connected worlds ( luckyshipping, franticshipping, Gold+Crystal, Dia+Plaitina)PG-13

[pong08]

Just go to serebii to c my fic.

 

[pong08]

so... ok it's not finished... (sry didn't read the rules... I'll come back with the finished the story.. I'll be working on this one and maybe some other one shots as well.)

 

[Shredder2]

It's good so far. ;) Finish it off whenever you get the chance. :)

 

[pong08]

ok people here's the deal. If you want to see the continued version of this story, it'll be on serebii.net. It's the same title. Go to shipping communities for forums and click on shipping fics(sub-forum). You'll find it there. I'm going to use this website to post short stories, not this epic and long one.

 

[Sydian]

Before I read, I looked at it and screamed. Break that into paragraphs. I have enough eye problems as it is. Hit enter twice when someone new is going to speak.

Now, something that bothers me is that you have six chapters in one post. Six. And they're horrendously short at that.

ok people here's the deal. If you want to see the continued version of this story, it'll be on serebii.net. It's the same title. Go to shipping communities for forums and click on shipping fics(sub-forum). You'll find it there. I'm going to use this website to post short stories, not this epic and long one.

What? -facepalm-

Then why'd you post it here? Ah, nevermind that. I guess I'll take a gander at it there. That is, if it's in paragraphs.

Oh, and leave the font alone. Don't alter it. Just leave it as the forum default font. That's another problem I'm(and other readers) having in reading this.

-Silver

 

[bullno1]

I've search on serebii and there're nothing. Why don't you post on this forum?

 

[Astinus]

Because he hasn't been on this forum in a few months?

At any rate, don't post in threads that are over a month old, and threads that haven't been posted in since 2008 definitely count for that.