Cynthia/Shirona Fanclub

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Maybe you should have waited until tomorrow to review... I would have been patient enough... but very important chapter there. Cynthia gets everything she wants, save for Sabrina's death, perhaps. Then we've got Roxanne and her crazy little plan to save the world. Let it be known that Giselle does not like Roxanne. They're very similar to each other, yet Giselle absolutely hates her. More to come on that...
 
Meh, I tried my best, I didn't want to make you wait any longer, but this headache is really annoying. x.x
Only a matter of time till she gets Sabrina's death if nothing happens. Cynthia doesn't even have to kill her herself. Cynthia is now immortal, Sabrina isn't and such, one day, life will end for Sabrina, but not for Cynthia. Though that might not give her as much satisfaction as a real killing would.
XD! I kinda noticed that. Hm, why don't you open a Giselle fanclub, btw? =3
 
Because no one else would join a club for a one-shot character... I'm her only fan.

Well, you said you liked the idea of Cynthia's eternal youth... so as much as I'd like to change it, I'll let you handle the situation. On another topic, I'm not so sure Cynthia should be as... um, humble as she is in this next chapter. Oh, and two relationships might be broken up over one kiss. I may or may not post it depending on whether you want to read it or not tomorrow.
 
You can always try. Maybe there's a hardcore fan like, well, us. XD

Thanks, really. =3 I want to handle this situation, heheh. I even have a GREAT idea what to do with it, oh, yes. =3
I doubt both relationship might be broken, Sabrina is not THAT jealous (not to mention idiotic), is she? >> Will had no other choice.
Ah, anyway, review time. =3
It's my birthday today
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Heheh, we remember something! And even a date! XD (j/k) And...poor Lucian. ;.;
Cynthia felt a bit taken aback. Lucian was actually standing up to her?
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And that's *so* surprising?>>
"You love me so much that you'll torture me, put me in great pain, embarrass me, use me as your footstool, force me to suffer, kiss other men… oh, just kill me!" Lucian screamed.
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*nods* Exactly, exactly.
"You're so sorry that you'll do it again, as soon as you've finished getting what you want out of me!" Lucian yelled.
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Dito. Exactly as it happens each time.
"You are my king, Lucian," Cynthia said. "I shall do whatever you please."

"But Queen Cynthia…" Lucian replied. "You are my queen. I shall do whatever you please."
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quite the...confusing situation with who has to bow to who and who rules who and...bananas. Yes. XD
"I even tell you this: even though I may live forever, I will not. I promise you, Lucian, that if you ever die, I will immediately commit suicide."
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Oh, this is something I'll have to handle. =3 And *how* I'll handle it...oh, sweet.
"Roy will be our little prince," Cynthia said, looking over at her sleeping infant.
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0=3 He will be. He surely will be. But...will this be enough for little Roy?
"My vision is very poor," Lucian told her. "I could not even see you clearly even if you pressed your face right up against mine."
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I can feel your pain, my vision is bad, too. >.<
I'll miss bowing down to you, though," Lucian replied.
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...he will miss bowing to her...ouch.
Theoretically, this sentence belongs into the other club, but meh, I forgot. >>
He just had to see Sabrina again… even if it meant her imminent death.
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Now...is Will just stupid or what?!?! I mean, he risked his life (going to Cynthia's castle) for her, he kissed another woman for her, and now he's going to let her out just to confess something to her that WILL break Sabrina's heart, no matter how much of a choice Will had, and to get her *KILLED*?!?! HELLO?!?!?! Argh, stupid boy, very stupid boy. >.<
 
I can't wait to see how you handle that... you know, my fic is just a little sideshow before the main event comes 18 years later. Cynthia (maybe) will still be a young woman while everyone else has grown older.

But what's most important about this chapter is, well, that Cynthia still loves Lucian. And she proved it to him, she did something you probably thought she'd never do, bow to him. She really does love him, and this chapter at least shows some of her humanity.

Meanwhile, Will's going to make a move that could cost him... a lot.
 
I won't give you any hint of how I'll handle it....any hint would give away too much.
I can't just say if this will really be as epic as you wish for. >.< I have some ideas on how to make the battle epic, but the story itself... I mean
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She bowed to him? My, my, I have even overread that. >.< Blame it on my headache. But heck, yes, finally Cynthia bowed to someone. Even if it was just Lucian, it's a first.
Let's hope this small piece of humanity stays longer than the other times. >>

I fear I have again to fear for Sabrina's life...and her and Will's love. >>
 
Don't worry, I've already planned on the reasons why Cynthia wouldn't be able to take over the world a second time. That will all fall into place as the story concludes.

In the upcoming chapters, it will be a certain woman against Cynthia... choose sides wisely!

Amazing Cynthia cosplayers here!
 
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*smiles evily* And I have planned out reasons why Cynthia's never aging might get her into real, real trouble...though, it still matters what kind of powers she still has at the end of The Return of the Queen, so...my plot is still hanging in the air, so to say. XD!

...I will, once I see this woman.
Hm, choose your sides wisely...why does this remind me so much of The Golden Prince? Nah, not spoilering anything...0=)

Omg, omg, omg...o,o I'm jealous now. o,o These girls have so nice coats. I want to have one, too. *Then* I would always cosplay Cynthia. ^.^ (Like I said, though, without the wig. XD Now I wish I were natural blond...ehm...nevermind.)
 
