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Hidenvil Adventures- [PG-15 i think...]

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The elder finished his speech and disappeared through the restricted door from whence he came. The room grew slightly darker and the two lone figures sat motionless, waiting for the other to do something.

Zeke stood up and stretched, "What a bore-fest!" he said loudly. He glanced down at Jolteon, "I'm not listening to you next time you think that a place is worth stealing from..." he said telepathically.

Jolteon yawned and stood up slowly, "I'm sorry that you can't do your own job..." he returned bitterly.

Zeke ignored his ignorant Pokemon and turned to the other boy who was sharing his company, "What an old geezer! You don't believe that old guy's nonsense, do you?"


OOC: Nah, I think I got the gist of it. LOL
 
sos ignor me for the moment dojy post due to lack of sleep
 
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OOC: I hate to be the enforcer, but if you could read over the past few posts... you could see how many mistakes you've made in that post.

1. You never even made Alii attend the meeting
2. The elder has already left
3. I was trying to start a conversation with Karma, when your character suddenly appeared out of no-where

I'm not trying to sound... mean. I'm just trying to keep order while zZRaoto is offline.
 
((OOC: Okay, I just wanted to make sure. Urgent: For everyone that shows up late for a scene (and tell me if I'm going through different events too fast) then just RP your way into the picture. For instance, if you show up late to the Elder's Meeting then make your post believable. Example: Kari slowly opened the door to the Elder's Council Room and peeked inside. Her partner Pikachu came in under Kari's feet and she runs in after him. "Bad boy. Dont go inside a strange building until I tell you. Okay?" Kari scolded the little Pikachu. The young Pokemon nodded and Kari began to look around to see who else was here. She notices two boys talking and asks them is the meeting over. When she learns that the meeting was already over she sighs and sticks around, in case something might come up. That's just an example. Remember that Raoto and his Partner is outside the Elder's Council Room.))

Karma

When the meeting ended Karma sat quietly and watched the other boy complain at how boring it was.

Karma looked down shyly when the boy looked at him. Karma, he's coming this way. Oregami anxiously told him. Karma never really made any friends sense he was always quiet and conservative, and Oregami always tried to get him some friends.

"What an old geezer! You don't believe that old guy's nonsense do you?" The other person asked. Karma looked up and summed up a bunch of jumbled up words as answer, "Yes, I mean...I don't. I guess so, he is an Elder. And umm..They are smart...I think." Karma had trouble speaking but he continued to talk, "What's your name? I mean...my name is Karma. Wait..this is Oregami." He then stopped talking and looked down at his feet. He never said that much to a person before.

Raoto

Raoto peeked inside to notice the two show-ups talking to each other. He smiled lightly and though, I believe those two are going to be best of friends. He then began to look around to see if any other kid showed up so he can personally inform them about the gathering.

Hey, Raoto. What about that kid that said he wasn't going to attend? Should I go look for him? Widello had remembered and asked his Partner for orders.

Yeah...tell him to meet me here and I'll discuss his community service with him. Raoto replied.

Widello nodded and set off to find the other kid.


((OOC: Oh, and Alii6, please show me an RP sample and your in. I just wanna see if your literate or not. If you fail to comply or the sample is crap then you won't be accepted. You will however, have a numerous amount of chances to get in.))
 
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Zeke watched the shy boy try to come up with an answer, "Yes, I mean...I don't. I guess so, he is an Elder. And umm..They are smart...I think," he finally managed to blabber.

Zeke laughed loudly, "You're not even sure! You have no idea if you believe him or not," he bellowed, sounding like a complete idiot.

"What's your name? I mean...my name is Karma. Wait..this is Oregami," said the boy suddenly. Zeke followed the boys eyes down to the Pokemon at his feet, it was a Ralts... but it's colours were slightly, different.

"I don't care!" he returned bitterly, looking back up at the boy. Zeke suddenly felt a stabbing pain in his right ankle, "Ah!"he called loudly, looking down to see Jolteon attached to his lower leg.
Zeke sighed, he knew what Jolteon was trying to say, "I'm sorry," he started, turning to the boy, "I'm not really good when it comes to... manners."

Jolteon let go of Zeke's leg and nodded happily, "That's better," he said telepathically.

Zeke held his hand out to the boy, "My name's Zeke... and this is Jolteon," he said, looking down at the electric Pokemon at his feet.
 
Karma

"I don't care!" he returned bitterly, looking back up at the boy.
The boy's words almost made Karma cry but he decided he shouldn't or else he might look like a baby.

