Inu-kun strikes again! More Poetry

I'm bored... so i'm writing again.

Hmm... A couplet of haiku!

Walnut brown eyes shine,
Smiling brighter then the sun,
Must you wonder why?

The air is crisper,
The world is brighter witht you,
That's why you're my love.
 
scripted pixels form on the screen
some of them small, others large.
but they form chains. and those chains...
they form coherant lines.
sentances, the peole call them.
and those sentances form paragraphs.
and those paragraphs, from the right person,
soothe and calm and encourage.
it isnt a bad thing, to want to read those paragraphs.
but you havent sent me any lately.
why? It... hurts.
 
...
Looking into myself I cant help but wonder...
Why....
It isnt a hard question, I hope...
Me...
I'm trying to see things, like you see them...
I'm...
But things are just... plain. Stupid...
Nothing...
I hope, but does it help any? I feel so...small...
But...
I try and try, but it seems like I'm just getting worse...
I...
I... sometimes think I should go. Then... you'd smile more...
Love...
But, if I did that... I couldnt smile at all...
You...
It sounds bad... but I guess it'd be okay...
Is...
You'd be happy. That's all I really care about, you know?
That...
I just feel so distant from you now. We havent talked In a while...
Enough...Everything seems like... Like you want to forget...about... me...
Am...
I know, I know... you hate me thinking like this... But I cant help it...
I...
You said it yourself... People change. Feelings change. No matter how we try not to.
Am...
So as I chastize myself for thinking stupid things, please dont get mad...
I...
My head is spinning with thoughts. With stupid things I think... With feelings I have...
Enough...
But, when I think of you, I smile... just for a moment. I tell myself...
Am...
'She's thinking of me. And missing me. And loving me. She'll be back.'
I...
But I remember... No one... ever really came back. I guess they never though of me as...
Important...
You always say you aren't like those others. I... I dont think you are.
Worthy...
But, I cant stop these thoughts. It's how I feel. And... you want to know what I feel...
Needed...
I feel so... Alone... Hollow... I'm a shell. Emptiness echoes my crying. But no one hears it.
Loved...
I want to stop being like I am. But I wouldnt be me. I want to stop thinking.
Still...
You never had to worry about me. Yet you did. You dont need me. Yet... I was there.
Wanted...
I dont know what to think. Everyone yells. 'Your an Idiot!' 'Moron!'... It hurts.
Yours...
You were the one that made me feel good about being... a goofball. Now...
Please...
Now I feel like all I did was force you away. I tried to be myself. And... you...
I...
You make it seem like you want nothing to do with me... why?
Need...
My chest hurts. My heart... My mind. I just hurt. I want to stop thinking. I cant.
You...
I'm... weak after all. I'm sorry. But I can be stronger. I just dont know what to fix.
To...
I need help, Koi. Everyone is pulling me apart. Telling me how I should be. They arent you.
Say...
What... if... I change... and you hate me? What If I... dont and you leave?
You...
It's crazy, the things I'm thinking... I dont know what's right... What's wrong.
Love...
I'm more trouble then I'm worth... arent I? ... I'm sorry... I... I can... go... if you'd like.
Me...
This feeling... Is winning. Everyone is helping it. I've got no one on my side...
Too...
You'd always... make me feel so... happy. Things here are... a disaster.
I'm...
I'll wait for you. You're nworth anything I could give. You are... But...
Broken...
I dont know what will be left of me when you come back. I'm tearing at the seams.
Without...
I...I'm sorry I'm so weak. I'm sorry. But I dont know how to get stronger by myself.
You...
I hate feeling like this. I hate bothering you with my crap. But you... make it all go away.
Koibito...
You make the rain so amazing. You make the sun just right. You fix me.
I'm...
It may be backwards, but you still fix me babe. You make things lighter...
Always...
I'd rather depend on a person... then some... chemical cocktail. I'm sorry it's you...
Yours...
Please forgive me... I'm trying to be stronger. I just need some help. Will you...
My...
If I try as hard as I can... will you help me to climb up this ledge I fell from?
Love...
I dont want to feel so down. Will you... love me if I'd fail a few times?
I love you...
I'm determined to be with you.. I'll do whatever I must. I just need help. I wont give up.
I promise.
 
