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FireRed hack: [HoTW 85] Pokemon Shadow Black

The pass looks... Too square, the mountains do not look natural enough. Make them less square, and do not make the layer above copy the layer below like that (but smaller), it looks... Unnatural.
your talking about the second one? well should i leave some gap while making layers?
 
I dedrew that Dark Pass heres it:
[PokeCommunity.com] [HoTW 85] Pokemon Shadow Black

Also,
The next town:
[PokeCommunity.com] [HoTW 85] Pokemon Shadow Black


[PokeCommunity.com] [HoTW 85] Pokemon Shadow Black


[PokeCommunity.com] [HoTW 85] Pokemon Shadow Black
 
do u like mountains a lot? :S lol. doesnt matter, this town is.... better mapped than atleast Dark Pass. Improvement. XD
 
Your mountains were your biggest problem with Dark Pass, not the lack of trees. Square mountains just don't look good as a finished product, so I'd be taking Banjora's advice and making it more 'natural looking'.

While the next town looks interesting from the photos you have posted, it also seems to suffer from square-mountain-itis :/
 
YAY! if that's true. lol
geez gotta do more scripting..

man, i really cant understand the square mountain problem, pls can someone explain, i cant understand :/ id be grateful.
 
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okay people, here's the map of the second town:
Spoiler:

Please, id be grateful if someone would help me? Square mountains. pls.
 
glad you liked it. well square mountains is still the prob. cant understand. :/
 
yay! now i understand. lol, robin9211.
well im getting onto this thing.
 
Okay i fixed the town a bit, coz there wasnt enough time.
have a look and see if it somewhat solves the problem.
Spoiler:
 
im guessing this one looks more natural, but theres scope for improvemnt. and also fix those Dark Pass screenies.
 
oh! thank you! ill fix those,but its almost dark, cant do it now. :(
 
The Pokemon Center is in front of the mountain entrance, which is not very natural. And house should have some space between them.
 
The Pokemon Center is in front of the mountain entrance, which is not very natural. And house should have some space between them.

How is that unnatural? Humans built the PC, they may have placed it there for a reason. It isn't unnatural if it was manmade.

Treeplacement may need to be improved, but the mountains look OK.
 
Nice. If any body lets this thread die... Shaymin! Use Seed Flare!
 
The Pokemon Center is in front of the mountain entrance, which is not very natural. And house should have some space between them.
that isnt unnatural, its there for a reason, as banjora said. ingame, the PC hides the entrance quite beautifully, giving the hero some sought of a challenge about finding how to go on!
 
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