The boy suddenly yelled, "Ah!"he called loudly, looking down to see Jolteon attached to his lower leg.
The boy sighed and regretted his words, "I'm sorry," he started, turning to the boy, "I'm not really good when it comes to... manners."
The Jolteon let go of the boy's leg and seemed to nod.

The boy held his hand out to Karma, "My name's Zeke... and this is Jolteon," he said, looking down at the electric Pokemon at his feet.

Karma looked up and noticed Zeke's hand in front of him. It means shake his hand. The little inquisitive Ralts said to Karma telepathically. He quickly shook Zeke's hand and let go.

Suddenly there was a strong tremor and Karma stood up in shock. Raoto came barging through the door.

Raoto

"Are four all right?" Raoto asked, directing the question to the humans and the Pokemon. "There was an explosion coming from the woods right on the outskirts of the village. There is a lot of smoke coming from that area. We have to go now." As Raoto was talking, Elder Saruho came into the room from the Restricted Door. "Raoto! What was that?" The old man asked.

"It was an explosion. We have to go and examine the area. This can be a real threat." Raoto explained the the Elder. Saruho nodded and motioned for everyone to go outside.

First Attack ((OOC: You will soon start becoming more independant in the scenes after this one. Also, the scenes will be much longer.))

At the site there is about 20 men dressed in black and has a red "R" on their chests. "Why are you here?" Saruho asked as he stepped up. They all snickered and sneered and pulled out their Poke'balls. "Guys get ready to fight. This shouldn't be too hard for you." Raoto explained.
 
OOC: k i think this is a good entrence point

IC:Lucario looked up "Sir I think that was an explosion," he said to the person next to him. the human turned round and looked at his partner. "lets get moving then lucario, this is what we've been waiting for" he said as the two of them started running towords the explosion.
OOC: only gone light cos carnt think sos
 
OOCAlii, that's a nice entrance sentence but improve your grammar a bit, and add just a tad bit more detail.

1. Introduce your character. Don't just make your first sentence of your RP "He looked up.." A better sentence would be "Alii looked up at the Lucario next to him."

2. Also, state what the setting looks like. What was the two doing right before the explosion. Were they standing under a tree, next to a building. I want to be able to picture your post.

3. The ending is very well. It makes me want to find out what happens when you arrive.

The most important thing though is your grammar. Make sure you capitalize the first letter after a period. Also, this isn't required but I recommend you do this in order to make a better post, go to Google and type the word that you mispelled. (word with the red under it. Just ignore it if it's a Pokemon's name or your character's name.) Look at the correct spelling and edit the word.

Other than that it was a nice entrance into the RP. Remember: grammar/spelling, details. Then you got it. Also, your accepted.
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Karma

Hey Ralts, check out their Pokemon for me. Karma told his little partner. Sure. The Ralts replied as he put his hands to his head to focus his Psychic powers on the enemy Pokemon to scan their power levels. So? Karma looked down at Oregami. We can handle this easily. Ralts replied smiling a bit.

Raoto ordered for everyone to be cautious as they fight and don't make a rash decision. Karma began to shake and was immobilized by fear. He never really been in a fight before and was unsure of what to do exactly. He watched as the others fought bravely.

Hey Karma. We gonna fight or not? Oregami asked, looking up at his shaking partner. He didn't answer. Karma? The Ralts became worried about his Partner. Okay, I'll just fight alone then. Oregami used a Psychic attack on a Team Rocket member's Pokemon and easily beat him but was then knocked out by another enemy Pokemon nearby. It was a rather large Sneasel. Karma gasped at the sight of blood on the Sneasel's claws. He looked down at Oregami and seen a pool of blood forming under the little Pokemon. "Oregami!" Karma became enraged and his mechanical arm began to shake wildly. He ran in and grabbed the enemy Sneasel by the neck with his mechanical arm. He crushed the Pokemon's neck and popped the head right off. He then fired a Psychic attack at a nearby Golbat and knocked it out the air. As it fell to the ground he dashed towards the falling Pokemon and grabbed it in mid-air. He slammed it to the ground and blasted it with a Psychic attack at full power. It practically destroyed the Pokemon and it's blood splashed everywhere.

Karma had never killed anyone or anything, but he had went beserk. His mind blanked out, it wasn't him doing this killing. He was being controlled by an inner rage deep inside of him. He had lost his only friend and his anger made him thirsty for revenge. He became a killing machine at that moment.

