improved pokemon master

[Jedite1000]

here r the comics i hope u like ir

volume 1

 

[Signomi]

sorry i will put it up soon

It's recommended that you don't make a thread yet unless you've got any finished comics ready. Since you posted that in your other thread, that one shall be deleted. Please do not make duplicate threads.

 

[Silver Sol]

In all honestly JediMaster this comic is still as not as good as your last one. I see no difference really. That said, maybe you should fix some sprites.

 

[Matt Silver]

In all honestly JediMaster this comic is still as not as good as your last one. I see no difference really. That said, maybe you should fix some sprites.

Your wrong there Silver. I think he changed a speech bubble...
Still the bad sprites,still the bad grammer. 'Member to use Capitals>
btw he isnt Jedi Master it's Jedite1000. (I think)

 

[Decepticon]

besides all the problems Mattthegreat listed i like it :)

 

[Crystal Walrus]

also I gave him the better overworlds 4 people so it should look better

 

[Jedite1000]

what is wrong with my sprites tell me...i dont get whats wrong..it looks fine for me...plz tell me

 

[Signomi]

This shall be closed on request

~Cloded