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[Sora_8920]

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Intro:

Ok, I was looking for a battle with Ambient. He told me we could have our match on Shoddy Battle Wednesday, however, I got lucky and we managed to sort a battle today. Hence, leading to this battle log. So, that's a wrap for my intro. D: Now on for our team line-ups:

My team line up: "image removed" "image removed" *pokemonelite2000 image removed* "image removed" "image removed" *pokemonelite2000 image removed*

Ambient's team: "image removed" "image removed" *pokemonelite2000 image removed* *pokemonelite2000 image removed* *pokemonelite2000 image removed* "image removed"

Ok, that ends the "2nd introduction," as I would like to call it, since it shows a bit a bit about our pokemon likings. :P

Now, on with the ZOMG, I swept a kid wit teh Gachomp! err... battle. lawl

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Evasion Clause,
Freeze Clause,
OHKO Clause,
Sleep Clause,
Timed Battle.

Ambient sent out Gengar.
Itachi 2008 sent out Starmie.
Itachi 2008 switched in Blissey.
Gengar used a hypnotic trance. (Hypnosis)
Blissey fell asleep! Mm, kind of predicted this, but I had to keep him since he has Natural Cure... So, it wasn't really much of a loss, anyway...
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Ambient switched in Gliscor
Itachi 2008 switched in Froslass.
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Froslass used a chilly beam. (Ice Beam)
It's super effective!
Gliscor lost 230% of its health.
Ambient's Gliscor fainted.
Froslass's

made it lose 10% of it's health. Thought he was switched... but meh. More of a win for me. 6-5.
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Ambient switched in Metagross.

