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ex: Dark Chronicles

Syousuke

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    [PokeCommunity.com] ex: Dark Chronicles


    I'am no longer retired.

    This is my new set! Some of the art will be mine, but most won't be.

    This set is based on 3 chronological timelines(chronicles) among Pokemon history.

    001-015 - Chronicle 1: Rise of Darkness (2/15)
    016-030 - Chronicle 2: Harbringers of Good & Evil (0/14)
    031-40 - Chronicle 3: Shards of Destiny (0/9)
    Total - 40 Cards

    I'am currently working on Chronicle 1 (Obviously)

    Card List (Last updated 27/1/06 ~ Added Dark Lugia!
    Rise of Darkness
    001- Mewtwo
    002 - Deoxys
    003 - Dark Lugia

    Enjoy!
     
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    Nice card Syosuke!

    Art: 10/10 It's very well done and the holo effect is perfect. (Where did you get that pic?)
    Attacks: 10/10 nothing's wrong with them.
    Placement: I think it's just perfect, not a single wrong placement!

    Final Rating: 10/10!
    Keep up the good work.


    ELGONZO!!!

    PS: I really loved your Judas cards!
     
    nice mewtwo
    but the picture doesn't go with it
    but i do like it
     
    Thanks for the comments, Multeon and Blennix! I appreciate it!

    The next one will be up soon!

    @Multeon, Thanks for the comment on the Judas cards!

    Edit: Its here!

    Its Deoxys! (Look at the excellent art!)
    You can also find the links to these cards in the first post.

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    Mewtwo~
    Art - 10/10. Okay, I give up. I'll give you 100% because I am your friend. Nah, I am giving you 100% because that is really kick arse artwork there. Suits perfectly.
    Wording - 9/10. No wording conflicts, alignment is good. Although I do think there is a font issue. Gill Sans Size 10 - 17..Looks like Futura LT Medium to me, although I might be hallucinating again! lolwtf (Joking kiddies.) EDIT: I believe the width should be 96% and not at 100% or whatever it is on.
    Creatvitiy - 10/10. Completely original. I applaud you.

    Final Rating - 29/30.
    Woohoo Syousuke! You go g- I mean you rock!

    oops, forgot to rate Deoxys. :P *GIGGLES LIKE CHO CHANG*

    Deoxys~
    Art - 10/10. Absolutely awesome. Effect matches the blank in the art. Very sexually appealing.
    Wording - 9/10. No issues apart from the one I mentioned with Mewtwo. Just a graphical error with the width of the font.
    Creatvitiy - 10/10 Lovely name for the attack, seems so..condemning. Well, the Power is good too, so you earn top marks. ^-^

    Final Rating - 29/30.
    Woohoo again Syousuke! Congratulations Fak?R?turn??!

    Absolutely Final Verdict - 58/60. Hurray etc etc etc.

    Goodnight!
     
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    Thanks Roffle! I love your reviews! Too bad I never fnd the time to do stuff like that!

    And the wording! I know! Mines on 99%! I think 96 looked a bit skinny (refer to Judas EX) so I changed it a bit! Lol! Its Humanst! Not Futura! I'am not retarded!

    Thanks for your comments, once again!

    The next card, Dark Lugia, will be up very soon!

    EDIT: Dark Lugia is up!
    Pheer my custom blank skills! I turned Fangkings TRR style dark stage 1 blanks into Basic blanks!

    Well here it is! I hope you all like it!

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    Welcome back to faking!

    Mewtwo - 9/10 - The holosheet bugs me
    Deoxys - 9/10 - The holosheet bugs me
    Dark Lugia - 9/10 The holosheet bu...well you know :P

    I think the cards look awesome I just have a problem with the holosheet. Nice work.
     
    @LoverOfLatios, its the Light energy. Fangking created it.

    @King Shuckle, thanks for your comments! I really dont know whats wrong about the holosheet, but yeah!
     
    Okay, Dark Lugia is possibly one of the most kickarse PKMN ever. Really, I might devote on of my EX sets to a complete Dark-mutant EX set. Anyway.

    Dark Lugia~
    Art - 10/10, looks fantastic. Appealing and blends with the whole concept image.
    Wording - 8/10, argh bugger. Placement issues with the attacks, damage. Few pixels up and the damage text reminds me of the Neo generation. Bit smaller I think, like size 18 might be right. Can't exactly remember sorry.
    Creatvitiy - 10/10, awesome original ideas. Congratulations.

    Final Score - 28/30.

    "Yup yup yup." ~ Ducky.
     
    Hey Roffle! Did you do anything about that PM I sent you?

    Wording? Oh no! I must've done some big mistake, huh?

    Thanks for your suggestions, comments and fixes, Roffle!
     
    Oh no! I missed it. I shall check it out now. *GIGGLES LIKE HERMIONE GRANGER*

    Yah. The attacks and effects and stuff seem to be a bit too low. Bring it up so the attack name is half way across the opacity-affected circle in the card and put it so that it has equal length.*

    *If you have no effing idea what I'm saying. Check out Fangking Omega's Tutorial that is a PDF (PDF I SAY A PDF!! CACKLE!) and check out the placement arena section thingymabob.

    It is an honour and a silent org..I mean thrill to review your cards. :) But mostly a "thrill." :P ;)

    Checkitoutnowcheckittrailerparkgirlsroundtheoutside.

    Toodaloo.
     
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