Awesome, I love these ideas you have. Of course, it all depends on how the story finishes up, doesn't it?

You haven't guessed the woman yet? I'm amazed.

Those girls are just amazing Cynthia cosplayers, or Shirona cosplayers, to be more accurate. Apparently the Japanese have more passion for Pokemon cosplaying than others... hmmm, I wonder if I can find Lucian/Goyou cosplayers there...
 
^^ Thanks. Of course it depends on your end, that's for sure, but like I said, there are a lot of things in my story I can change. On the other hand, there are a lot of details you could destroy without even knowing. >.<
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I have too many options, so I didn't dare to guess. =3

I have never seen this page, but yes, I was amazed at these cosplayers. o,o It's a rarity here if you even see an Ash or Misty cosplayer, but...I guess no one would recognise me if I cosplayed as Cynthia, except for the real Pokemon fans.
*pokes* And while you're at it, search for some Sabrina/Natsume cosplayers! >3
 
The end battle? You're thinking that far ahead? I'm not even sure how the end battle to my story will go.

I'll search for them... I really doubt we'd find any Will cosplayers, that's for sure.
 
Let's hope that Cynthia gets beaten and Sabrina survives. >>
...CPF, I have planned out everything till the epilogue, and heck, even behind the epilogue! XD Though I'm not sure in what form I'll write about this...of course, it will involve the future of my future characters (that sounds...weird. Oo), yet, it will certainly be no story in itself, just an extended epilogue, I guess.
After all, I have said that there will be a tournament, and that will obviously take place after the main story. ^.~

Well, we had Lucian cosplayers (okay, Japanese PC cosplayer >>), so, maybe miracles can happen. 0=)
And in the end, we could always force Zammy to cosplay as Will.
 
Wow, I'm amazed... you have great foresight, much better than mine. I simply go from chapter to chapter, it's way too hard for me to think too far ahead. Though I have a pretty good idea how it's going to end...

There were a couple of Lucian cosplayers on that site, as well as a Sabrina cosplayer (in Rocket uniform). I haven't checked for Will yet.
 
Meh, it has something to do with the style of writing you take. I like to 'fore-see', as you put it, because it gives me the ability to put in many hints and put them whereever I want to (okay, maybe not everywhere, but nearly everywhere). Once the next chapters of 'Spring's Revenge' have been posted, you'll see what I mean. So far, all parts of Cynthia's plan have been hinted, and even her motivations. 0=) But revealed...well, they'll be revealed later.

...let's hope it *is* a good idea...for both of us.

Lucian and Sabrina cosplayers? =3 Links please (Sabrina cosplayer in respective club, btw XD)
 
Those are the signs that you're a better writer than me... I am far too spontaneous, and my ideas change too much over time. There are times where I'll throw in hints beforehand, but mostly I'm just living from chapter to chapter.

Try looking here for Lucian cosplayers. There are a couple of them there.
 
Come on, I'm not really the better writer. I lack the creativity to write five parts of my story, heck, I have no idea how to formulate a plot for the next part of my current fic, aka, the summer one, and so far, all of my fic had a similar plot. >.< Even "Discovering..." was similar to Winter's Love/Spring's Revenge in little details...I just cannot come up with something new, innovative...>.<. I mean, I had to 'steal' your Cynthia, otherwise, mine would have no character at all. XD!
Yet mine isn't *that* insane...

*.* Oh, sweet, sweet! I love the last one on that page! His hair is gorgeous! And the glasses! Eep! I might even start to like my glasses, well, I might start to like them if I had glasses like this cosplayer has. ^.^
 
I greatly appreciate your stealing of my Cynthia, that just makes her so much more awesome.

I think it would be fun to cosplay as Lucian... provided at least one person knew who I was...
 
(PC is driving me crazy- it really is. >>)

^.^ Just wait and see, my Cynthia won't be as evil as yours, but she'll have a wicked plan.

There is one person who would recognise you- me. ^-^

My mind is still scarred from the sight of your bowing before me…
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...yes, mine is as well, but for reasons completely different....
"Yes, and she will remain that way," Cynthia replied. "For now."

"Why?
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Because one reader would boycott the story of that happened.
For I have done great harm to her relationship with her husband,
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Indeed, you have. Yet, just wait and see what your son will do to them...
"Then, when she finally feels at peace, I'll just snap my fingers" – she snapped her fingers – "and she will die."

"Oh, Queen Cynthia, you are cruel," Lucian stated.

"Thank you, Lucian," Cynthia replied.
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...take this as a 'no comment'.
 
No comment because you don't like Cynthia being so cruel, or no comment because you don't want Sabrina to die, or both? Lucian loves her cruelty, moreover, Cynthia takes it as a compliment that he calls her cruel. That's just another part of the beauty of Cynthia's character.
 
No comment because I find it so sickinly amusing that Cynthia *thanks* him for being called cruel. It fits your Cynthia so much, yet it is unbelievable funny and cruel. And I haven't even started how cruel the thought of Sabrina dying is...have you never imagined how you would feel if someone killed your beloved Cynthia and/or teased you with the possibillity? >>
 
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