Raoto

Raoto looked around for Widello, still keeping an eye on Team Rocket. As he looked back around a Team Rocket Arcanine was already dashing towards him. The enemy Pokemon snarled as it lunged towards the shocked Raoto but he had plenty battle experience. He quickly drew his sword and blocked the attacking beast. He pushed the Arcanine back and used Mach Punch. It was a direct hit but the Arcanine was powerful. It absorbed the attack and retaliated with a Flamethrower. That was when Raoto showed off his special ability. As the Flamethrower was right in front of him he drew it up with his hands into a ball and blasted it back towards the enemy Pokemon. He had dropped his sword in the process and was weaponless at the time. The Arcanine saw it's chance and dodged the incoming attack and dashed towards Raoto. Raoto didn't have time to pick up his sword so he attempted to run towards a tree behind him.

He was known for carefully observing a battlefield right before he got into a fight. He is able to create a visual image of everything in the area with only one look. The Aracanine used Extreme Speed and charged at Raoto with an amazing speed of over 200 mph. Luckily Raoto had reached the tree in time. He jumped towards the tree and kicked off of it behind the incoming Arcanine. It rammed into the tree, knocking it over and was stunned from a terrible headache. That was Raoto's chance. He did a series of Mach Punches and finished his combo off with a powerful Flare Blitz. The attack had such force that Raoto went straight through the hopeless Pokemon. The Arcanine was literally split in half and was certainly dead. In fact it was dead from the start. Raoto was one of the greatest fighters in Hidenvil. After finishing off his opponent he fearfully watched the enraged Karma.

He didn't interfere with him for the chance of Karma killing him as well. Raoto had no choice but to watch this young boy kill out of anger and revenge.

Saruho

The Elder stayed back for a while with his Partner. He never attacked first. That's right. Come to papa. Saruho said, laughing to hisself as a charging enemy came towards him. It was a Lucario.

The Lucario came charging an Aura Sphere but was easily stopped by Saruho. He used a simple Flamethrower and fainted the enemy Pokemon. Too easy. The old man said to his self. Don't get too cocky. His Partner said, sensing his human companion over-confidence.
 
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For the rest of the day Riku had complaned and debated wether or not Zeph's desion was a good one or not, but she eventualy stoped and Zeph fell asleep later that night. Riku stayed up though to watch over him. As morning rolled around she got up and gathered up some beirres for the two of them. By the time Zeph woke up she had eaten half of them. A little after 9:00 o'clock an explosion rocked them all over the place. "That was close, too close," he said. When they got there they saw a bunch of Team Rocket members faceing off against a bunch of kids, an old man and there pokemon. He reconized the Infernape he saw yesterday and dicded too help. Both of them let out a Flash Cannon attack before Team Rocket could do any thing.
 
((OOC: Hmm. I'm thinking of posting a Fan Fiction about this RP as well. I think it will make a pretty good story.))

Karma (a random shy kid that I use as my character)

Karma looked around, his mechanical arm painted with warm blood. He still wanted to kill. His anger was not yet satisfied.

He spotted a lone Team Rocket Pokemon; a Rhydon with a golden horn, "I"m comin' to get you!" Karma said with an evil tease. He dashed at the Rhydon with full speed, charging a Psychic attack on his Mechanical Arm. The Pokemon rotated his horn rapidly and lowered his head. He was preparing a Horn Drill. Karma ignored the attack warning and continued to charge. When he reached the large Pokemon he grabbed it's horn and stopped it's spinning completely.

The mechanical arm gave him amazing strength and he was finally using it's great power. He released a Psychic blast with his free hand right into the Rhydon's stomach. The force pushed the Rhydon in an opposite direction of Karma holding the Pokemon's horn. The two opposing forces caused the Rhydon and it's horn to separate completely. Blood slowly dripped from the Rhdon's head and the hole revealed the inside of the Pokemon's skull. It then fell over dead and blood dripped from the hole.

((OOC: Also, this is where I tend to make the story very graphical. If a person of authority believes this should have a higher rating then please tell me. Another thing, if you believe you aren't comfortable with this type of graphic then please inform me. I will give less details on the injuries.))
 
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Alii and Lucario slowed down as they reached the site "hey look sir others from the village" Lucario pointed to the team of human and pokemon partners. The two friends looked at each other as Alii suddenly snapped "you coming," he said ready to sprint to the aid of the other people "no time like the present" he carried on as the Lucario sighed and shook its head "yes sir" it said as the two were back to back in combat.
Alii looked sharply towards the strange humans "hey lucario any idea on why the they aren't fighting with the pokemon" "I don't know sir are they just slave drivers and these pokemon are the slaves" Lucario replyed trying to make sense of it all him self.
 
