[Pokémon] Four Journeys

Chapter 19
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Chapter 20
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Chapter 21
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Chapter 22
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Chapter 23
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Chapter 24
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Chapter 25
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Chapter 26
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Chapter 27
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Chapter 28
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Chapter 1- Review
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Summary:
֎ Overall the story seemed to make mostly logical sense, however, my question about Oak's memory is still important in regard to canon.
֎ Grammatically, as it went on the grammar mistakes were more or less far and few between, however, I would check through your semi-colon and conjunctive usage.
֎ Plot wise, the story is so far reasonably true to canon/parallel in regards to the anime, with some extended sections, which does add to the overall interest created in the text.

֎ In regards to new paragraphs, I would add an extra space between each, as it currently is quite hard to detect when a new paragraph has been started.
 
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Chapter 28- Review

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Although there also a bit different.
Should be "they're"
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even though according to our records they haven't known each other very well
This sentence comes across quite awkwardly. I would reword it.

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going on there."
Should be "going on there?"


Summary:
֎ Overall the short interaction between the characters
֎ Some grammar mistakes, particularly with shortened words.
֎ Logic wise, everything made sense and functioned.
 
Chapter 29
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Chapter 30
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Chapter 31
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Chapter 32
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Chapter 33
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Chapter 34
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Chapter 35
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Chapter 36
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