i need help with my netbattle team

[bossman34]

im stuck. im trying to build a great team but then a weakness gets exposed. help. this is what i have now.. suggestion and criticism welcome

Umbreon (F) @ Leftovers (Tank)
Trait: Synchronize
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Def / 252 SDef
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Confuse Ray
- Protect
- Toxic
- Wish

Snorlax (F) @ Chesto Berry (Tank/Physical Sweeper)
Trait: Immunity
EVs: 179 HP / 154 Atk / 177 SDef
Brave Nature (+Atk, -Spd)
- Curse
- Rest
- Return
- Shadow Ball

Swampert (F) @ Chesto Berry (Mixed Sweeper)
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 98 HP / 157 Atk / 3 Def / 252 SAtk
Quiet Nature (+SAtk, -Spd)
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Rest
- Surf

Metagross @ Leftovers (Physical Sweeper)
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Agility
- Earthquake
- Meteor Mash
- Rock Slide

Gyarados (F) @ Salac Berry (Physical Sweeper)
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Endure
- Flail

Celebi @ Leftovers (Annoyer/Special Sweeper)
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Leech Seed
- Psychic
- Recover


i think im lacking zam or maybe gar for celebi, and maybey a pseudohazer?

 

[sims796]

Yes yes, I remember now. Netbattle means third-gen. I'll try Gyarados, but it'll be hard.

Gyarados-Adamant
Earthquake
Dragon Dance
Roar
Hyper Beam

Since water in third gen runs off sp.att. Gyarados's special is awful and can't use water properly. Hyper Beam is still on attack, so maybe it'll work.

Then again, I'm not good at third gen

 

[SytheXP]

wow my net battle got deleted earlier this week so I cant really help you but why are they all females? try a few males that might help dought it but who knows.