((OOC:xBehindtheWaulnutx it's alright. I understand I guess. =/
and Alii6 that's much much better.))

Raoto (Mr. Raoto Saruho)

As Raoto watched Karma kill merciless he noticed a boy and his Lucario running into battle. "Oh, you must be Alii and Lucario!" He called out, happy to see another person show up.

Hey! You can help me anytime now! Widello was backed up by nearly seven enemy Pokemon. A Typhlosion, Tryanitar, Raichu, Rhyhorn, Electivire, Fearow, and a rather large Dragonite. Oh man, you really are in a predicament! Raoto said to his trapped partner.

He dashed towards the group of Pokemon and used Mach Punch. Raoto's Mach Punch was so fast that it made him practically vanish for a few seconds and reappear inside the Circle of Pokemon. Okay, I'm here for you. Just stay near.Raoto ordered to the Infernape. Widello nodded and used a Flamethrower on an incoming Raichu. That was Raoto's signal and he charged up a Fire Punch. Widello jumped up and began spinning while using Flamethrower. He was using his famous Flamethrower Flame Wheel and Raoto was getting to launch his partner as soon as he began to fall. In a split second a powerful combination of moves were executed. Raoto used Fire Punch on the spinning ball of fire which launched it into the group of enemy Pokemon.

They were now able to escape and prepare a battle plan.
 
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Zeph got ready to use multiple Bullet Punches. Four Rockets charged him and all were down before they could realeas there pokemon. He had ordered Riku to defend herself and not ingae by herself. As he looked around that the others might not have needed his help. Almost all the rockets were defeated. He saw one extremly grosome (and one sided) fight. As he turned around he saw three rockets down around Riku, who was unharmed. He wanted to go but dicded (after a stern look from Riku) to at least hear the old man out. He reconized the Elder. He took out one more rocket with a regular punch. He looked for the old man to find what exactly what was going on.
 
Saruho (Elder)

Saruho made sure everyone was alright in battle. He looked around to see the progress of the different fighters. He noticed two new people that finally showed up. He recognized them as Zeph, and his partner Riku, and Alii, with his partner Lucario. It's good to have more people help the village out. Saruho cheerfully said to hisself, looking at how well Raoto was doing.

As the old man began to watch Karma he noticed Zeph looking around and a large Pinsir appeared behind him, preparing to use Guillotine. He ran as fast as he could and jumped high into the air over the unaware Zeph. He used a powerful Flamethrower on the Pokemon behind him and, as the Pokemon before, took it out in one hit. "You really need to be more careful." Raoto said looking sternly at the boy.
 
(I'd like to join too plz)



Name: Iysus "Iy" Caliso (Iysus sounds like: eye-sus), female
Age: 16
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 123 lbs
Appearance: She likes to wear a plain blue shirt the color of Cloud and some jeans. She has shoulder-length brown hair and blue eyes a few shades darker than Cloud's.
Description: Iysus is more calm and collected than Cloud. She likes to think things through before acting which balances his more impulsive character. Like him, however she's very friendly and kind. They both like to tease each other and have friendly arguments.
Background: Iysus was living in Fallarbor Town when she discovered a swablu badily hurt just outside of town. She quickly took it home to tend its wounds, and was surprised when she heard the pokemon's voice in her head thanking her. She soon discovers that he can't remember much before his injuries and vows to help him discover his past. One day, they learned from a traveler that if they journey to Hidenvil, they could possibly find answers to why they have such a stong connection with each other, and they hoped that they might also find a way to help Cloud to regain his memories. While on the long journey, Cloud polished his moves, and eventually evolved into altaria by battling trainers.
Element: dragon, flying
Moves: Dragon Dance, Dragon Breath, Sky Attack (does it by jumping in the air), Dragon pulse, Mirror Move
Weapon: none

Partner: Altaria, Cloud, male
Appearance: He is little smaller and a darker blue than most altaria. Has light blue eyes.
Description: Cloud is a kind and thoughtful pokemon though he can get a bit nosy. He's exurbrant and headstrong, but usually Iysus can keep him under control. He loves to perch on her shoulder. They both like to tease each other and have friendly arguments.
Background: Cloud was found by Iysus after he'd been brutally beaten by a zangoose. While she nursed him back to health, he quickly grew attached to her. He has little memories from before the attack, and frequently dreams about it. On the way to Hidenvil, he evolved into an altaria.
Type: dragon, flying
Moves: Sky Attack, Mist, Take down, Dragon Pulse, Dragon Breath, Refresh, Sing, Peck
Weapon: none
 
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Namora- Accepted. Glad you could join us. ^^
 
Is it too late to join? If not i'll post a char sheet sign-up thing later... working on making new OC chars for story at the moment.
 
