DKG's Spriting talent (if i have any :P)

558122_DG

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    Hello, I've been spriting for about 2 weeks now. And i've been rom hacking for 2 months. Please be considerate when giving criticism. I'm still beginning thnx :)

    Fakemon:

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    OW:
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    Tiles:
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    Ok I'm still working on the little tree (fixing it up). Expect more from me. Oh and all of those above are 100%scratched. (except the OWs, I kinda scratched/spliced on those :P)
     
    Heey DKG! Nice Sprites and Tiles. Only one thing, you should add more shading to your fakemon. That looks much better ;) Keep it up ! x3

    Gigatom~
     
    sure thnx :)

    Yea, still trying to master shading :P
     
    Professor W. said:
    Wow, these are great! You've really only been spriting for 2 weeks? The only real problem I see is that the tail of the second Fakemon is to erect. Other than that, these are practically flawless. Keep up the good work!

    ~Professor W.
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    your too kind :P

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    Update on the OW, hair is spikier kinda now :)
     
    any more comments?

    well i have a few new things :D

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    this is my second attempt at trainer spriting :D
    my first is not worth posting


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    another fakemon that lack proper shading :(
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    Ok i might change the head on this one :/

    9/16 colours used btw.

    More comments/critisim = More effort in work/ better (hopefully)
     
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    unbelievable T_T. No more updates till i recieve some crit besides this:

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    Pick your favourite.
     
    I like the first one more, it looks more like a battle sprite. Shading still needs work, though.
     
    K, Everyone likes the first one :P

    Ok, I'm gonna check out a shading tut :)

    *hint*pro spriters make a shading tut*hint*
     
    558122_DG said:
    yea, kk. I donno what to make next :/
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    Perhaps you should make some more Fakemon. My advice for Fakemon is to think out-of-the-box so your designs can be noticed. Try relating it to actual animals and/or plants. For instance, I'm pretty sure nobody has thought of a Viperfish Fakemon yet *winks*.

    ~Professor W.
     
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    Is this tadpole fakemon any good :)

    I think I'm slowly getting the hang of shading :D
    Also I made this for someone else so no stealing k?
     
    ed00001 said:
    Wow, these are great! I'm pretty good at scratch spriting myself!
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    Thanks :D
    I'll prolly make an evo for it so it doesn't look pathetic like dusparce.
    Ummm any comments on the shading? is there improvement?
    And for some reason I can't splice for beans or fusion sprite for that matter :P
     
    Dhjona said:
    some of your lines in your tadpole aren't smoothly, to sharp-edged. shading looks ok.
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    yea I noticed :/
    But when I try fixing it, it takes away from the whole long thin and curvy look :/
    If someone can fix it up and show me how its done that'd be great :D
    I won't tkae ur sprite fix if u do decide to redo it, I just wanna see how it looks like.

    On the lighter note, I scratched a bird preevo :D
    Hope u like it (it's supposed to be cute XD)

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    the one i'm using is pose 1, but pose 2 is just there :/
     
    558122_DG said:
    yea I noticed :/
    But when I try fixing it, it takes away from the whole long thin and curvy look :/
    If someone can fix it up and show me how its done that'd be great :D
    I won't tkae ur sprite fix if u do decide to redo it, I just wanna see how it looks like.

    On the lighter note, I scratched a bird preevo :D
    Hope u like it (it's supposed to be cute XD)

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    the one i'm using is pose 1, but pose 2 is just there :/
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    Well, i fixed up your sharp-edged lines. ;)
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    On the left side you see your sprite and among them you see, in red, how the line supposed to be. On the right you see the result and a explanation of how I did the lines and how it's supposed to be (the red lines, are your lines, which aren't right. And the green ones are the right way to make that line.) ;)

    Your bird indeed, is cute, but to front and to simple. And has sharp-edged lines (maybe you intended it that way, if so, I appologize). ^^
     
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