Golem and other cards soon to Come

Jesus Freak Josh

In my mind's eye, I see You...
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    Okay. I started a Golem ages ago and didn't touch it. Since I was bored I decided to finish it today.
    I didn't want to restart so I kept going. That is why there is no energy next to the attacks. Otherwise, I would like to hear your criticism. And by criticism I mean constructive criticism.
     
    Well, it is definitely not perfect. So you did this a long time ago? You I assume you have gotten better and read the tutorial ;)

    Well, I see average problems, placemnet, cost, etc. Good effort go, and I hope you improve 5/10
     
    King Shuckle said:
    Well, it is definitely not perfect. So you did this a long time ago? You I assume you have gotten better and read the tutorial ;)

    Well, I see average problems, placemnet, cost, etc. Good effort go, and I hope you improve 5/10
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    Well I did it off memory. I didn't read the tutorial this time... ^_^;;;
     
    Okay, I made a new one just then. It's not quite done. I'll get it finished soon. I may make a few adjustments to your comments. Although you may notice some errors. I just started screwing trying to get it perfect in the end (Stupid limited Paint).
     
    The charizard is infintely better than the Golem. The Golem has a lot wrong with it (for starters- mis-sizings, wrong fonts, wrong wording). The charizard has some font fudging, the Dark Leaf is really random and seems pretty out of flavor. I think your art choice for it is tech.
    Golem: best left unsaid/5
    Charizard: 2.5/5
     
    Tig said:
    What is with that Fire Leaf move XD
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    A random move I could think of. XD
     
    Tig said:
    Did you have Fire Red and Leaf Green in your mind at the same time? XP
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    No. I think it was thinking of making an attack that would do more than 50 damage and was less boring than a straight fire attack.
     
    Tig said:
    It could have been Crunch, since it is Fire/Dark
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    Shut up! XD
    What's wrong with Fire Leaf?
     
    Tig said:
    Nothing but a Dark move would suit it more ^_^
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    Well... Uh... Woop, woop, woop, woop, woop! *scuttles off*
     
    Tig said:
    Hmm deja-vu

    Is this the part where Toto says ''Tig pwnd Batesy! XD''
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    No it's where I say "I brained my damage so I could think of anything!" XD

    What Pok?mon should I do next?
     
    Okay.

    Damaged my brain? Ummm... Yes. How silly of me.
     
    enough SPAM you too, stay on topic, and Batesy, I know you didn't make the Charizard sprite ??

    *Hint: Change the illustator*

    You've gotten better, you just need to not use sprites as art for cards.
     
    King Shuckle said:
    enough SPAM you too, stay on topic, and Batesy, I know you didn't make the Charizard sprite ??

    *Hint: Change the illustator*

    You've gotten better, you just need to not use sprites as art for cards.
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    What? Oh right I knew I forgot something. XD When I fix a couple of things in it (If I get around to it) I'll fix that.

    Actually, I only did a bit of illustration. The background was from LOGII by Atari or something...

    I better remember to fix that at some point...
     
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