Darkrai: Ghost of Sinnoh

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    • Seen Mar 19, 2010
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    "DANIEL!!!! WAKE UP!!!!!!"

    No need for all the capitals and overuse of exclamation marks, just use one.

    Also, Dialga is time, Palkia is space.

    Overall its good so far but I am getting rather sick of Darkrai stories.
     
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    I think the reason everyone is making Darkrai stories is because its an easy legendary to wrap a story around. But who cares right? so far so good for a beginner ;)


    and one more thing, how could someone be late for lunch? i mean unless it is school but seriously? i eat lunch around 2:00 pm or later or earlier. but no one is ever late for lunch, but whatever floats your boat
     
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