Nice poems! Although it would take me about 10 minutes to read them all because of your 8th ocyapost, XDDD. BUt yeah, very nice ^_^
 
Legolas said:
Nice poems! Although it would take me about 10 minutes to read them all because of your 8th ocyapost, XDDD. BUt yeah, very nice ^_^
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xD Yeah. well... like i said... if i waited for people to reply... you'd see like... three of them...



** Edit.**

Severly not in the mood to post anything, so no one gets to see any new work by me until I come back from my break.
Dont like it? Too bad.
-Rips Sacred Necklace off-
An dun think 'Gome can sit me 'till I post more poems. Got it?
 
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... Sit at home and be bored to heck and back...
Get online an put up with people, and my laptop, makeing me greatly purturbed.
You're lucky I have a short attention span and hate being bored.


A small bloom pokes it's way through the snow.
It's the first of the season, it seems.
But this bloom will need care and love to grow.
Everything is out to kill it, it seems.
The warm sun sets, and the cold of the dark night sets in.
It shivers and cry's for warmth, it seems.
The coons and rabbits that run around are hungry.
It prays it wont be eaten, it seems.
It lasted the night as it fought and fought to stay alive.
It's exhausted, and it cant go on, it seems.
But someone comes along, seeing that bud.
And the little one gets a safer, warmer home, it seems.
That little one is happy. That little one is fed.
That little one was saved by an angel, it seems.
It grows old. And as it wilts it sees, out a window,
The patch he was taken from, where namy others live, it seems.
The aged flower looks at the blooms as they sway in the sun.
Alone and unhappy is how he shall die, it seems.
 
Keh.
What's up with me now...
I've changed... so much.
I guess it's that wench.
She's to blame.
Yeah, so what?
I do like some of these changes... but...
Hmph. Not like she's...
Got any reason ta put up with me.
She... is the one that doesnt need...
Aw, screw it.
I ain't sayin nothin, so back off ya lech!
An I swear... if ya talk to her, or anyone, 'bout this...
You wont be able ot have any 'private exorcisms' with the ladies.
Get the point?
 
With a sigh I sit back down,
The dampness in the grass eventually soaks through my pants.
'I guess it's gunna be a long year, huh koi?'
I softly speak, talking to myself again.
I'm not against working hard...
I do get tired easily though... That happens...
Specially when you cant sleep well.
"I'll be waiting here, for you," I begin, a small tear staining my cheek,
"So if you come, you'll find me. I promise."
But I laugh, much to my distaste.
Half of me say's I'm wasting my time.
The other half is clinging to the hope that...
Is slowly fading.
If there is hope, however, then I will cling.
If, for some reason, this is unnacceptable, then...
Too bad.
Didnt I tell ya I loved you, mate?


>.> okay. so i've been feeling a bit down. It... happens. i got a song too, but I'mma fix it and hope the best. i'll post it later or something.


not that song.

If i keep telling myself you do...
Then, I'll be right... right?
But things seem to say otherwise...
A new home. New people.
An old place. A boring young man.
I know you're going to be amazed...
But I'm... scared. I'm allowed to be.
I'm trying to smile. I am.
But, I've always wanted to fall in love.
Love... like the kind I think we have.
I'm sick of everyone telling me...
"If it's meant to be... she'll be back."
I'm trying to be amazing, so that...
You'll be interested in me again.
"I met this really cool boy!"
Remember saying that?
... I felt so special. I was...
Am I still?
Back then... it seemed like I could read your mind.
It was so great, I wasnt as scared.
But... I... I see things that make me think.
Words... other couples. My past.
But I think bad things.
'I'm not interesting. She'll find someone who is.'
I want to stop thinking that.
**** my bad thoughts to hell, I say.
So... I will sit here, in a bit of pain...
Saying something of a different nature.
'She loves me. She does.'
Please excuse the crazy moments.
The one's where i'm all sad.
I may not know what you're thinking now...
I wish, though, I did.
But I'll keep sayin 'She loves me.'
Cuz... I 'least know you once did.
 
