Goldenhammerhead
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Okay, this is my first Roleplay, and I'm still not quite sure what the difference between the lunge and regular roleplay section is.
I assuming though that this is where you get tips on your story, how to make it better, and maybe a couple early sign-ups (corret me if I am wrong)
Here is my roleplay (oh, yes I have gone over this one, and fixed the horrible grammer and spelling in my earlier one).
It has been 100 years since the settings of the last Pokémon games.
Throughout the stories of the 1st, 2nd, 3rd and 4th generation games, the "Heroes" of the story preformed several foolish actions that would doom the world for a long time to come.
This is a list of actions that have led the world into a state of turmoil, aided by the very people who tried to avert this.
Year 2000 in the Pokémon world.
2000:
Kanto:
1. After team rocket's leader Giovanni, is defeated, he is let escape by "Red". He goes to work on a secret plan.
2. Red, in his foolishness goes on to capture the three legendary Kanto birds.
3. Red goes on to capture Mewtwo, having escaped and turned over a new leaf.
2001:
Kanto:
1. Several Pokémon have started to realise the disappearance of the legendaries in their region, and start to slowly take over it. Reports of Pokémon turning against their trainers start to appear.
Jhoto:
1. "Gold" destroyed team rocket radio tower plans, without noticing the maps that read the location of many more radio stations.
2. Many wild Pokémon start evolve quickly and become overpowered due to secret radio stations (in Jhoto that evolve Pokémon).
3. Gold captures the three Jhoto dogs, Lugia and Ho-oh, and Celebi.
4. Gold releases the unknown upon Jhoto.
5. Reports appear in Jhot of strange apparitions, Pokémon and buildings created by letter like figures in Jhoto.
6. Coastal cities in Jhoto start to suffer rapid whirlpools.
Sinnoh:
1. Dialga becomes more worn out as it struggles to control dilemmas in time, because of the capture of Celibi.
2005:
Kanto:
1. Pokémon in Kanto continue to go out of control.
Jhoto:
1. Reports of strange letter Pokémon continue, and several sightings lead to these Pokémon being called "The Unknown". These Pokémon use their powers to create a boat and escape to several caves in the Kanto isles, but many stay in Jhoto.
2. Many bodies of water in Jhoto start to become polluted due to the fact Suicune can no longer purify them.
Hoenn:
1. "Landon" captures all three weather pokes (Groudon, Kyogre and Raquazza), as well as the three Regi's of Jhoto, Mew (which was taking refuge in Hoenn at the time, to try and calm the havoc in progress) and the Lati-twins.
Everywhere:
1. In every region, Weather starts to fall into turmoil, Pokémon seem more uncontrollable, and continents, minerals and bodies of water seem to stop forming (because of the Regi triplet's capture). Scientists are stumped.
2007:
Everywhere:
The amounting turmoil continues to excel.
Sinnoh:
1. " Platinum" succeeds in freeing Dialga, Palkia and the free pixies, but then captures them.
2. Space itself stops advancing and in a chain reaction, Orre in destroyed and temporarily balances the crisis. Without Dialga time goes unmonitored, and because of the pixies capture, several virtues seem to slowly disappear.
3. Platinum continues, capturing Darkrai, Cresselia and Shaymin, as well as several Manapy.
4. Dreams and nightmares go out of control and many forests turn into managled bodies of vines and thorns.
5. Regigigas and Heatran are captured. Volcanoes cease to be active and continents cease to move.
6. Arceus wakes up, drained of much power.
Everywhere:
1.The tie of the capture of the legendary Pokémon, and the events, is finally made.
2. The four, "Legend Hunters" are called to release their legendaries, but do not, instead teaming up and locking them in coded master balls (of which only they can open). They then store these in the PC system.
3. Giovanni, expecting this, releases his secret weapon he has been preparing for years; a computer virus devastating all the PC stations and storage areas. Every poke ball in storage flies out of the storage areas, but just as this happens, a brief space distort sends most of the poke balls, scattered all around the globe, including Every legendary that was stored.
2008:
Everywhere:
1. It is decided that every Legendary captured, must be rounded up (it is unknown to all about the coded balls).
2. The 4 legend hunters are killed in riots.
The course however, was not swift, and 100 years later, barely any progress has been made.
What has happened over the 100 years:
The state of the world continually degraded, leaving barren wastelands all over the world.
2010: Mewtwo's poke ball was found by Team Rocket, and they started work on the code.
2015: The Pokémon leagues in all continents disbanded to aid the world.
2020: The first of the five puzzles on Mewtwo's poke ball is solved.
2022: Contacts are made by the governments with Arceus, who tells them he is weak at the current point of time, and will take another 178 years to recover. He does, however tell them; he can solve the codes of the Poke balls given to him (a first to the governments) in a month or less. And that there are some legends remaining:
Giritina, Something he called a "Deoxys", Jirachi, and some "Manapies"
2030: Deoxys, done using it's power to scan the world's state of turmoil, decided to wage was with Jirachi, forcing it into a sleep it could not awake from until his defeat, but then left the world for space again, destroying the hope of wishing away the turmoil.
