Citrinin
Nephrotoxic.
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XD; Thanks. ^^ It was more of an excuse to test out a new program I'd downloaded, and I thought that Augury's voice would be perfect to create. XD
Thanks. ;DAllTimeLow1 said:Great chapter Citrinin
I thought you might think so. XD; When I proofread it, I actually had you in mind as the person who'd probably like it the most. :PAllTimeLow1 said:Great action in my opinion.
Yes. Unfortunately for Rex's bloodlust, his sense of duty outweighs his sadism. ;[ And he'll have to live with the fact that he saved Bevan's life. :PAllTimeLow1 said:Also I love how you've got Rex there with Bevan at his mercy with total bloodlust on his mind but he can't do a thing lol.
You're going to love Part III, then. ;DAllTimeLow1 said:Also Bevan using his psychic powers a bit more, I hope they develop into something more poweful,
Hehehe. You'll just have to wait and see. XP But Bevan certainly looks like the most viable candidate to kill Rex if he were to die in the story, doesn't he?AllTimeLow1 said:and I'd love to see him kill Rex in the end :P
Thanks. ;D
I thought you might think so. XD; When I proofread it, I actually had you in mind as the person who'd probably like it the most. :P
Yes. Unfortunately for Rex's bloodlust, his sense of duty outweighs his sadism. ;[ And he'll have to live with the fact that he saved Bevan's life. :P
You're going to love Part III, then. ;D
Hehehe. You'll just have to wait and see. XP But Bevan certainly looks like the most viable candidate to kill Rex if he were to die in the story, doesn't he?
XD; Not quite so easily. I'd just picked up that you liked action. X3AllTimeLow1 said:Hahaha really? You read me like a book then :P
Knowing him, he'd probably just take it out on someone of lower rank anyway. :sAllTimeLow1 said:Yeah I don't think that'll be a good hit for Rex's self-esteem haha
Indeed. It's definitely possible. Or, maybe from someone that you didn't quite expect? ;DAllTimeLow1 said:Yep he most certainly does, however maybe Dagger could with help from Bevan?
Definitely a possibility, my friend. After all, he's still operating under a lie. It's inevitable that he'll find out at some point, as his telepathic abilities grow. XP Of course, he could still decide to stay, as the psychic powers were advantageous. He could decide to side with Augury - certainly a candidate for the new, "perfectly" rational Bevan - he's the winning side with the most power. Or he could become a rogue. (Maybe that's the significance of Liam - someone he could meet up with?)AllTimeLow1 said:Also I wouldn't be surprised if somewhere along the track Bevan turns on Dagger and Cicero after finding out they gave him the powers and possibly killing them but hey you never know, well actually you do know :P
Indeed. It's definitely possible. Or, maybe from someone that you didn't quite expect? ;D
Definitely a possibility, my friend. After all, he's still operating under a lie. It's inevitable that he'll find out at some point, as his telepathic abilities grow. XP Of course, he could still decide to stay, as the psychic powers were advantageous. He could decide to side with Augury - certainly a candidate for the new, "perfectly" rational Bevan - he's the winning side with the most power. Or he could become a rogue. (Maybe that's the significance of Liam - someone he could meet up with?)
All seem reasonable at this point. [/teaser]
Heh, that would be a bit of a letdown, wouldn't it? XDAllTimeLow1 said:Well the person I wouldn't expect would be Charlotte, her running in to save Bevan or something.
He might be able to get passed the parents issue with the lack of emotion. He was never that close to Evan, and the last time he saw Amanda was years ago (and he's already released his anger over her and regretted it). It's not entirely implausible. ;DAllTimeLow1 said:Like him siding with Augury, but I'm not sure how that would go as both Bevan's parents are dead because of Augury, maybe he could side with Augury as a facade to get close enough to kill him?
Indeed. ;D Yet another possibility.AllTimeLow1 said:And meeting up with Liam seems like a plausible thing to happen and maybe Charlotte joining him as she has feelings for him? and I think I mentioned it before Liam talking sense into him about the ridding himself of emotion rubbish lol
Heh, that would be a bit of a letdown, wouldn't it? XD
Yeah true because if i remember correctly him and his dad were butting heads a bit ayyHe might be able to get passed the parents issue with the lack of emotion. He was never that close to Evan, and the last time he saw Amanda was years ago (and he's already released his anger over her and regretted it). It's not entirely implausible. ;D
As for the facade, it would be difficult, considering Augury's extraordinary psychic powers.
