Kanto Adventures

NoOb GaMeMaKeR

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    • Seen Dec 26, 2007
    Here is my comic and some things i have to say.

    PLEASE DONT STEAL MY SPRITES THEY WERE MADE BY ME!

    [PokeCommunity.com] Kanto Adventures

    [PokeCommunity.com] Kanto Adventures
     
    No offense but the sprites are poorly drawn. Fanfic form of Comics aren't really good unless you know what your doing, and everything happened so fast, the people just... Teleported...

    3.5/10

    You should read the Comic Making Guide that's stickied..
     
    I just love the little pokemon sprites. The story isn't all that impressive, but the pokemon are amusing. xD That Geodude is awesome. The Weedle & Caterpie are cute, too. :D
     
    Is this a joke? Seriously. I'm not sure.

    Well, anyways, you skipped about.. three/four comics worth of information, you used badly edited overworlds (But a good attempt at the Pokemon), and I'm completely confused. YOur character robbed Prof. Oak, battled someone, and went through all of Viridian City in two comics. Talk about steroids 0.0;;
     
    whatever i should never post stuff cuz everybody hates the stuff i make
     
    pretty good, but pidgey looks like dragonite.
     
    I'm sorry if I came across flaming, here's what I meant to say.

    Is this one of those jokes? It's not very funny if it is.

    I'm sorry if it isn't, it's just that there has been an increase in people making fun of n00bs. No that you're a n00b. You're more like a n00bie. A beginner. You haven't trained yet.

    Well, I like that you didn't use the MD overworlds, and instead tried spriting you're own. You should try to generally not skip that much. Keep in as much pointful (Not pointless) information in as possible.
    Unfortunately, you used a way over-used battling the gyms plot. Also, the Squirtle is very weak, and should not know Water Gun. I don't think Squirtle ever learns Water Gun. But it learns Bubble. Brock also has an Onix.

    I like your attempt at a custom hero sprite, but from behind it looks like the normal Fr/Lg sprite.
    That's all.
     
    I get it.By the way it was my first attempt to making a pokemon comic.I am a gamemaker thats a noob haha.
     
    Alright NoOb GaMeMaKeR as you are probably aware from everyone elses critism, your comic is not the best. But that does not matter. Personally I think your comic is not that good, here are the reasons.

    1. The characters jump places real quick.
    2. The speech boxes are not very nice to look at.

    But other than that, the comic is fine. The overworld Pokemon look nice and about Squirtle learning Water Gun, well I don't really think that matters, that is up to you.

    And the water gun looked nice. I actually think this is impressive for a first comic, not the best, but not awful.

    I will rate this comic 5/10, Half way there, just try to improve a little.
     
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