2050: Humans started to retreat underground to escape most weather effects and wild Pokémon, which by now, most of were attacking humans on sight. Humans, had started to recover and re-tame Pokémon lost in the PC disaster.
2070: The following cities, have been destroyed-
Cerulean, Cinnabar (the actual island is all gone), Pacifalog, Litteroot and the entire battle area island on Sinnoh.
2080: Two more digits on Mewtwo's poke ball are solved.
2118: Arceus has regained enough power to light up, on the sky, and display the locations of all remaining legendary Pokémon balls. Everyone can see these, and a group of powerful Pokémon trainers (which is uncommon in this age due to death), which is you, sets out to find them, before evil doers, and of course team rocket.
There are a few different paths you can undertake. You could be a trainer attempting to regather all the Legends for Arceus, or a protestor/team rocket member trying to gather them for yourselves or destroy them.
Things to note on your quest:
Your views are rather unique in this age. Most people now believe the only way to end the turmoil in to destroy the balls, which they have the technology to do at every major city.
The world is now without many of its communicating systems, is unpredictable and most maps are at least 60 years old.
The world is in an economic depression.
Pokémon have advanced (as in, genetic evolution), and many have new unpredictable evolutions that can be triggered.
The world is now fairly violent and gang prone.
Rules
Nobody really likes them but they must be followed if this Roleplay is gonna work! Read them or you won't be accepted!
All PC rules apply here! As obvious as it is, some tend not to follow. O.O
No Godmodding at all! Not even with permission! Okay?!
No bunnying unless you have permission! Understood?
Joining up to this RP means you have to join a series of RPs. This is the first chapter of the Pokemon Chapters series, so when the next chapters pop up, you must join them! Not much of a commitment... really!
Keep swearing at a low, same goes with violence and any lovey-dovey scenes! (Who wants to be having loved-dovey seens anyway o.O)
Once all spaces are filled, I'm afraid you won't be able to join, so hurry And remeber, there are only two spaces available
If you want to be accepted, you must have good grammar, spelling and you must follow the sign-up sheet properly :|
Have fun ^^ I mean, if you're not having fun. what's the point in RPing
Okay, the sign up sheet.
If you wish to be on the good side, hunting the legends for Arceus:
Name:
Gender:
Age ( 13 to 15):
Personality:
Appearance:
History:
Pokémon: (maximum of 6, 2 may have new evolutions which you must describe to me)
If you wish to be on the other side of things:
Same as the first sign up, but you must add this:
Team Rocket/Protestor (trying to destroy the legends)
Okay, that's it!
I assuming though that this is where you get tips on your story, how to make it better, and maybe a couple early sign-ups (corret me if I am wrong)
Here is my roleplay (oh, yes I have gone over this one, and fixed the horrible grammer and spelling in my earlier one).
It has been 100 years since the settings of the last Pokémon games.
Throughout the stories of the 1st, 2nd, 3rd and 4th generation games, the "Heroes" of the story preformed several foolish actions that would doom the world for a long time to come.
This is a list of actions that have led the world into a state of turmoil, aided by the very people who tried to avert this.
Year 2000 in the Pokémon world.
2000:
Kanto:
1. After team rocket's leader Giovanni, is defeated, he is let escape by "Red". He goes to work on a secret plan.
2. Red, in his foolishness goes on to capture the three legendary Kanto birds.
3. Red goes on to capture Mewtwo, having escaped and turned over a new leaf.
2001:
Kanto:
1. Several Pokémon have started to realise the disappearance of the legendaries in their region, and start to slowly take over it. Reports of Pokémon turning against their trainers start to appear.
Jhoto:
1. "Gold" destroyed team rocket radio tower plans, without noticing the maps that read the location of many more radio stations.
2. Many wild Pokémon start evolve quickly and become overpowered due to secret radio stations (in Jhoto that evolve Pokémon).
3. Gold captures the three Jhoto dogs, Lugia and Ho-oh, and Celebi.
4. Gold releases the unknown upon Jhoto.
5. Reports appear in Jhot of strange apparitions, Pokémon and buildings created by letter like figures in Jhoto.
6. Coastal cities in Jhoto start to suffer rapid whirlpools.
Sinnoh:
1. Dialga becomes more worn out as it struggles to control dilemmas in time, because of the capture of Celibi.
2005:
Kanto:
1. Pokémon in Kanto continue to go out of control.
Jhoto:
1. Reports of strange letter Pokémon continue, and several sightings lead to these Pokémon being called "The Unknown". These Pokémon use their powers to create a boat and escape to several caves in the Kanto isles, but many stay in Jhoto.
2. Many bodies of water in Jhoto start to become polluted due to the fact Suicune can no longer purify them.
Hoenn:
1. "Landon" captures all three weather pokes (Groudon, Kyogre and Raquazza), as well as the three Regi's of Jhoto, Mew (which was taking refuge in Hoenn at the time, to try and calm the havoc in progress) and the Lati-twins.