Citrinin;5175780 Indeed. ;D Yet another possibility.[/QUOTE said:Haha I think I speculate too much :P
That's an understatement. XD Bevan hated bullies, and his father epitomised that role.AllTimeLow1 said:Yeah true because if i remember correctly him and his dad were butting heads a bit ayy
That won't happen, for risk of the story becoming far too easy for Bevan (if he can deceive Augury on something so fundamental, then think of what else he could do to his enemies.) Not much of a conflict, then. :PAllTimeLow1 said:Bevan's powers manifested more or say he found out they were artificial and somehow got Cicero to do something to enhance them to a point beyond belief it could be possible.
Not at all. This fic lends itself to speculation. ;DAllTimeLow1 said:Haha I think I speculate too much :P
That won't happen, for risk of the story becoming far too easy for Bevan (if he can deceive Augury on something so fundamental, then think of what else he could do to his enemies.) Not much of a conflict, then. :P
The Moonlight Squad fiddled with the complicated lock, opening the window neatly, and crawled in silently.
Perfectly alright. I love to hear reviewer theories. ;DAllTimeLow1 said:Yeah I didn't really think it would happen as it would make for a shorter story and less exciting just thought I might mention it.
:O *fixes*. By the way, you're going to love Chapter Twenty-Seven. ;DLa Pompa said:Is the man a squad all on his own? Or is this another case of the Psychic-Midgets-Who-Pretend-To-Be-One-Person?
XDDD;La Pompa said:Anyway, nice to see Bevan exhibiting Sith Lord powers. Are his eyes going to turn yellow?
Depending on your definition of good... Manfred? XD;La Pompa said:Are there any "good" psychics in Torcra?
ATTACK OF THE GIRATINA-POWER-INFUSED MIDGETS!:O *fixes*. By the way, you're going to love Chapter Twenty-Seven. ;D
No, srsly!XDDD;
[/QUOTE]Depending on your definition of good... Manfred? XD;
Well, you were kind of right... there is a "the" in the title. ;DLa Pompa said:ATTACK OF THE GIRATINA-POWER-INFUSED MIDGETS!
Then seriously, no. :PLa Pompa said:No, srsly!
Indeed. ;o But even then, he only switched sides to save himself, and he was the one that inspired Evan to get psychic powers anyway.La Pompa said:Yeah, I thought so. At least his morals aren't as lacking as the rest of theirs...
Huh? The... random bit about tombs? Which part was that? XDLa Pompa said:I can't wait to see how this ties in to the random bit about tombs at the start.
YOU JUST GOT *OBLITERATE*DWell, you were kind of right... there is a "the" in the title. ;D
:(Then seriously, no. :P
But he's not telling anyone else about it.Indeed. ;o But even then, he only switched sides to save himself, and he was the one that inspired Evan to get psychic powers anyway.
Sorry, wrong fic. Here I am, having been reading with the assumption that you were tying things into a prologue which never had anything to do with tombs in it! XDHuh? The... random bit about tombs? Which part was that? XD
That's like the tenth time. XDLa Pompa said:YOU JUST GOT *OBLITERATE*D
True. ;DLa Pompa said:But he's not telling anyone else about it.
XDDD; That is strangely awesome. :PLa Pompa said:Sorry, wrong fic. Here I am, having been reading with the assumption that you were tying things into a prologue which never had anything to do with tombs in it! XD
OK. *explains*Feign said:Lost psychic concentration? Might want to explain that.
Yes, yes it would. :PFeign said:would 'enact' be a better word than cause?
With the first one, *fixes*. With the second one, what would you suggest?Feign said:I think led is the better word here, plus the two sentences in that paragraph are a bit confusing. Somewhat of course, because of the nature on how it starts, but it is still maliable.
OK. ;3Feign said:Might want to have Bevan's name in this paragraph, instead of a pronoun. ;)
Yeah, that works better. :PFeign said:authorised? (authorized for the American in you ;))
Thanks. ^^Feign said:I liked the silence of the scene, it adds to the whole drama of a well planned out scheme.
Thanks. :DFeign said:Nice chapter :) Great end to it too :D
Heh, that makes you the second person to think that. ;D Funny how Rex's death seems to be on your minds~ Why is that? XDFeign said:I'm thinking that Bevan will decapitate Rex psychically like there is no tomorrow. XD
OK. *explains*
Yes, yes it would. :P
With the first one, *fixes*. With the second one, what would you suggest?
Oo there was a second one?
OK. ;3
Yeah, that works better. :P
Thanks. ^^
Thanks. :D
Heh, that makes you the second person to think that. ;D Funny how Rex's death seems to be on your minds~ Why is that? XD