Eternal Nightmare's anime drawings :D

[Eternal Nightmare]

Hey guys. If some of you know me then you should know I'm a huge fan of anime and sort of a manga-ka. Here I have some pictures I drew and I'm interested in what you guys have to say. Constructive criticism is always welcomed n_n. Anyway, please enjoy my drawings :3.

Spoiler:

This is my second main female character, Hazuki Asaka. If your interested Id be more that happy to share her bio.

My main female character Abe Akiyama. Ahh-beh or Ahh-bee noy Ah-ba like ABraham. She's an angel and remember just tell me if you want her bio x3

He is not a main character but just a pic I drew for a friend upon request.

That's about it...for now that is n_n. Tell me what you think ;D.

 

[BerserkerKing]

Wow all three look great. As far as constructive criticism goes I have a couple tips you might want to consider:

I noticed on you first drawing that there is a line discontinuity on the hair, personally I suggest using fluent confident strokes that show continuation, it makes the drawing look real nice.
I also suggest avoiding tangents on your lines to create more depth.

These are tips that work for me, I'm not claiming to be an expert but I'd like you to improve. ^^