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Dumb Luck

Lokhlan

Lokhlan

Formerly "Tendo"
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    Alright, I've finally finished the comic I've been working on for the past couple of days... Tell me what you think.

    Dumb Luck
     
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    As I said before, it was funny. I loved the laughing and screaming, reminds me of an old cartoon. XD
     
    LOL!!that's funny!!! good comic!!
     
    why do you people always suck up to admin or mod comics?...it was average...issue 2 was better and I sorta liked the ending...although you could've done so much more with it...some of the frames were completely pointless..and repetative...so I only give it around a 4-5
     
    The problem with this comic is that it's little more than a predictable visual gag. Honestly, it's not like I didn't imagine Mario would hit Bowser from early on. It just doesn't have much to offer, especially for a two part comic.
     
    i liked it i gues 8/10(my message is to short the message is to short yup to short)
     
    vaati said:
    why do you people always suck up to admin or mod comics?
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    Maybe they did actually think it was somewhat funny. =P

    Allstories said:
    The problem with this comic is that it's little more than a predictable visual gag. Honestly, it's not like I didn't imagine Mario would hit Bowser from early on. It just doesn't have much to offer, especially for a two part comic.
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    I wasn't really trying to make it OMFG funny, I was merely trying to make a innocent little comic showing off my limited ability in making comics. Part 1 was only there to show people why Mario is falling from the ceiling. And actually, I probably shouldn't have made it into two parts because it gives off the idea that it's a bigger comic than what it really is. The only reason I did that was because having it split like that made it load quicker when I uploaded them to filestash.

    Edit: Done, it's been combined.
    Dumb Luck
     
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    It's funny, and very well put together I think...
     
    tendo:they probally did...I wasnt just refering to this thread...any admin or mod comic gets almost perfect scores and repetative kiss *** comments
     
    Since when? I've never seen any admin comics & the last mod comic posted before this one was on April 26th 2005 by Jeremy.

    Let?s just say for a moment that everyone who gives out good comments to mods are kissing butt, why does it bother you? Is it really so bad that you have to vent in someone?s comic thread? I wouldn't think so.

    Also, do we really know their kissing butt? It's certainly possible they're being honest right? Frankly, from what I've seen, the very same people giving "kiss butt" comments to mods are giving the same comments in EVERYONE?S comic threads. So in the future, ignore them...
     
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    ok I will...it's the same everywhere though...but I;m not gonna rant on and get in trouble
     
    Almost every remotely tolerable comic on this board gets extremely high praise. It's not just the mod's comics.
     
    also true...people need to be tougher critics...but not flame people @ the same time...take allstories here as an example...his crit is always hair and normally helpfull
     
    Haha, I wouldn't say I'm the best example, and after all, this is a Pok?mon board, densely populated by youngsters who often want to just post their latest creations, and as such I don't think people should feel obligated to be harsh or anything of that nature. I do however think it would be nice if more people were willing to accept criticism when it's presented. The difference between criticism and flaming is that criticism exists so that people can learn from it. Flaming just exists to put people down. Often, though, people are unable to differenciate between the two.
     
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