Luna Altaire
Trainer of Moonlight
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YAY, I'm finally going to base a fan-fic off of a game! It's going to be pretty accurate, because I'll be playing the game as I go. Enjoy!
Sora, Donald, and Goofy see Pluto holding a letter in his mouth that has King Mickey's symbol on it. Sora looks at Donald and Goofy. They smile at him, and they chase after Pluto for the letter on a winding road...
Late at night, when Donald and Goofy are asleep, Sora wakes up and glances up at the stars when a voice catches him by surprise.
"Ahead lies something you need..." said the voice.
Sora turns around to see who it is, but no one is there. Sora looks behind himself again to see a dark cloaked figure.
"...but to claim it, you must lose something dear." The voice continued.
The figure disappears.
Meanwhile, a young blond girl is drawing a castle, a castle which Sora, Donald and Goofy enter to begin their journey.
"...Looks like nobody's home." Donald said.
"You sure we should just barge in like this?" Goofy asked.
"We have to if we're gonna find the king..." Donald answered.
Goofy became surprised.
"The king?! King Mickey's here?" He asked.
"Maybe, maybe not. Something told me he'd be here, that's all." Donald said.
"Really?!" Goofy exclaimed. "..But...now that you mention it, I was thinkin' the same thing."
Sora is surprised as well.
"Are you serious? So was I!" He exclaimed.
Sora walked further away from the entrance.
"One look at this castle, and I just knew: They're here." He continued.
"Well, whaddya know!" Goofy said. "Great minds think alike, I guess."
Just then, Jiminy Cricket popped out of Sora's pocket.
"Guess again! This can't be mere coincidence." He said.
"Why, Jiminy?" Donald asked, surprised. "Don't tell me that---"
"--I felt it too!" Jiminy said, cutting Donald off.
"Gawrsh, maybe it's contagious." Goofy said with a chuckle.
"...or maybe something funny's going on! I think we should check it out." Donald said, getting a bit suspicious.
"Okay." Sora agreed.
Jiminy hopped back into Sora's pocket, and Sora began to walk away from Donald and Goofy.
"Hey, where are you going?" Donald asked.
"To check it out! What's the matter, scared?" Sora said, acting high and mighty.
"D-Don't be ridiculous! Come on, Goofy!" Donald said, trying to act cool.
He approached Sora.
"Okay, but we should shut the door behind us." Goofy said, turning around to face the
door.
Goofy suddenly saw something that caught his attention.
"Sora!" He called.
A figure that closely resembled the one Sora had seen earlier on was standing in front of the entrance, which was now closed. It reappeared in front of Donald and Sora.
"Who is THAT?!" Sora asked, pulling out his Keyblade.
"...It must be a Heartless!" Donald yelled, taking out his staff. "Let's see how it handles my magic! THUNDER!" He called, pointing his staff at the figure.
Nothing happened.
"Huh?" Donald said, flabbergasted. "That's odd. THUNDER! THUNDER!" He yelled, trying again.
Still nothing.
"Umm...FIRE!" He called. Nothing. "Blizzard?" Nothing. "I don't get it..." He started.
"...why isn't my magic working?" He wondered.
"I should think it's obvious." The figure began. "The moment you set foot in this castle, you forgot every spell and ability you knew...though the forgetting does not end there. In this place, to find is to lose and to lose is to find."
He approached the three heroes. They put their weapons away.
The figure continued: "That is the way of things in Castle Oblivion."
"Castle Oblivion?" Sora asked.
"Yes...here you will meet people you know. People you miss." The figure answered.
Sora denied the figure.
"Look, there's no one--" He stopped to think for a minute. "Riku! You mean Riku! He IS here!" Sora exclaimed.
"Do you want to find him?" The figure asked. "If you do..."
The figure rushed through Sora and disappeared. He reappeared in front of a small flight of stairs in front them that lead to a golden double door.
"What did you do?" Sora questioned, angry.
"I sampled your memories. And from them, I made this." The figure said.
The figure held a small item in his hand.
"...This is the key to reuniting with those you hold dear." The figured continued.
He threw the item at Sora.
"What is this, a card?" Sora asked.
"A promise. Use that card and press on. You will find your friend." The figure corrected
Sora. "Hold the card before you." He continued. "The door will open, and beyond it, a new world."
Sora cautiously obeyed the figure.
"Like this?" He asked.
"Yes. Go, Sora." The figure said. "To lose and claim anew, or to claim anew only to
lose..."
The figure disappeared. Sora mused for a moment, puzzled.
"C'mon guys----let's go." Sora said.
Sora opened the golden door in front of him.
As Sora entered a very familiar area, Jiminy popped out of Sora's pocket.
"Wait, this can't be right." Sora began. "We're in Traverse Town!"
The figure appeared behind Sora. Sora turned around and faced the figure.
