Harry Potter And The Cursed Soul/Golden Locket BOOK 7

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    After reading Half Blood Prince I decided on making.....Book 7

    FACTS:

    This will include the rumors on jkrowling.com
    Hogwarts will be mentioned breifly
    Voldemorts horcruxes are found
    More deaths accure
    Someone unexpected is realeated to Voldemort
    The ministry plays a HUGE part.

    OVERLOOK:
    The death of Dumbledore was very tragic for young Harry Potter. Having lost everyone except his friends he journeys out to destroy the horcruxes. Only the ministry can get in his way.

    SPOILERS BELOW MUST HIGHLIGHT TO SEE:
    The ministry is contoled by Scrim, he is a death eater
    Harry will die along side of Ginny
    Malfoy joins Harry to kill Snape
    Voldemort murders Snape and Harry
    Hermione is the the one who destroy Voldemort
    Nevilie is murdered
    Hogwarts is destroyed when Hogwarts itself was a horcrux
    Dumbledore's portrait is in Harrys locket now.
    Dumbledore guides Harry along the way
    Ron doesnt die and marries Hermionie
    The ministry falls apart and Mr. Wealsy becomes Minister
    Before Hogwarts was destroyed Prof. McGonnalgal became Headmisstress and Hagrid head of Grifyindor.




    COMING AUGUST 2005

    Chapter 1 will be in July.
     
    hey!good job!really cant' wait the chapter one!see ya! :P
     
    I have to go for awhile but Chapter 1 is underway.

    Chapter 1: The Last Visit
     
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    A Little Preview.

    Snape walked up to see Harry, Ginny, and Ron. Hermonie had hidden to find SPOILER.
    Snape lifted his wand and blasted them all to the ground.
    "Good Job, Snape" SPOLIER said walking out from behind the Three Broomsticks. "But it was your fault my parents are dead, if you even move a muscle"
    "Really? Try Me! Ava...." Snape said pointing his wand at Harry.
    "AVADA KEDAVRA!!!!!!" SPOILER said letting SPOILER fall to the ground dead. SPOILER went over to SPOILER and "That....was......tough......"
    "Malfoy!" Voldemort screamed walking from out behind the Hog's Head. In the back SPOILER was on fire burning.
    "Step away from the boy!" A man said stepping from behind him.
    "Ahhhh, Dolous. My SPOILER" Malfoy said pulling out his wand again.





    How IS It SO FAr?
     
    Okay, but please edit one thing, Malfoy, in my book
    Voldemort's Neice,
    Draco's Version

    Malfoy doesn't kill Snape. (Since you're doing the version that focuses on Harry, etc.)

    I like the other ideas, except for the Scimegour dude being a death eater.

    Edit: Hmm i've got some tips and questions, and if I sound rude/mean, I'm not trynig to be.

    1. Why in the h**l is Voldemort walking aroun in Hogsmede?

    2. Try and describe each character as you first introduce them, because the people who are reading this, may not have read teh other 6 books.
     
    well....i hate scrimgeour.
    I have the chapter list done

    who said malfoy killed snape?
     
    And what i meant is:

    Malfoy joins Harry to kill Snape

    that's not in Malfoy's nature, in the 7th book, unless Snape is hurting Alex or Malfoy hiself.
     
    HUGE SPOILER!


    The Reason for my doing this is:
    1. Malfoy couldnt kill Dumbledore, Snape went and killed Dumbledore
    2. On Voldemorts orders MALFOy was supposed to kill dumbledore
    3. Istead Voldemort murders Malfoys family.
    4. Snape is named almighty in Voldys eyes.
    5. Malfoy wants revenge!
     
    It's obvious Snape killed Dumbledore because of his pact with Narcissus and Bellatrix in the beginning; if he didn't, he would've died. I doubt he would be 'almighty' in Voldemort's eye since he runs away and Voldemort considers no one 'almighty.'

    Also, work on your characterization. o.o; The way you portrayed Voldemort's scream..it's as if he cares, which is inconceivable. And try to improve on grammar and all those stuff.

    Otherwise, good luck. It sounds fun. =o
     
    that is a rough draft to give people the idea of the flow. i will work on it.
     
    TheOnly said:
    HUGE SPOILER!


    The Reason for my doing this is:
    1. Malfoy couldnt kill Dumbledore, Snape went and killed Dumbledore
    2. On Voldemorts orders MALFOy was supposed to kill dumbledore
    3. Istead Voldemort murders Malfoys family.
    4. Snape is named almighty in Voldys eyes.
    5. Malfoy wants revenge!
    Click to expand...


    Hmmmm, I don't care for teh Idea that The Dark Lord murders Draco's parents.
     