Of course not. Just remember to RP your way into the scene. Right now we are in a battle against Team Rocket. Can't wait to see your SU sheet. xd
 
"Don't worry, I heared the Pinser. I also saw that you were able to take proper action. So I let you handle it," he said. "What you did not see was the large pokemon in the shadows over there." He started up a Metor Mash attack went strate for the very large pokemon. It turned out to be a Steelex, and one twice the size of a normal one. Two more, of the same size, appered from the trees. "Looked liked we missed a couple of rockets," he said. Then more to him self he said, with a sadistic look on his face, "Time to show my ture strength." He gathered the steel enrgies into his fists, and with years of natrual traning spead off at amasing speeds. With one strike the first Steelex's head was nothing but a blood spurting stub. The second one was a little smarter and tried to stab Zeph with an Iorn Tail attack. With the remaning energies in his left hand, he stoped the attack, grabed the tail and thru it back thrugh the pokemon's head. He turned to the last Steelex, but decided to let some one else handle it. He sat down and Riku came up to him they medatied together. He was confitante that the others could handle it.
 
Name: Rolyn Moore
Age: 15
Height: 5'3"
Weight: 43Kg
Appearance: Black Shiny hair that has two turquoise streaks at the front, and falls just past mid-back. Usually platted to the right side coming over her shoulder. If not platted just left down blowing in the wind. Her skin lightly tanned, but still pale, even though she spends a lot of time outdoors. Sea green orbs that sparkle in the sun, and longish eyelashes. Wearing faded 3/4 skinny jeans that stop just about her knee leaving the rest of her legs bare. Often wears bare feet but has black and blue sneakers with white ankle socks. On her top half she wears a long emerald green singlet that has a light red rose design on the side. Around her neck she wears a red ribbon wrapped around it 3 times with a musical symbol pendant at the base. Skinny and doll-like figure even though she loves to eat. On her lower back which she always does her best to hide, she has 3 long painful looking scars from her dagger training.
Description: Rolyn is an outgoing, fun-loving person, as well as giggles when watching people fight. Extremely flexible and able to do flips off the ground to dodge things. She loves to be outside and often sleeps in trees. Rolyn has a short temper and gets very angry when she blows. Is somewhat sarcastic at times and hates stuck-up people with huge ego's. Can be rude and manner-less at times, but is usually kind and friendly. She loves travelling and being around someone.
Background: Rolyn has always had her ninetales, sapph by her side. At the age of 4 her mother gave her sapph as a present on the day she was born. Her parents got a divorce when she was 8 and she had to go live with her father. He wanted her to be able to protect herself so he didn't have to put up with her and payed for lessons to teach her how to use Daggers and knifes. By the age of 10 she had completely mastered them and they became apart of her soul. Rolyn and her father always faught and never got on well with each other. Rolyn and Sapph often ran away from her house and sleeping in trees and eating whatever they could find for a few days. The two are always together, and share one amazing bond. Side by side forever.
Element: Fire
Moves: Sunny day, Flamethrower, Fire Blast, Ember, Overheat, Fire spin, Will-o-wisp
Weapon: 2 daggers, and a random staff on her back.

Partner: Ninetales, Sapphire 'Sapph', Female
Appearance: Head just reaches to Rolyn's waist. Has Fire red eyes and extremely golden shiny fur.
Description: Sapph is gentle and kind around people it knows. But if someone who it doesnt like or a stanger touches her she lets loose a powerful flamethrower right into their face. Sapph is always there to keep Rolyn in line and out of trouble. Is very graceful and is able to jump and sleep in trees with Rolyn.
Background: Ever since Sapph was born she has been by Rolyn's side. Going through everything with Rolyn. When Rolyn was getting taught how to use dagger's and knifes, she was getting trained at the same time on how to strengthen her moves. Sapphire was still a vulpix then, and when her and Rolyn were out in the forest doing training, she evolved into ninetales, becoming stonger and extremely fast.
Type: Fire
Moves: Flamethrower, Solarbeam, Protect, Fire Blast, Rest, Overheat, Quick attack, Double team, Iron Tail, Confuse Ray.
Weapon: Powerful and sharp claws which she sharpens every day and teeth that rips things to peices.
 
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