Latias and Latios sketch

[Hantsuki]

I did these two quite some time ago,basically last year and I finally found them^^ I sketched them and I scanned them and they may not show up too well,here ya go:
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[Frostbite]

All right, first is the Latias. It's very good but the neck is very fat. The Latios is very well drawn and I like the pose. Overall I like them. 7/10

 

[Hantsuki]

yeah,those were the first I ever drew too^^ but thanks for the comments^^

 

[Asura Nirosuki]

WOW! that is awsome for a first!Never give up^^.

 

[Hantsuki]

Thanks,not exactly my first at sketching,but my first time sketching those two Pokemon^^ thanks for the compliment though^^

 

[kohei]

Apart from the necks being a bit too fat, I think it's great!
You did say you drew them a year ago, right?

 

[Hantsuki]

yeah,and thanks for the compliment^^ I think I can draw them better this time if I choose to do so^^

 

[Hantsuki]

sorry for the double posting,but I colored in my Latias^^ here it is^^
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[Shuko]

Well, I think it looks a lot better colored, but to be bluntly honest, the brightness of the red kinda hurts my eyes, lol. I think what it needs most now is some good ol' fashioned shades. Find the places you want to be shadowed and make 'em a darker color red (it can either be pure red with black applied, which is easy to do in MS Paint, or you could be bold and try a red that either leans more toward purple or orange. Those would be what I'd try, anyhow. :)) But as far as a first try goes, I think you're right on track. Keep at it; you can only get better, after all. :D

Btw, do you just use MS Paint, or do you actually have another graphics program? Because it could be so much spiffier if you could actually touch the whole thing up by editing your lines to make her more streamlined and sleek. :) Just a thought.

 

[Eon-Rider]

Wow, cool! Better than anything than I can draw.

 

[Hantsuki]

Thanks for the advice and compliments^^ and yeah I think I will try shading,just a bit busy,and yeah I just have that regular cheap paint that's why it's crappy >.<

 

[Shinin]

The necks are too fat, like Arctic Wish said. Try coloring the actual pics and not coloring it in paint.