    Well, Yes. But No! And even more to it there is a new Profeser who helps harry. Lemur Dolous.
     
    Here, let's do this:

    You can write your version that vocuses on Harry, Hermione, and Ron

    and

    I'll write my version that focuses on Voldemort and his Death Eaters.
     
    Chapter 1 is done!

    Pythagoras Kepler NEW PROFFESER

    Harry Potter and the Golden Locket

    Year 7

    Chapter 1: The Last Visit

    ?Unusaul Sightings in the European area have increased a lot lately. Green lights are flying from carved pieces of wood. People in cloaks mentioning a thing called a Dumblebee? A Voldetart? And a Pother. Whatever these are, the Europeans are crazy. And now Jo??? The TV was on in the living room. Vernon Dursley turned out the TV and went to bed. Dudley was snoring on the coach. Harry opened the door and walked in. It was pitch black. Lumos Harry lit his wand. He entered the Dursleys house for the last time. He gathered up his stuff and left. He Apparated to the Burrow where he met Ron and the Weasleys.
    ?Ready Ron?? Harry asked as Ron jumped out of bed.
    ?No.? Ron said waking up rubbing his eyes. ?Anyways wheres Hermonie??
    ?Not here yet I guess. Where?s Ginny??
    ?In her bedroom waiting for you to go get here.?
    ?Get her? She isn?t going.?
    ?Really? Tell her that.?
    ?Whatever?

    Six hours passed when Hermonie showed up. It was midnight. They all apparated out and off to Diagon Alley. Harry brought out his Golden Locket opened it and read the note again and again.
    ?I don?t get it. R.A.B. Who is R.A.B? We need to know to find out more about the Horcruxes.? Harry said and Ron was eating some cauldron cakes. Hermionie looking around and she spotted a sign that made her tingle inside.
    ?B-B-B-B-Borgin!!!! Reanold A. Borgin! How could we not think of that?? Hermionie said running fast torwards Knockturn Alley.
    ?Come on Ron!? Harry screamed heading forward. Ron ran to catch up. There hearts dropped.

    BURKES
    FOUNDED IN (cobweb covering)
    NAME CHANGED IN 19(COVERED)

    ?No way. Borgin is gone. Look: Missing Wizard: Reanold Borgin. Voldemort found him or he ran away.? Hermionie said slumping down. ?This is not good, not good at all.?
    ?Ok, our first thing to do is find Borgin. Then we find out where the Horcruxes are from him. And then we go to Hogwarts.? Harry said happily. Ron and Hermionie looked surprised. ?I left my cloak. No classes.?
    ?Oh? Ron announced with a mouthful of food. ?Lets go search?
    ?Right? Harry answered laughing. He went to put the paper back in his locket when he saw the face of a man with a very long beard and half-glasses. This man was Harry?s headmaster. This was the face of Albus Dumbledore.
     
    TheOnly said:
    After reading Half Blood Prince I decided on making.....Book 7

    FACTS:

    This will include the rumors on jkrowling.com
    Hogwarts will be mentioned breifly
    Voldemorts horcruxes are found
    More deaths accure
    Someone unexpected is realeated to Voldemort
    The ministry plays a HUGE part.

    OVERLOOK:
    The death of Dumbledore was very tragic for young Harry Potter. Having lost everyone except his friends he journeys out to destroy the horcruxes. Only the ministry can get in his way.

    SPOILERS BELOW MUST HIGHLIGHT TO SEE:
    The ministry is contoled by Scrim, he is a death eater
    Harry will die along side of Ginny
    Malfoy joins Harry to kill Snape
    Voldemort murders Snape and Harry
    Hermione is the the one who destroy Voldemort
    Nevilie is murdered
    Hogwarts is destroyed when Hogwarts itself was a horcrux
    Dumbledore's portrait is in Harrys locket now.
    Dumbledore guides Harry along the way
    Ron doesnt die and marries Hermionie
    The ministry falls apart and Mr. Wealsy becomes Minister
    Before Hogwarts was destroyed Prof. McGonnalgal became Headmisstress and Hagrid head of Grifyindor.




    COMING AUGUST 2005

    Chapter 1 will be in July.
    Click to expand...

    Are the spoilers for your book, or for the real one?
     
    His book. No one knows what book 7 is about yet.

    Include more depth to your paragraphs. Don't just end one with whoever saying something. It gets confusing to who said what. Although, I like the RAB part - making it Borgin. ^^
     
    trust me that is the un-edited one. my editor has helped me out. i am on chapter 6 now but i am hand writing it then posting it because i have ALOT of mistakes trust me.

    well i thought borgin immeadatly (sp) when i read RAB.
     
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