suggest you a Internet checker, Or possibly if you cant find one, Even Mircosoft Word or something similiar.
 
For Grammar, I suggest you a Internet checker, Or possibly if you cant find one, Even Mircosoft Word or something similiar.
You mean me, right? XD I'm an editor's kid; I'm born with proper grammar. I'm pretty good at reqording things, so I can help if you want ^^

Oh yeah, I'll get a trainer card up soon enough =D
 
Sure, But people dont always have time to go over every single post, especially if the posts arent theirs.
 
My computer doesn't let me put pictures on here for some reason... >.<
 
Upload them on Imageshak or photobucket first. That might help.
 
I'm really sorry, but it only lets me put things in if it's linked, but I can't link it because photobucket isn't working (that's what I meant).
 
I'm really sorry, but it only lets me put things in if it's linked, but I can't link it because photobucket isn't working (that's what I meant).
So wait. It isn't IE that's being screwy? O_O 'Cause every time I tried going there (except when I was on earlier on a different computer; I was still using IE6), the thing would close all my windows.

Try tinypic.com or imageshack.us.

Edit: Speaking of which, my trainer card:

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Sprited on my own, I did :3 I used the colors from the character Cierra is based off of.

And, so I can keep the separate image that I placed on the trainer card:

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Thank you, I've added it to your SU.
 
OOC: Are you still accepting apps? I wanted to ask before I made mine.
 
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