Metagross used Trying to outrun me? (Pursuit)
It's super effective!
Froslass lost 152% of its health.
Itachi 2008's Froslass fainted. Yup, I saw this coming kind of, but there was nothing I could do but stay in... 5-5
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Itachi 2008 switched in Garchomp.
Ambient switched in Gengar.
Gengar makes ground moves miss with Levitate!
Garchomp. used a tremor. (Earthquake)
Garchomp's attack missed! Yeah, I told him in this match, I should've fire Fang, since I predicted it at the last moment... But there was nothing I could do about it...
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Itachi 2008 switched in Blissey
Gengar used a hypnotic trance...
Blissey fell asleep! Again, Natural Cure ftw.
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Ambient switched in Snorlax.
Itachi 2008 switched in Zapdos.
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
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Ambient switched in Metagross.
Itachi 2008 switched in Garchomp. Yup, I predicted a switch...
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Itachi 2008:
Ambient switched in Gengar.
Garchomp used The dance of swords... (Swords Dance.)
Garchomp's attack was sharply raised. Oh, yeah, baby. On the next part, I thought he had HP Ice...
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Gengar used a ball of shadows. (Shadow Ball)
Garchomp lost 62% of its health.
Garchomp's special defence was lowered.
Gengar lost 10% of it's health due to Life Orb...
Garchomp used I'm mad. (Outrage)
Garchomp went on a rampage!
Gengar lost 360% of its health.
Ambient's Gengar fainted.
Garchomp lost 10% of its health due to Life Orb. But it turns out he didn't. =/
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Ambient switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
Garchomp used I'm mad.
It's not very effective...
Metagross lost 67% of its health.
Garchomp lost 10% of its health.
Metagross used trying to outran me?
A critical hit!
Specschomp lost 51% of its health.
Itachi 2008's Garchomp fainted. I was trapped due to Outrage's effect, should've used Fire Fang, again... T.T Well, I think it was irrelevant hax, but w/e.
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Itachi 2008 switched in Swampert.
Ambient switched in Salamence.
Salamence's intimidate cut Swampert's attack.
Swampert used a tremor.
It doesn't affect Salamence... That was predictable... but I fell for it. :P
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Salamence used Draco Meteor.
Swampert lost 87% of its health.
Salamence's special attack was harshly lowered.
Salamence lost 10% of its health due to a Life threatening Orb.
Swampert used Ice Beam.
It's super effective!
Salamence lost 110% of its health.
Ambient's Salamence fainted.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert's apple restored 6% of its health. Yay, I won the battle due to whatever reason.
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Ambient switched in Snorlax.
Itachi 2008 switched in Blissey.
Snorlax used a mighty bite. (Crunch)
Blissey lost 20% of its health.
Blissey's defence was lowered.
Blissey's apple restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health. Mm, Defense lowered is bad... Switch time.
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Itachi 2008 switched in Zapdos.
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
Snorlax used a sumo wrestling move. (Body Slam)
Zapdos lost 34% of its health.
Zapdos's apple restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health. Yeah, as you can see, I have no lax counter.
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Ambient switched in Vaporeon.
Zapdos used a bolt of thunder. (Thunderbolt)
It's super effective!
Vaporeon lost 66% of its health.
Zapdos's apple restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.
Vaporeon's lapple restored its health a little!
Vaporeon restored 6% of its health. I get lucky a tad, though, as he switches out.
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Zapdos used a bolt of thunder.
It's super effective!
Vaporeon lost 58% of its health.
Ambient's Vaporeon fainted.
Zapdos's apple restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health. Yup. Surprised he didn't switch out to Snorlax, though. Maybe the para chance or something?
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Ambient switched in Metagross.
Itachi 2008 switched in Starmie.
Metagross used Ice Punch.
It's not very effective...
Starmie lost 30% of its health.
Starmie's apple restored its health a little!
Starmie restored 6% of its health. So far so good.
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Ambient switched in Snorlax (lvl 100 Snorlax ?).
Starmie used Surf.
Snorlax lost 16% of its health.
Starmie's leftovers restored its health a little!
Starmie's apple 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. No Pursuit?
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Itachi 2008 switched in Blissey.
Snorlax used Crunch.
Blissey lost 20% of its health.
Blissey's apple restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. So far so good.
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Blissey used Thunder Wave.
Snorlax is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Snorlax used a sumo wrestling move.
Blissey lost 31% of its health.
Blissey is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Blissey's apple restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. Natural Cure...
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Itachi 2008 switched in Zapdos (lvl 100 Zapdos).
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
Snorlax is paralysed! It can't move!
Zapdos's apple restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health. o.o Hax for the win. Parachance ftw, actually, but whatever. you get the point.
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Zapdos used a bolt of thunder.
Snorlax lost 16% of its health.
Snorlax used Rest.
Snorlax fell asleep!
Snorlax restored 16% of its health.
Zapdos's apple restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health. Mm, yeah, stall war...
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Zapdos used a bolt of thunder.
Snorlax lost 17% of its health.
Snorlax is fast asleep!
Snorlax used I'm talking in my sleep. (Sleep Talk.)
Snorlax used a sumo wrestling move.
Zapdos lost 34% of its health.
Zapdos's apple restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. It goes on....
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Itachi 2008 switched in Blissey.
Snorlax is fast asleep!
Snorlax used I'm talking in my sleep.
Snorlax used Body Slam.
Blissey lost 34% of its health.
Blissey's apple restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. :P Yeah, yeah... no explanation...
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Blissey used Softboiled.
Blissey restored 50% of its health.
Snorlax woke up!
Snorlax used I'm talking in my sleep.
But it failed!
Blissey's apple restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. Yuppers....
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Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Snorlax lost 19% of its health.
Snorlax used a sumo wrestling move.
A critical hit!
Blissey lost 64% of its health.
Blissey is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
Blissru's apple restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health. ;P Hax ftl...
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Itachi 2008 switched in Zapdos (lvl 100 Zapdos).
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
Snorlax used a wrestling move.
Zapdos lost 30% of its health.
Zapdos's apple restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. So far so good.
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Zapdos used Rest.
Zapdos fell asleep!
Zapdos restored 54% of its health.
Snorlax used a wrestling move.
A critical hit!
Zapdos lost 66% of its health.
Zapdos's apple restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. D: Hax ftl still...
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Itachi 2008 switched in Blissey
Snorlax used a wrestling move.
Blissey lost 30% of its health.
Itachi 2008's Blissey fainted.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. :x I wasn't planning on doing that, but again, I have no Lax counter... XD
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Itachi 2008 switched in Starmie.
Starmie used get a surfboard! (Surf)
Snorlax lost 17% of its health.
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
It's super effective!
Starmie lost 54% of its health.
Starmie's apple restored its health a little!
Starmie restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. BulkyStarberry ftw.
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Starmie used Recover.
Starmie restored 50% of its health.
Snorlax used a mighty bite
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
Starmie lost 104% of its health.
Itachi 2008's Starmie fainted.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. omg hax
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Itachi 2008 switched in Swampert
Swampert used Rest.
Swampert fell asleep!
Swampert restored 80% of its health.
Snorlax used a wrestling move.
Swampert lost 20% of its health.
Seampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. Nothing special.
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Swampert is fast asleep!
Snorlax used a wrestling move.
A critical hit!
Swampert lost 40% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health. D: Crit Hax!
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Swampert is fast asleep!
Snorlax used a wrestling move.
Swampert lost 22% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health. Wrestling moves ftw.
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Swampert woke up!
Swampert used Rest.
Swampert fell asleep!
Swampert restored 64% of its health.
Snorlax used a wrestling move.
Swampert lost 23% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health. Mm, Swampert for the win, I guess?
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Swampert is fast asleep!
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Swampert lost 14% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health. Yup, 14%.