"It isn't reality that you see." It began. "This town is an illusion conceived by your memories ingrained in that card."
"My memories?" Sora asked, confused.
Jiminy called out to Sora.
"Forget about that, Sora! We're two heads short!" He exclaimed.
Sora looked around and realized that they weren't there.
"Donald? Goofy? Guys, where are you?" He asked. "What did you do with them?" He questioned the figure.
"They are at the mercy of the cards now." The figure said. "Master the cards, and their strength will be yours again."
The figure gave Sora a quick tutorial on how to use cards. After the tutorial, Donald and Goofy reappeared in front of Sora.
"Are you two all right? Where have you been?" Sora asked them.
"You tell us! When you opened the door, there was this weird light..." Donald began. "..and the rest is a big blank."
"Well, try to remember what happened. I need to keep my journal up to date." Jiminy said.
"Hey, wait a second...Donald, where'd you get the new duds?" Goofy asked Donald, realizing that his clothes had changed.
"You too, Goofy! Somebody's been messing with our clothes!" Donald exclaimed.
"...The cards again?" Sora asked, turning to the figure.
"That is for you to ponder. Master the cards and make your way through the castle. From here on, you walk alone." The figure answered.
"You mean we can't go with him? That's not fair!" Goofy complained.
"Yeah! Sora can't do anything without our help!" Donald yelled.
Sora looked angrily at Donald.
"Thanks a lot, Donald!" He yelled.
"You sure you'll be okay?" Goofy asked, getting a little sad.
Sora nodded.
"Of course!" He exclaimed.
Sora approached the figure.
"You want me to go alone? Fine. I can take care of myself." Sora said to the figure.
"Hmm, the hero speaks boldly. Go, then. The rest of Castle Oblivion awaits. Walk the avenues of latent memory, and you shall meet someone dear to you." The figure said.
The figure faded away into the darkness.
"I have a really bad feeling about this..." Jiminy said with a sad face.
"Relax, Jiminy. I'm ready for any tricks he's got up his sleeve." Sora assured. "How hard can it be to figure out these cards?"
Sora approached a wooden door nearby.
"All I have to do is use one in front of that door over there." He said.
Sora's friends disappeared. A card with the words "Key of Beginnings" on it appeared in his pocket. He approached the wooden door and used Room Synthesis to create a new room. He entered it, prepared for whatever adventures lay ahead of him.
.....So, is this one better than my Luna Altaire story? :P
Prologue
Sora, Donald, and Goofy see Pluto holding a letter in his mouth that has King Mickey's symbol on it. Sora looks at Donald and Goofy. They smile at him, and they chase after Pluto for the letter on a winding road...
Late at night, when Donald and Goofy are asleep, Sora wakes up and glances up at the stars when a voice catches him by surprise.
"Ahead lies something you need..." said the voice.
Sora turns around to see who it is, but no one is there. Sora looks behind himself again to see a dark cloaked figure.
"...but to claim it, you must lose something dear." The voice continued.
The figure disappears.
Meanwhile, a young blond girl is drawing a castle, a castle which Sora, Donald and Goofy enter to begin their journey.
Chapter One: Floor One of Castle Oblivion
Sora, Donald, and Goofy enter the castle, looking around.
"...Looks like nobody's home." Donald said.
"You sure we should just barge in like this?" Goofy asked.
"We have to if we're gonna find the king..." Donald answered.
Goofy became surprised.
"The king?! King Mickey's here?" He asked.
"Maybe, maybe not. Something told me he'd be here, that's all." Donald said.
"Really?!" Goofy exclaimed. "..But...now that you mention it, I was thinkin' the same thing."
Sora is surprised as well.
"Are you serious? So was I!" He exclaimed.
Sora walked further away from the entrance.
"One look at this castle, and I just knew: They're here." He continued.
"Well, whaddya know!" Goofy said. "Great minds think alike, I guess."
Just then, Jiminy Cricket popped out of Sora's pocket.
"Guess again! This can't be mere coincidence." He said.
"Why, Jiminy?" Donald asked, surprised. "Don't tell me that---"
"--I felt it too!" Jiminy said, cutting Donald off.
"Gawrsh, maybe it's contagious." Goofy said with a chuckle.
"...or maybe something funny's going on! I think we should check it out." Donald said, getting a bit suspicious.
"Okay." Sora agreed.
Jiminy hopped back into Sora's pocket, and Sora began to walk away from Donald and Goofy.
"Hey, where are you going?" Donald asked.
"To check it out! What's the matter, scared?" Sora said, acting high and mighty.
"D-Don't be ridiculous! Come on, Goofy!" Donald said, trying to act cool.
He approached Sora.
"Okay, but we should shut the door behind us." Goofy said, turning around to face the
door.
Goofy suddenly saw something that caught his attention.
"Sora!" He called.
