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Codec's Art (Fakemon)

Ombrenus is way too small to give any crit on without seeing a big sprite first.

It looks Ghosty from this angle, though.

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Now, this sprite needs some major work.

The outlines look VERY jagged. They should look soft and smooth, seeing as it's a PILLOW.

The face isn't very imaginative, either. The eyes are essentially straight lines, and it doesn't really seem to have any personality. If you were able to have the eyes half open and blinking, it could be sleepy-looking and look much better.

Shadingwise, it needs some major improvement. The highlight is applied strangely. The light comes from above it, o the top right. As a result, the light should accompany this. Try to make the highlight convex rather than concave, as it will look much better.
 
Codec said:
Thanks for the good feedback -
I was rushing when I made it though -
The OW for ombrenus is a ghost type and is an alternate version of obreflamus!
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what is obreflamus?lol and the ow looks more like an icon
 
Ashtro is way too small... The smallest a modern-style Pokemon sprites should be is around Magnemite or Natu's size. Here's Ashtro compared to some of the smallest R/S/E Pokemon sprites.

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As you can see, it's absolutely tiny. Another problem is the shape; at the bottom of the image I've made two circles, one of which is the same shape as Ashtro. Doesn't the circle on the right look more rounded? To achieve this effect, you should have a bridge made up of at least five pixels between the horizontal and vertical edges, as seen in my circle. If you look closely at the round parts of the sprites above, you'll see that they all have something similar.

You should create a new circle, at least the size of Magnemite's, and move the parts you've drawn onto that. Also, you should try to improve some of your other sprites... I expect to see an improved Shirohaven before you make any other new sprites, yeah?
 
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The ripped house tile was good. Your own house tile does not look much like a house. It is a bit uneven and needs outlining. ShiroHaven is a bit plain. Try adding more colors.
 
9 out of 10
the bad bit was the foot and the pillow and the rest was excellent
 
getting better and better ;) everytime
 
I'm not even sure if I could rate Frydai... I can't tell what it's supposed to be. I think I see a small brown ape-like body, in front of... some sort of lavendar... rock? Smoke?
 
pokekingkian said:
getting better and better ;) everytime
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Thanks dude :)
Chesu said:
I'm not even sure if I could rate Frydai... I can't tell what it's supposed to be. I think I see a small brown ape-like body, in front of... some sort of lavendar... rock? Smoke?
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Um... well... I don't really know What it is either... :S
lol!
 
looks like somehting with a cape and np
 
great shading and coloring but it looks like its just stuck on something lol
BTW you should always know what your fakemon is lol

:t354:TG
 
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