Innagadadavida's Fakemon Thread

[Innagadadavida]

I would like to share some of my own Fakemon. I'm open for constructive criticism, and if anybody wants to use my sprites in their games, I'd be more than happy to help. Just let me know. Without further adieu...

1.) Spinchworm
Pokedex Entry
Spinchworm's method of atack is to spit acidic mucus. The mucus takes only seconds to develop.
Stats
Size: About the same size as a Caterpie
Area: Kanto - Veridian Forest, Johto - None, Hohenn - Petalburg Woods
Evolution: None
Type: Bug, Poison
Sprite Info
Spinchworm was made from scratch, and borrows colors from Kakuna (not including the shiney).
Aditional Info
Spinchworm's name comes from two words "Spit" and "Inchworm". The Pokemon is based on the geometer moth (Wikipedia entry)

2.) Fluffum
Pokedex Entry
Fluffum has very little body mass and it's mostly made of hair.
Stats
Size: About the same size as a Togapi
Area: Kanto - Verious Routes, Johto - Verious Routes, Hohenn - Safari Zone
Evolution: Fluffum > (Lv. 20) Pointium
Type: Normal
Sprite Info
Spinchworm was made from scratch, and borrows parts and colors from Sparrow and Tangela.
Aditional Info
Fluffum is small and cute, it's stats are low, like Jigglypuff and Clefary.

3.) Snowlae
Pokedex Entry
Snowlae can not fly, but it can glide with ease.
Stats
Size: About the same size as a Caterpie
Area: Kanto - Seafoam Islands, Johto - none, Hohenn - none
Evolution: Evolution: Snowlae > (Lv: 25) Frosten > XXXXXX
Type:Ice
Sprite Info
Snowlae was made from scratch, but borrows the mouth from D&P Wigglytuff.
Aditional Info
I'm working on a better name. It's bad now, but before I was thinking about calling it Booger.

4.) Frosten
Pokedex Entry
Frosten has wings, but they are too small for it to fly with.
Stats
Size: About the same size as a Wailmer.
Area: Kanto - Seafoam Islands, Johto - none, Hohenn - none
Evolution: Snowlae > (Lv: 25) Frosten > XXXXXX
Type: Ice, Flying
Sprite Info
Frosten was made from scratch, and borrows colors from Dewgong.
Aditional Info
I created Frosten when I was nine, before Gold and Silver ever came out. I designed the sprite after a picture I found while rummaging through my old Pokemon drawings.

5.) Brightfly
Pokedex Entry
Brightfly's tail only lights out when it faints. The light stays on even when it sleeps.
Stats
Size: About the same size as a Pincer
Area: Kanto - none, Johto - Various Routes, Hohenn - Various Routes
Evolution: None
Type: Bug, Electric
Sprite Info
Brightfly borrows parts from Pincer, Beedrill, and Fortrace.
Aditional Info
The Pokemon is based on a Firefly.
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Pokedex for a custom region, coming soon.
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New trainer sprites (Still under construction) let me know if you're interested in using them.

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I have many many ideas, and I will update soon. Thanks for your time and let me know what you think.

Also, check out some of my favorite Fakemon creator threads:
Belzeebub
Dragonfree
Samson

 

[doesn't matter]

Well your Troplet is nice, but maybe you should move the neck down a bit or something, it looks too high up at the moment.

Spinchworm and that blue one both lack black on the outline, so you'll need to fix that up.

Fluffurn is definitely cute. It reminds me of Kuriboh somehow XD

Frosten is very well done in terms of shading and outline. However, you have used too much black on the nose and teeth.

Brightfly is well drawn, but it has a completely black outline. Cept for the part around the tail, which you have nicely attempted to brighten up. Good job.

The girl trainer's hair is wrong somehow - one side it goes in front of the shoulder, on the other side it goes behind.

 

[Belzeebub]

As said; Spinchworm need mayor work on it's outline. It is a little bit hard to make out the shape with that bright colour on a white background.

I totally adore fluffum! Nothing more to be said...

Brightfly is a great idea.

Now for the one inspirated by viroxy ;) *dumdumdum -tense music*
It's sooo cute ^^. Honestly, I don't mind at all that you got your inspiration from me when it looks as cute as that. Like a little virus dino. ^^ Love it.

And thank you x100, for having me as one of your favourite pixelators. Didn't see that one coming :o !

ps. I'm a boy ;)

 

[Innagadadavida]

I've updated the main post. I've added cels, DS and Pixel art for Spinchworm, as well as pixel art for Fluffum.

This one turned out very well. I did it all by scratch in paint, I'm very pleased with the results.

This one turned out almost picture perfect. The shading is great, I think.

 

[Captain Arcane]

Your Fluffum is really really good! Its like a hairy Tangela!! ^_^
Overall, they are all very well done, but your fluffum amazing! ^_^
Keep it up! ^_'

 

[Belzeebub]

I LOVE the pixel art :)

just one thing; it's ok that you kinda borrow the design since you give credit, but please use other names than those I use. thankies.

 

[Innagadadavida]

Your Fluffum is really really good! Its like a hairy Tangela!! ^_^
Overall, they are all very well done, but your fluffum amazing! ^_^
Keep it up! ^_'

Thanks, Captain Arcane. And also thanks A LOT for the "Spriters Pokedex" I use that A LOT!

I LOVE the pixel art

just one thing; it's ok that you kinda borrow the design since you give credit, but please use other names than those I use. thankies.

Oh, sorry man. I was at a loss for a name, I get it now though. I've changed it.

 

[Belzeebub]

ok thanks.
keep up the good work though.
would love to see more from you.

 

[Captain Arcane]

Thanks, Captain Arcane. And also thanks A LOT for the "Spriters Pokedex" I use that A LOT!


Oh, sorry man. I was at a loss for a name, I get it now though. I've changed it.

Wow, thanx dude, your only the second person to thank me for making that! And like I said in the thread, I made it for the community. Oh, and also, be sure to get the new updated one, I just updated it a few hours ago!

 

[ShinyPikachu]

I really like your Fakemon, you have a good talent, keep it up and I can't wait to see more ^^

 

[Innagadadavida]

I've updated the first post. I've gotten rid of the no name, and added the prevolution to Frosten. I am working on a female gender deformation for Brightfly (which by the way, needs some serious work, any suggestions?).

I've also began working on some more pixel art, but those take SO much time, I spent at least four hours total working on that Fluffum.

I really like your Fakemon, you have a good talent, keep it up and I can't wait to see more ^^

Thanks, I promise to make more.

Wow, thanx dude, your only the second person to thank me for making that! And like I said in the thread, I made it for the community. Oh, and also, be sure to get the new updated one, I just updated it a few hours ago!

No, thank you. Great job!

 

[AztecSunshine]

great sprites you have there you should make more of them

 

[Omega Latios]

Good sprites, but not perfect, though.

Some of your fake's outline is a little choppy. And the R/S sprites... you just shrunk the pixelart. No-offense... but they look bad. They are just too small... You should make them bigger. You should also work with the shading of #3 and #4. I know they're in D/P style, but it seems they have only one shade of white... and Fluffum's pixel art... there is some places where the outline is more than 1 pixel wide. In Pokémon sprites, the outline is never more than 1 pixel wide (except if there is much A-Aing). And the purple bug thing... well, it's good, but its legs don't have any outline. And the center of the body doesn't have any shading. And bugs usually look shiny, so try making it more shiny looking.

~Omega