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Id est damnum innocentiae (OOC thread)

Thanks a lot for the critique, can't wait for Day 2 ^.^ Oh and the reason she quote end quote "Died" so quickly due to heat WAS because she forgot to take off her mountain-clothing. I specifically thought of it while writing the post and thought about how she wasn't supposed to be the sharpest tool in the shed, so I thought it'd be comic relief in the next post, haha.
 
If I sounded like a jerk I didn't mean to and I pretty much agree with the new rules. :)
 
That's fine. I'll write up a bunny post (to finish the task) and then your character will have an illustrious death xD

Strikit: what I can do is have lilliana's chaacter die, an you take over her watch. If that makes any sense. So you'd get her dy 2 post.

Unfortunately charizard man all the spaces are taken.

And Yeah SUs will be closed now. :)
 
On a really side note my characters theme song is City by Hollywood Undead
 
I know a lot of people who do it so I thought, why not? :)
 
Well it has to be grisly XD Though I think if I left the mess there, I'd be traumitizing anyone who'd come across the place.

Actually I'd prefer it'd teach my character to start being serious with this chizz. (The Challenges)
 
I suppose what I could do is for a Day descriptor, I could have it so that everyone will come across a dead pokemon or osmething too.

*Raises Hand*

Ooh Oooh you could have the pokemon and with a broken pokeball to show it isnt just a corpse of just any pokemon.
 
Might be able to get post up. :) And anybody can critique my posts, I'd prefer it that way, so I get more than one opinion. (No offense Feign :P)
 
Just to let everyone know, I will be currently 'away'. My homephone and internet has been cut off because of my separated dad wanting our homephone, and then running into Australia for a vacation ==; So...I have no clue when it'll be back up. Me and my mom will be selling our jewelry, so we should be able to make enough to get it back running~! ^^d

By the way, if I don't post within 2 days, anyone can bunny my character while I'm gone. I have decided that Bern will lose against the 'other trainer'. Just remember to keep Bern in character~! (Refer to day 1, profile, ect.) She is very silent and emotionless around people, and she might just have the other trainer win without herself really trying to beat them.
 
My Day 2 is up, I would be appreciative to anyone who reviews.
 
Back from my hiatus. Surprised nobody has offered to bunny my character yet x,D

The new member of the rp has good promise, I could tell you that!

Baseballa@
I see a typo close to the end of day 2. It's sounds as though you're telling your Pokemon to attack the Ursaring when they're really attacking the Vileplume....Just thought I'd point that out~!
 
Back from my hiatus. Surprised nobody has offered to bunny my character yet x,D

The new member of the rp has good promise, I could tell you that!

Baseballa@
I see a typo close to the end of day 2. It's sounds as though you're telling your Pokemon to attack the Ursaring when they're really attacking the Vileplume....Just thought I'd point that out~!

Oh thanks for pointing that out, I'll get it.
By the way was it good?:nervous:
 
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