David's Pokemon Adventure

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Dude this is terrible. I have no idea whats going on. Make sure the panels arent so giant unless your going to put more in it then just 3 people and some pokeballs.
Also the backgrounds are just grass. That isnt good. Improove storyline and visuals and everything.
Dont say that im putting you down or something im trying to help you improove a lackluster comic.
 
An apologize

Well, this is the first time I become as a member of the Pokemon fansite (sorry about my bad English REALLY SORRY). I don't have a guide to show me what to do anyway.
May be the next time I should try another way...Or someone who's really nice can help me huh?
 
Duplica pink said:
Well, this is the first time I become as a member of the Pokemon fansite (sorry about my bad English REALLY SORRY). I don't have a guide to show me what to do anyway.
May be the next time I should try another way...Or someone who's really nice can help me huh?
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That's cool that you're new and all, but people like you (Newbies) post in the Welcome Thread and don't spam up the comics.
Welcome Thread: https://www.theud.com/pokecommunity/forumdisplay.php?f=35
Ciao!
 
Sorry, but it's not that good. It's not very original either.
 
kinda

it's kinda good but hard to read change the font and everyone else give him a break its his first
 
Hey this would make a good tutorial subject. How not to make comics?

Better luck next time...
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On average the pannels are to big the sprites are meshed png please and oh whats with oak standing in the middle of a empty field that looks like it was eaten then spat out.
 
ARghhh This is *edited out* maaan Imortal pokemon and no-Everything...i woud not give you another chance! im mad at you!!!
 
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Okay people, this is getting a bit nasty. Please try and consider the artist's feelings when critting a piece. There's no need to use words like that, Dooomy. One of our rules here at PC is to respect all members, and by using those sort of terms you're only offending them.

--FG
 
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