I've been writing lately. Go on, laugh at it... ;;

It's some good poems I'll never be able to write..
Oh well..I wish you could post some more..
 
o_o Just... it's crap... well I'm writing some, I'm experiencing writers' block though, evil ><
 
>.<' God darnit Kylie...
https://www.pokecommunity.com/threads/27164 Do you see that Kylie? that is MY thread. It is the LARGEST poetry thread here. I wish I could write as good as you, because you're one of the best poets I have ever known...you express yourself with such great detail, and that's something I will NEVER do.

~Eli

P.S WRITE MORE!!! *turns writers block into circle* Writing Circle not writers block!!!! XD And you WRITE in writers circle XD!!!
 
*laughs scornfully at her own poetry*

It?s okay for them to say to be just like their ideal
But you can?t aspire to be theirs in a world that?s real
And if you start getting your hopes and standards too high
Start putting all your belief into a little lie
When the mask is pulled away and you fall down low
The higher you were, the more it?ll hurt and the lower you?ll go
And some things are just impossible no matter how hard you try
What?s the point of wasting effort in perfection ?til you die?
?Cause you?re even better knowing when to stop, it?s maturity
Better than turning determination into desperation into insecurity
And the more you listen to them the more you?ll feel worse
Perhaps a huge conscience combined with perfectionism is a curse
Perfectionism isn?t like high standards no not at all
Sometimes you just can?t climb that too-high wall
And their ideal is uncertainty inside, because they?ll never practice what they preach
Hypocrites trying to change us all to a point of perfection you just can?t reach
Maybe they should change themselves first and prove that you can be completely right
Or otherwise you?re just battling for an impossible goal in an impossible fight
 
Here's some more crappy stuff. But I just had to write it. I wrote it about a song. x.x

When I drowned in depression I clung onto you
In your sweet voice I found solace and comfort too
And when I was sinking on you I relied
And that day I nearly committed suicide
I held on in shadows to your light
I knew you?d guide me to what was right
You were inhuman, unable for me to hold
For I can only listen to your lyrics unfold
Just listening to you softly in the far away distance
I close my eyes and dissolve into a dreamlike trance
I couldn?t run and I couldn?t hide
All I would have done is died
You swallowed all the tears I cried
My innermost emotion in you I can confide
My only friend in a world of bitter tears
My only comfort for facing another thousand icy years
And the thought of struggling another second is wearing
Especially when nobody listens and nobody?s caring
But I think that with your help I can cope
But I think that with your help there?s hope
Melody, melody, tonight I?ll finally close my eyes and fall asleep
Yet you will dry my eyes and sustain me as I weep?
 
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