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DBZ comic

Logmon1

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    • Ya I'm going for trying to make them funny and still sureus. And have them make scins.
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    Your Mom
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    • Spelling really, really needs more work. I know that english might be your second language, but it really does need more work. From your Cooler summoning Porunga...

    Porunga- Who has summoned me? State your wish! Or else!

    Cooler- I wish I had power! Ultimate power!

    Porunga- So it is wished it shall be

    You really have to improve. Your spellings are still readable, so you know what the word means, but it really needs improving if you want readers other than SWPA and me was really wants to see any improvements.
     

    Logmon1

    The one of many...
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    • He's Godzilla! Dose he ever apper out of somewhere? Ok people I'm out of ideas and taking sugestins.
     
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