Hoenn Journeys

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    Well this is my first sprite comic, it will be rated PG-13 for violence, and foul language... maybe some young members must not check the comic (in some scenes)

    Plot:
    The history tells about a boy named Renato, that was about to start his journey when he moved to Hoenn (unknown reason). While he's in there, he quickly heads to Littleroot Town, when he was about to leave, he meets Stephen, and they go together to Littleroot. While the story is passing away, they meet new friends, and new rivals, also new dangers.

    Main characters:

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    Name: Renato Age: 11 Hometown: Pallet Town
    Formerly known as Red, he is very energetic, sarcastic, almost nice and strong. Renato is a boy of Pallet that starts his journey with a Charmander, but before he could start, he moved to Hoenn, most of his friends didn't knew that he moved. In there, he learns about Prof. Birch and goes to Littleroot, before he could go there he meets Stephen and they go together to Littleroot but they split up because Renato faces a wild Seviper, then he's helped by May, after that he is bothered by her because she wants to battle her, he agrees after a while but a girl interfers, he tries to remember her, and he reminds that she is Kathy! his old-friend of school! He battled Sapphire and the battle ended as a draw, now both have a dislike to each other.

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    Name: Stephen Age: 15 Hometown: Blackhorn City
    Formerly known as Diamond, Stephen is funny, smart but very hasty. Stephen was a strong Pokemon trainer while he was younger, he won the 8th Silver Conference in Johto, and after that he moves to Hoenn with his Family, leaving all his Pok?mon with Prof. Elm. In there he forgot to pick any of his Pok?mon to keep his journey, but in his lucky day, he meets Renato and they go together to Littleroot Town, he goes to the lab of Prof. Birch but he doesn't finds him, so he searches him in route 101 (reason: screams) and he finds him, he helps both he and Ruby of the Poochyena attack but he recieves some help of Brendan.

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    Name: Kathy Age: 10 Hometown: Viridian City
    Also known as Yellow, she is hasty, a bit timid and nice. Kathy was in the Viridian's School with Renato until she moved to Hoenn and met two special friends, when Renato saw her again, she didn't remembered him, but quickly she remembered that he was a good friend in her school in Kanto. She recieved a Pikachu as a gift of Birthday so she can go to her own journey.

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    Name: Brendan Age: 11 Hometown: Somewhere in Johto
    Known by his friends as Ruby, he is cool, hates battles and loves Pok?mon beauty, Brendan is Norman's son, he seems to dislikes battles by some reason (...), He is an expert on making some clothes, he made Kathy her current clothing, and he seems to know May a bit, he meets Stephen while he and Prof. Birch were going attacked by a group of Poochyena, even if he hates battling, he doesn't likes seeing people in trouble, so he helps Stephen with a Treecko, now they have arrived to the lab...

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    Name: May Age: 10 Hometown: Littleroot Town
    Known by everyone as Sapphire, she is frantic, wild and very serious. May is Prof. Birch's daughter, she meets with Renato when they battle a wild Seviper together, after that, she wants to battle him. After a long "chase-me-if-you-can" game, Renato agrees to battle but the battle is interfered by Kathy, still they Battle in the Lab, the battle ends in a draw and May seems to dislike the result. Now she seems to totaly dislike Renato, same goes for him.


    Chapter one: V.S. Seviper

    Comic 01
    Comic 02
    Comic 03
    Comic 04
    Comic 05
    Comic 06
    Comic 07
    Comic 08

    V.S. Poochyena

    Comic 09
    Comic 10
    Comic 11
    Comic 12

    V.S. Mudkip

    Comic 13
    Comic 14
    Comic 15
    Comic 16
    Comic 17
    Comic 18

    V.S Pikachu

    Comic 19
    Comic 20
    Comic 21

    Fan Stuff:
    Stephen's fan art (Made by Rukari0)

    Thanks to:
    The Spriter resource.
    Renji for the Stephen/Diamond Sprites.
    Coronis for the Diamond/Yellow original Trainer Sprite.
    Signomi for the Yellow OW/Back sprites.
    Myself for the Red/Renato sprites.

    Well i hope that you enjoy it... comments?

    I'll update every weekend

    Thanks to ImageShack for Free Image Hosting
     
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    It's a pretty well-drawn comic, but I can't find the humor..if it's supposed to be funny, I don't see how. 6/10
    Keep making comics, though. They may not be funny, but they're good otherwise ^^
     
    i'm trying to make it as the special (but i don't know too much about the R/S sagas) well in there Sapphire appears and... whoa! *covers mouth* o.o;;
     
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