Gonzo's Gulpin

[Mail Jeevas]

Here's my new card, hope you like it:

GONZO'S GULPIN

Next card: Fernando's Wigglytuff

EDIT: Gonzo's Gulpin fixed

 

[Lunanai]

overpowered.
how to keep track of power using times?

otherwise, OK.

 

[Lordpenguin]

Nice combination of pokepower and attack.

 

[icycatelf]

I see a couple errors:
"defending pokemon" should be capitalized.
"Banched" should be chaged to "Benched."

 

[Mail Jeevas]

I'll correct all those and repost it. Thanks for the comments. Nobody commented on the art...

 

[Blennix]

Wow!!! just Woow! Whats happening to all the VS stands, place FAKERS!!! use the correct blanks, if it is someone's Pokémon use the VS Blank.

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

Yeah, we have a VS blank, but whatever works for you better is fine by me. The art is nice, but is it yours? Do you go by the name somewhere else? If so it's incredible. If it's not, unoriginality makes me sad. ;-;

Your placement and fonts are correct, however, I think you are using the incorrect energy symbols. They have jagged edges on them and if you get the PSD version of Fangking Omega's symbol sheet, your energy symbols will look great. Those can be found in the tutorial thread or the link in my signature. I hope your future cards look as good as this!

You also forgot the rarity. >.>

8/10.

 

[Mail Jeevas]

Sorry and thanks. Yeah, the art is mine. Don't you remember my former name was MulteonDX? Now here's another card and I'll follow your advices King Shuckle.

Here's a new card but no VS style either :P

Fernando's Wigglytuff

And since I knew the wigglytuff was coming out bad If I completely drew it, i mirrored it in PS

Ermmm VS style are all basic pokemons? I've only seen basic cards...

EDIT: nvm, I customizated a blank. Here it is

EDIT: I just realized a big mistake I did in "moods".

I'll post the correction now

 

[Blennix]

Nice card. If you have seen Fake versions of Trainer cards *coughEX-Trainer's Enterprisescough* (set made by me) you will know excatly where the Trainer head goes. When it evolves from a trainer. The trainer name doesn't have to be all capitalized :)

 

[Mail Jeevas]

No I haven't, but I already knew it was your set. Here's a new card:

Gonzo's Spoink

 

[icycatelf]

Do you draw the backgrounds on your cards too? If not, you should give partial credit to the artist who did.

 

[Mail Jeevas]

Sorry, not to be rude but You always have something bad to say about my cards *weeps* Why!? :P

just kidding. No, I don't make them, also, they are pictures from search engines.

EDIT: I double uploaded GOnzo's Spoink >.>

Next card: Sebastian's Lapras

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

Backgrounds do not require any credit.

TIP: When doing VS cards, the trainer's name is never capitalized in the effect text or evolution text. Your improving greatly.

 

[Lunanai]

Backgrounds do not require any credit.

yes!
i agree with that also. :nervous:

good job.

 

[Mail Jeevas]

Ok Thanks for the comments. Here's Sebastian's Lapras


Next card: Sebastian's Kuar

 

[Adept-eX]

I think than the Tthing about the background depends... for example in my Energy cards I put (E) at the side of my name for say than I do the Energy Icon and belows I put the name of the illustrator of the Background (normally taken from the deviantart) with the (BG) at the side for say than he done the Background

 

[Mail Jeevas]

So you always give credit to Backgrounders...

I'll start to do so, or maybe I'll get sewed -.-U

xD Nvm that, Next card (again) Sebastian's Kuar.

It'll be posted for tonight I promise

 

[Mail Jeevas]

Sorry I totally forgot! Here are the 2 cards Kuar and Lapras

 

[icycatelf]

Backgrounds do not require any credit.

TIP: When doing VS cards, the trainer's name is never capitalized in the effect text or evolution text. Your improving greatly.

Sorry, I didn't know... It still seems like backgrounds would require credit... Oh well.

 

[Blennix]

Oh right Kuar! i'm surprised you have that Symbol sheet and the Font name and HP :D, i'm the head of the trainers is still in the wrong place, move the head up so it looks like it is sitting on the stand, but not on top of it.