A figure that closely resembled the one Sora had seen earlier on was standing in front of the entrance, which was now closed. It reappeared in front of Donald and Sora.
"Who is THAT?!" Sora asked, pulling out his Keyblade.
"...It must be a Heartless!" Donald yelled, taking out his staff. "Let's see how it handles my magic! THUNDER!" He called, pointing his staff at the figure.
Nothing happened.
"Huh?" Donald said, flabbergasted. "That's odd. THUNDER! THUNDER!" He yelled, trying again.
Still nothing.
"Umm...FIRE!" He called. Nothing. "Blizzard?" Nothing. "I don't get it..." He started.
"...why isn't my magic working?" He wondered.
"I should think it's obvious." The figure began. "The moment you set foot in this castle, you forgot every spell and ability you knew...though the forgetting does not end there. In this place, to find is to lose and to lose is to find."
He approached the three heroes. They put their weapons away.
The figure continued: "That is the way of things in Castle Oblivion."
"Castle Oblivion?" Sora asked.
"Yes...here you will meet people you know. People you miss." The figure answered.
Sora denied the figure.
"Look, there's no one--" He stopped to think for a minute. "Riku! You mean Riku! He IS here!" Sora exclaimed.
"Do you want to find him?" The figure asked. "If you do..."
The figure rushed through Sora and disappeared. He reappeared in front of a small flight of stairs in front them that lead to a golden double door.
"What did you do?" Sora questioned, angry.
"I sampled your memories. And from them, I made this." The figure said.
The figure held a small item in his hand.
"...This is the key to reuniting with those you hold dear." The figured continued.
He threw the item at Sora.
"What is this, a card?" Sora asked.
"A promise. Use that card and press on. You will find your friend." The figure corrected
Sora. "Hold the card before you." He continued. "The door will open, and beyond it, a new world."
Sora cautiously obeyed the figure.
"Like this?" He asked.
"Yes. Go, Sora." The figure said. "To lose and claim anew, or to claim anew only to
lose..."
The figure disappeared. Sora mused for a moment, puzzled.
"C'mon guys----let's go." Sora said.
Sora opened the golden door in front of him.
Chapter Two: Traverse Town Part One
As Sora entered a very familiar area, Jiminy popped out of Sora's pocket.
"Wait, this can't be right." Sora began. "We're in Traverse Town!"
The figure appeared behind Sora. Sora turned around and faced the figure.
"It isn't reality that you see." It began. "This town is an illusion conceived by your memories ingrained in that card."
"My memories?" Sora asked, confused.
Jiminy called out to Sora.
"Forget about that, Sora! We're two heads short!" He exclaimed.
Sora looked around and realized that they weren't there.
"Donald? Goofy? Guys, where are you?" He asked. "What did you do with them?" He questioned the figure.
"They are at the mercy of the cards now." The figure said. "Master the cards, and their strength will be yours again."
The figure gave Sora a quick tutorial on how to use cards. After the tutorial, Donald and Goofy reappeared in front of Sora.
"Are you two all right? Where have you been?" Sora asked them.
"You tell us! When you opened the door, there was this weird light..." Donald began. "..and the rest is a big blank."
"Well, try to remember what happened. I need to keep my journal up to date." Jiminy said.
"Hey, wait a second...Donald, where'd you get the new duds?" Goofy asked Donald, realizing that his clothes had changed.
"You too, Goofy! Somebody's been messing with our clothes!" Donald exclaimed.
"...The cards again?" Sora asked, turning to the figure.
"That is for you to ponder. Master the cards and make your way through the castle. From here on, you walk alone." The figure answered.
"You mean we can't go with him? That's not fair!" Goofy complained.
"Yeah! Sora can't do anything without our help!" Donald yelled.
Sora looked angrily at Donald.
"Thanks a lot, Donald!" He yelled.
"You sure you'll be okay?" Goofy asked, getting a little sad.
Sora nodded.
"Of course!" He exclaimed.
Sora approached the figure.
"You want me to go alone? Fine. I can take care of myself." Sora said to the figure.
"Hmm, the hero speaks boldly. Go, then. The rest of Castle Oblivion awaits. Walk the avenues of latent memory, and you shall meet someone dear to you." The figure said.
The figure faded away into the darkness.
"I have a really bad feeling about this..." Jiminy said with a sad face.
"Relax, Jiminy. I'm ready for any tricks he's got up his sleeve." Sora assured. "How hard can it be to figure out these cards?"
Sora approached a wooden door nearby.
"All I have to do is use one in front of that door over there." He said.
Sora's friends disappeared. A card with the words "Key of Beginnings" on it appeared in his pocket. He approached the wooden door and used Room Synthesis to create a new room. He entered it, prepared for whatever adventures lay ahead of him.
.....So, is this one better than my Luna Altaire story? :P
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