Everywhere:
1. In every region, Weather starts to fall into turmoil, Pokémon seem more uncontrollable, and continents, minerals and bodies of water seem to stop forming (because of the Regi triplet's capture). Scientists are stumped.
2007:
Everywhere:
The amounting turmoil continues to excel.
Sinnoh:
1. " Platinum" succeeds in freeing Dialga, Palkia and the free pixies, but then captures them.
2. Space itself stops advancing and in a chain reaction, Orre in destroyed and temporarily balances the crisis. Without Dialga time goes unmonitored, and because of the pixies capture, several virtues seem to slowly disappear.
3. Platinum continues, capturing Darkrai, Cresselia and Shaymin, as well as several Manapy.
4. Dreams and nightmares go out of control and many forests turn into managled bodies of vines and thorns.
5. Regigigas and Heatran are captured. Volcanoes cease to be active and continents cease to move.
6. Arceus wakes up, drained of much power.
Everywhere:
1.The tie of the capture of the legendary Pokémon, and the events, is finally made.
2. The four, "Legend Hunters" are called to release their legendaries, but do not, instead teaming up and locking them in coded master balls (of which only they can open). They then store these in the PC system.
3. Giovanni, expecting this, releases his secret weapon he has been preparing for years; a computer virus devastating all the PC stations and storage areas. Every poke ball in storage flies out of the storage areas, but just as this happens, a brief space distort sends most of the poke balls, scattered all around the globe, including Every legendary that was stored.
2008:
Everywhere:
1. It is decided that every Legendary captured, must be rounded up (it is unknown to all about the coded balls).
2. The 4 legend hunters are killed in riots.
The course however, was not swift, and 100 years later, barely any progress has been made.
What has happened over the 100 years:
The state of the world continually degraded, leaving barren wastelands all over the world.
2010: Mewtwo's poke ball was found by Team Rocket, and they started work on the code.
2015: The Pokémon leagues in all continents disbanded to aid the world.
2020: The first of the five puzzles on Mewtwo's poke ball is solved.
2022: Contacts are made by the governments with Arceus, who tells them he is weak at the current point of time, and will take another 178 years to recover. He does, however tell them; he can solve the codes of the Poke balls given to him (a first to the governments) in a month or less. And that there are some legends remaining:
Giritina, Something he called a "Deoxys", Jirachi, and some "Manapies"
2030: Deoxys, done using it's power to scan the world's state of turmoil, decided to wage was with Jirachi, forcing it into a sleep it could not awake from until his defeat, but then left the world for space again, destroying the hope of wishing away the turmoil.
2050: Humans started to retreat underground to escape most weather effects and wild Pokémon, which by now, most of were attacking humans on sight. Humans, had started to recover and re-tame Pokémon lost in the PC disaster.
2070: The following cities, have been destroyed-
Cerulean, Cinnabar (the actual island is all gone), Pacifalog, Litteroot and the entire battle area island on Sinnoh.
2080: Two more digits on Mewtwo's poke ball are solved.
2118: Arceus has regained enough power to light up, on the sky, and display the locations of all remaining legendary Pokémon balls. Everyone can see these, and a group of powerful Pokémon trainers (which is uncommon in this age due to death), which is you, sets out to find them, before evil doers, and of course team rocket.
There are a few different paths you can undertake. You could be a trainer attempting to regather all the Legends for Arceus, or a protestor/team rocket member trying to gather them for yourselves or destroy them.
Things to note on your quest:
Your views are rather unique in this age. Most people now believe the only way to end the turmoil in to destroy the balls, which they have the technology to do at every major city.
The world is now without many of its communicating systems, is unpredictable and most maps are at least 60 years old.
The world is in an economic depression.
Pokémon have advanced (as in, genetic evolution), and many have new unpredictable evolutions that can be triggered.
The world is now fairly violent and gang prone.
Rules
Nobody really likes them but they must be followed if this Roleplay is gonna work! Read them or you won't be accepted!
All PC rules apply here! As obvious as it is, some tend not to follow. O.O
No Godmodding at all! Not even with permission! Okay?!
No bunnying unless you have permission! Understood?
Joining up to this RP means you have to join a series of RPs. This is the first chapter of the Pokemon Chapters series, so when the next chapters pop up, you must join them! Not much of a commitment... really!
Keep swearing at a low, same goes with violence and any lovey-dovey scenes! (Who wants to be having loved-dovey seens anyway o.O)
Once all spaces are filled, I'm afraid you won't be able to join, so hurry And remeber, there are only two spaces available
If you want to be accepted, you must have good grammar, spelling and you must follow the sign-up sheet properly :|
Have fun ^^ I mean, if you're not having fun. what's the point in RPing
Okay, the sign up sheet.
If you wish to be on the good side, hunting the legends for Arceus:
Name:
Gender:
Age ( 13 to 15):
Personality:
Appearance:
History:
Pokémon: (maximum of 6, 2 may have new evolutions which you must describe to me)
If you wish to be on the other side of things:
Same as the first sign up, but you must add this:
Team Rocket/Protestor (trying to destroy the legends)
Okay, that's it!
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