Hm, the BF was interesting (Anabel *.*), and I found the Orange Islands interesting for the fact that their gym leaders didn't have the usual fights. Much better, imo. *hides*
Anyway, up to the review, neh?
Titlte: No clue where you got it from. Oo Any hint, plz?
She liked Lucian more than she liked him, yet she lay with him anyway, because he was good enough for her for now.
She was not Cynthia but Hunter J.
...CPF, I am happy to announce that you're the first author to wirte a quadru...eh, quintuple...sextett love story (that doesn't sound right at all Oo) that is funny, interesting and non-confusing at the same time. XD!
My, all of our characters had a more or less serious affair by now, haven't they? XD!
"You're not quite as good as Cynthia, but I doubt anyone is."
That's what YOU
and CPF think.
"Then kill Lucian," Cyrus replied.
"But I love him," J responded.
"How can you love someone you kissed once?" Cyrus demanded.
"Oh, all right, I'll kill him," J said.
Lol, omg, omg...*shakes head* Twists all over the place.
"You love cruel women, don't you?" J asked.
"How did you know that?" Cyrus asked.
Good guessing?
"Let's just say I'm more like your Cynthia than you think," J replied.
Hm....hm.....*glances over to her story* ....hm....
Cyrus kept telling her something about the fact that no human being could withstand Dialga's powers if they even attempted to use the orb, so that was proof right then and there that Cynthia could not have used it.
*giggles* Oh, the dumbness! XD
She was merely the 10th of the 26, hence her nickname, the tenth letter of the alphabet.
Oh! *lightbulb* Not too bad, heh, more creative than me anyway. (And you say you're a bad writer? >>)
Her real name was a mystery to all,
Does she know her own name? Oo
She was just a letter, anyway.
... a letter with a title in front of it. *nods*
Hunter J.
trying to become the richest human being in the world.
Sadly, that position is now held by Cynthia, obviously.
And if she dies, Roy... and if he dies? Oo Her grandparents? lol
"Excuse me, but that was not proper," Lucian said,
...o,o *cracks up* Excuse me, that was not propor...LOL!!!!
"Oh no," he said.
"Oh yes," J replied.
Omg, male damsel in distress...this gets funnier and funnier. XD!
"My Pokémon Umbreon did that for me."
She has an Umbreon?!
"Why have you not died?" Cynthia asked. "My powers are absolute!"
In the background, P*A starts to throw a secret party.
This was no way to die… or perhaps this was the only way to die.
Nope, this is
not the way to die for Lucian.
"Three… two… one," J counted. Then she squeezed the trigger.
BANG!
Suspense!!! XD
And with that, I'll leave you for the moment. Next part- other club. 0=)