Komedy in Kanto (FR/LG parody)

[EmeraldSky]

What do you think would happen if Ash, Misty and Brock went through FR/LG? Lots of hijinks, that's for sure!

Episode 1: One More Game...

 

[Esupio]

I know what its like to see your comic ignored.

The idea is good, but so far its been carried out poorly, but this is mostly a teaser by the looks of things. Your grammar is good, except for when misty says ready, the Y is in capitals.

 

[EmeraldSky]

I'm planning on expanding the episodes...

 

[Esupio]

I thought so :P
I'll give you a full review when I've seen more

 

[The Dash]

Dude you need to do more than one frame at a time.

 

[EmeraldSky]

Okay...the next episode will be about the length of a standard comic strip....

 

[doesn't matter]

While I would like to see how this comic develops, it really does need more than one frame a strip.

And what do you perceive as the standard length. 4 panels? Cause I reckon that any comic using RPG sprites should at least have six panels.

But it's all up to you, good luck.

 

[EmeraldSky]

Just for the curious, a standard comic strip is 3 panels (double that for a Sunday comic)

(I think I will revise the first comic to a standard comic strip)

 

[doesn't matter]

Hmmm. I've always though of a standard as four panels.

I know Garfield has three, but then again, Calvin & Hobbes has 3-4.

But my perception could all be because of BnG, **** them.

It's all up to your personal preference anyway.

 

[EmeraldSky]

I've already started the second panel...