is this ok?

[Gelidice]

This is my very first sugi-style fakemon. i usually just sketch. is it any good? please don't be harsh, it's my first try.

 

[jasonresno]

It definitely has potential. I think it'd fit right in with the current Pokemon. I'd love to see it in different poses!

 

[Anastasia.R]

Well, its very cute and it has nice bright colors. I love the color of the shading aswell. =]

The thing is, the outlines could use a bit more help. ;o And some shading is needed here and there, but it's not bad for a first. ;O

If you keep at it, you'll make wonderful pieces of work!

~A.R​

 

[Gelidice]

thanks! i'll post the evolution. i admit the lines suck..... badly