FireRed hack: [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)

[Vannah☆]

Well, as always, any help with the hack is appreciated. ^_^ Anyway, I have a really great start with the intro animation, so look forward to that! ^^

Edit: I've finished at least 1/7 of the final animation. c: So I'll let you all see my progress.

And no, this isn't a banner or anything like that. Oh, credit to West for the Stontle sprite art. I just edited it to breath, wake up, and get freaked out. o_o

 

[Milk]

Lol do you have msn?
I wanna practice my sprite ripping skills other then graphic skills >.<

 

[Vannah☆]

I don't know if we need ripping. Anyway, the leader of the team is away for the week, so Lyzo is in charge. So, you should contact him if you're interested in helping out. =3 (Or post in the Team Torzach thread in the team discussions section of the forum)

 

[Westrmistr]

Well, as always, any help with the hack is appreciated. ^_^ Anyway, I have a really great start with the intro animation, so look forward to that! ^^

Edit: I've finished at least 1/7 of the final animation. c: So I'll let you all see my progress.

And no, this isn't a banner or anything like that. Oh, credit to West for the Stontle sprite art. I just edited it to breath, wake up, and get freaked out. o_o

*Laughs intensely* That's cool. You didn't edit much, so that's okay. That's so cool!

 

[Vannah☆]

*Laughs intensely* That's cool. You didn't edit much, so that's okay. That's so cool!

<333 I told you I would use it~ Oh, and I'm glad my animations give you the ability to laugh so intensely. o_O xD I'm almost done with the next part too. ._. But it needs more screens to make bewstripe's running animation more... less stupid. =3 Oh, but I'll send it to ya so you can see it so far.

 

[agent bones]

Hey, if you want my opinion on stuff again here goes. Of those hero sprites the top middle one is my favorite, followed by the original and the far left one (I like that green shirt). I like the second version of the fakemon more, but for the changes made, he looks a smidge too happy... I think. And the Stontle is really good too. I like how sad he looks.

 

[Vannah☆]

Well, I suppose today is as good as any to have you guys take a look at these.

Government Official of some sort, Rival, Heroine, Hero. And anyway, I don't think we'll be changing the hero since Mac doesn't want to change him. =3 I appreciate your opinion though. This too, I guess.

Too small?

 

[Westrmistr]

Well, I suppose today is as good as any to have you guys take a look at these.

Government Official of some sort, Rival, Heroine, Hero. And anyway, I don't think we'll be changing the hero since Mac doesn't want to change him. =3 I appreciate your opinion though. This too, I guess.

Too small?

They all look great! But the Pokemons face is weird. If you could fix that, it would be perfect!

 

[Vannah☆]

*image removed*Better? Oh, and feel free to edit it, West. =3

 

[Destrozone]

*image removed*Better? Oh, and feel free to edit it, West. =3

Okay this thing is bothering the crap out of me. those spikes on its back have missing pixels, as does the rest of it's body. The facial expression is unreadable, and I think his eyes are just a plain yellow..........FIX IT! Sorry if I seem pushy.

EDIT: Kill most of my advice. copied into Paint, and saw almost all of the errors were due to internet posting =b looks nice, but the face still bothers the crap out of me.

 

[Milk]

The first one i think was even scarier o.o

 

[Vannah☆]

I think you guys thought that the yellow was part of the eye. I should've put in more shading. Anyway, any better?

 

[Don_VeCo]

I love you guys, that work on the fake on. You really work it to perfection. Its amazing how you ppl can take the oppinions and tips, and make it happen,so that the fakemon look really so much better with each time a new sprite is released. You guys are gods :-)
And the animation....wooooow. Im speechles. kudos. Best work i've ever seen, and that includes the real pokemon games as well ;-)

 

[agent bones]

I think you guys thought that the yellow was part of the eye. I should've put in more shading. Anyway, any better?

Ah yeah. To me this one looks a lot better. You guys are really rockin this thing.

 

[Destrozone]

I think you guys thought that the yellow was part of the eye. I should've put in more shading. Anyway, any better?

Beautiful. No more things bothering the crap out of me =) well, then again, that size is a tad large, but if you make it smaller there is a loss of detail that is necessary to make it look nice.

 

[Vannah☆]

xD That's true. I'll try sizing it down later. Oh and what do you guys think of this thing?

I don't really like it because... Well, before I gave it legs and a tail, it looked like a zubat/golbat/aerodactyl ripoff. I really don't know what to do with it. I tried some different colors but it still didn't look right. Not that this looks right. O_o Its name is supposed to be Tipatoo. =o I guess its sort of original in that its a four legged thing with wings in its first evo. But.. bleh. Oh and the hero/ine front OWs.

Any good?

 

[Destrozone]

xD That's true. I'll try sizing it down later. Oh and what do you guys think of this thing?

I don't really like it because... Well, before I gave it legs and a tail, it looked like a zubat/golbat/aerodactyl ripoff. I really don't know what to do with it. I tried some different colors but it still didn't look right. Not that this looks right. O_o Its name is supposed to be Tipatoo. =o I guess its sort of original in that its a four legged thing with wings in its first evo. But.. bleh. Oh and the hero/ine front OWs.

Any good?

Actually I did a Tipatoo already, although it's a tad bit different:

Just a bit large.
As to yours, I think the left wing looks oddly placed, and that tail only has one shade. also, the rigth wing looks like it is sprouting out of the body at a vertical angle, and then overlaps the body. How do you fly with that?

 

[Vannah☆]

Actually I did a Tipatoo already, although it's a tad bit different:

Just a bit large.
As to yours, I think the left wing looks oddly placed, and that tail only has one shade. also, the rigth wing looks like it is sprouting out of the body at a vertical angle, and then overlaps the body. How do you fly with that?

I would make a diagram to show you what it was supposed to be like, but I like your much better. xDD I still think it's a Zubat ripoff though.

 

[Destrozone]

I would make a diagram to show you what it was supposed to be like, but I like your much better. xDD I still think it's a Zubat ripoff though.

Yeah, the way it looks just reminds me of zubat. When I saw the concept design I went "That's a Purple Zubat with a round head!" Unfortunately my first thought was repeated. I will think of ways to make it better.

 

[Milk]

They do both look like zubats x