Swampert is fast asleep!
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Swampert lost 14% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health. Cool.
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Swampert woke up!
Swampert used a tremor.
Snorlax lost 34% of its health.
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Idunliekj00 lost 13% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. You know, I'm so tired from typing all this I can't even think anymore...
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Swampert used Rest.
Swampert fell asleep!
Swampert restored 39% of its health.
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Swampert lost 13% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health. ...
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Idunliekj00 is fast asleep!
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Swampert lost 14% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Swampert is fast asleep!
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Swampert lost 13% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Swampert woke up!
Swampert used a tremor.
Snorlax lost 33% of its health.
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Swampert lost 13% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Swampert used a tremor.
Snorlax lost 33% of its health.
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Swampert lost 13% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
SWampert restored 6% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Swampert used a tremor.
Snorlax lost 31% of its health.
Snorlax used Rest.
Snorlax fell asleep!
Snorlax restored 94% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
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Swampert used a tremor.
Snorlax lost 35% of its health.
Snorlax is fast asleep!
Snorlax used I'm talking my sleep.
Snorlax used a wrestling move.
Swampert lost 23% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Swampert used a tremor.
Snorlax lost 34% of its health.
Snorlax is fast asleep!
Snorlax used I'm talking in my sleep.
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Swampert lost 13% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Swampert used a tremor
Snorlax lost 36% of its health.
Snorlax woke up!
Snorlax used a mighty bite.
Swampert lost 12% of its health.
Swampert's apple restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's apple restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Swampert used a tremor.
Snorlax lost 31% of its health.
Ambient's Snorlax fainted. Yes!
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Ambient switched in Metagross.
Metagross used a tremor.
Swampert lost 38% of its health.
Swampert used a tremor.
It's super effective!
Metagross lost 55% of its health.
Ambient's Metagross fainted.
Itachi 2008 wins! I managed to win, somehow. Sorry for the lack of commentary, this just tired me out a bit. Time to take a break...

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[Dark Azelf]

Ummm any particular reason you cant use the proper name for the moves ? tremor and get angry ?

 

[Ambient]

You didn't edit out all the Starmie names, some bad prediction from me there. But it was a good game, you played well :).

In the battle I actually thought Draco Meteor would OHKO Swampy, guess I was wrong. My Blissey counter is lax after Mence has gone :).

 

[Dark Azelf]

Yes, i HIGHLY advise you edit out that Starmie name ..now =/

 

[Sora_8920]

Ummm any particular reason you cant use the proper name for the moves ? tremor and get angry ?

So, basically you just want to put them all as original names? Ok, I will... But I'm still waking up from the nap I took, and I gave the names of the moves in parenthesis...

You didn't edit out all the Starmie names, some bad prediction from me there. But it was a good game, you played well :).

In the battle I actually thought Draco Meteor would OHKO Swampy, guess I was wrong. My Blissey counter is lax after Mence has gone :).

Edited.

Yes, i HIGHLY advise you edit out that Starmie name ..now =/

Yup, as said above, I edited it out...

 

[BeachBoy]

Oi, it's at least it's an improvement from your last one. :D But you should have had your sleep, store it in your PMs, and worked on it later to actually put some more effort into it. ;/

The lack of commentary simply hurts this battle first off. Poor introduction really and review isn't even there. =/ Remember to edit out the those specific lines of Stealth Rock, Leftovers, Sandstorm did so-so %. :D Helps us read better... So yeah, organize it better and separate log from commentary, having it on the side of the log is another eh. You could have put more effort into this Itachi. As it's been mentioned, it's good to change some log, but changing an entire move the entire way the same way is probably as bad as keeping the entire nickname of a Pocket Monster.

I'll just be honest and say I didn't enjoy reading this either. =/ Usually because I love logs with more commentary. I'll reply more in a few.

EDIT: Well, actually, it was okay after reading it a couple of times, I just wish you slept before you finished. ;P Could have vastly improved that way. :D

 

[.]

First off Itachi, let me say that your log has made a vast improvement. I actually enjoyed reading this (except for the stall match between Swampert and Snorlax. I hate stall matches in general D:)

As for Zapdos, I reccomend getting Roost > Rest. Roost takes away Zapdos's flying type which means Ice Beam will do neutral damage.

I also realize you have no fighting type on your team. I'd reccomend removing Froslass (it works amazing in the hail, but without it I think it's not that needed) Perhaps get either SD Luke, or if you like more power, Flame Orb Heracross. Smogon sets work, but mixing it up a bit for your own likings can't hurt. :D

Anyways, the log was good, but commentary would've helped it. Of course, like you said, you were tired. So it was a good log overall :D

 

[Anti]

I'd put in the parts that are necessary in making a battle log...you know...readable (like the move names), and then add in the creative parts to things that aren't as important to the log. I don't know, it just didn't look like it took much effort.

And guys, that's the reason why you don't use SD LO Outrage everybody raves about. You just get revenge killed =/

Really though, this could use more effort. You don't need to do it all in one sitting, as BeachBoy has said so many times ;)