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>.>:; Since when did Inu become emo? Well... I've been that way.
>< Dont like it then too bad!

Here's one more bout Kagome. /sigh.
I miss her.

Smiles
i sit here, alone, day after day
thinking... working... waiting.
I think to myself of you.
Your face. Your skin. Those lips...
And I smile.
Not for everyone around me, no.
I smile for you. Even though you're not near.
I'm working to make myself better.
So that I can actually drive us somewhere...
Instead of ask you to... Gomen...
I'm working to get somewhere in life.
Not with anyone else... Just you.
That's what I want, you know...
I'm waiting, and waiting more
Just to see your face again.
To hold you. Kiss you. Sing to you.
So, I will wait. And I will perfect my smile.
Just for you.
 
I've read them all. They're really quite beautiful, my arch enemy. XD Ain't that funny.

I often write the same style of poetry. Mine's usually depressing though. The kind that's like: "I wake up one morning and find you not there.." I'm often a pretty depressing person. But I do like your style, it's fluent, clear, and your vocabulary is just great. I look forward to reading more of your work.
 
~Kagura~ said:
I've read them all. They're really quite beautiful, my arch enemy. XD Ain't that funny.

I often write the same style of poetry. Mine's usually depressing though. The kind that's like: "I wake up one morning and find you not there.." I'm often a pretty depressing person. But I do like your style, it's fluent, clear, and your vocabulary is just great. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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-blushes- Err... Thanks... I didnt think anyone really read them though. xD I mean... Cy did... and a few others... Anywho... Arigatou, Kagura-chan.
^.^ But just cuz Kagome's gone doesnt mean ya can hit on me! ( j/k )
Thanks... I'll have to check to see what you wrote sometime....


here's a present cuz i... dunno. i just feel like tellin you all how much I love my Kagome.

its difficult...
to be forced to let go of someone.
To be pushed away.
To cry.
But in all my pain,
in all the sorrow
in all the years...
I've never loved anyone
Or anything
Half as much as you.
Your eyes instill faith.
Faith in myself.
Faith in love.
I'm stronger than I was before.
I'm not just a faceless nobody.
I'm yours.
I can smile, knowing that you will be there.
I can trust again.
I can beleive that you wont go anywhere.
I may be scared, but isnt everyone?
But no matter what, there is one thing I cant.
I can't live without you, Tanya.
I couldn't breathe again.
The world would surround me.
I would be weak.
Tears would start falling.
I doubt I would speak.
My face would never smile,
Neither would my heart.
You wouldn't just destroy me...
You'd rip me apart.
I know i shouldn't say that.
You wont hurt me. I know it.
If I must wait to be yours,
Then I ain't goin.
I'll stand right here, smiling away.
Sooner or later, it will be our day.
I'm proud to say I'm me.
I'm proud to hold your hand.
And kissing your lips...
Makes me the greatest man.
So dont run off
If I need you too much.
Please dont scoff...
If, at times, I'm not enough.
I'm doing my best to make you proud,
I'm screaming I love you!
Nice and loud.
As I pick up the peices that fell from me
You hand me the duct tape.
You're fixing me, dammit.
 
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GGGGGGAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!
-curses loudly and heavily-
I'm just... Stumped. I've got so much I want to say, but I dont want to say anything to you guys.
>< I am so po'd right now.
Sorry. no poem. I'll post one tomorrow.
 
"Remember our first kiss...es?"

There is a taste in my mouth.
One that begs to be refreshed.
It's... Impossible to describe...
But so deeply cherished, that amazingly...
I yearn for it. Heart, body, and soul.
My heart feels numb to the happiness of life.
My body aches all over, the wanting is that bad.
My soul sighs, unable to rejoyce in the fact that I love you.
I. Want. Your. Kiss.
I beg of you, please, kiss me like the first time.
Where once wasnt enough,
Twice was better,
Three times wasnt the charm.
Kiss me like you did, that fourth time.
From the first to the fourth,
To the fifty-second...
To now...
I knew I loved you from that first...
Tiny... Peck. But... If you dont mind...
Can I have more?
 
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