Lycanthropy
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Seeing as nobody picked it up yet, would you mind if I take it?
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I'd split this into two sentences, e.g. "...a wild uncatchable Pokémon. The only other example is the encounter with Black...".Not only is it the only location in Kanto where ghost type Pokémon can be found, which in the games have to be identified with the Silph scope in order to be battled, it is also one of the few places in the Pokémon world that holds a wild uncatchable Pokémon, the other being Black and White Kyurem in Black 2 and White 2 respectively.
Go with Poké Balls and Master Balls - two words, like in the games.The only difference is that Pokéballs could still be used to try to capture the ghost Marowak, but they would instantly fail, even Masterballs.
Two sentences (...forums. Here are...), or replace the comma with a semicolon.We asked around on the PokéCommunity forums, here are some opinions.
mind control as two words, I think. We also ought to have a link to the member's profile page for the first instance of their username appearing.It's definitely this music that is said to mindcontrol little children that has a major role in the typical creepy Lavender Town atmosphere, so says Hiidoran.
guarantee, and the other bolded bits I've put it. It is a quote from someone else, but we should fix small grammatical errors like those.If you ask 1000 people I garuntee the biggest and most common factor people will have towards Lavender Town is the music. Lets face it, an "Epic" movie isn't epic without an orchestral fanfare fight scene, and a horror film isn't a horror without awkward chords during high stress periods. Sound is a big factor in what sets the mood to a memory - our brains base memories off of senses.
I'd also make a new sentence here (...completely. The playing...).illumine agrees completely, the playing experience
I think we can go without the comma after 'sudden'.So, like, 'Hey, [your name], look at the dead Pokémon, now here are some ghosts all of a sudden, to meet you.'
We do need a cover image (possible one?) and an article excerpt (a short sentence or two). The latter can probably state that this article will cover some opinions on the notable Lavender Town from the Pokémon Red, Blue and Yellow games. On that note, do we want to make this part of a series - "Pokémon Places", or somesuch?
I'd say that an interesting thing to include is some info on what it is based on in the real world, but google suggests it isn't based on much. So much for that.
Pictures can be added in - perhaps a screenshot of the Tower when you start talking about it, for example. Also maybe a url to one explanation of the Lavender Town Syndrome from another site?
Some nitpicks:
I'd split this into two sentences, e.g. "...a wild uncatchable Pokémon. The only other example is the encounter with Black...".
Go with Poké Balls and Master Balls - two words, like in the games.
Two sentences (...forums. Here are...), or replace the comma with a semicolon.
mind control as two words, I think. We also ought to have a link to the member's profile page for the first instance of their username appearing.
guarantee, and the other bolded bits I've put it. It is a quote from someone else, but we should fix small grammatical errors like those.
I'd also make a new sentence here (...completely. The playing...).
I think we can go without the comma after 'sudden'.
I'd say 'but it is'.Lycanthropy said:This multi-floor graveyard is one of the many towers in the Pokémon world (each region has at least one of them), but is notable in a couple of ways.
Ghost type - we're opting for capitals for the names of types like in the games/etc and other articles.Not only is it the only location in Kanto where ghost type Pokémon can be found,
'...encounter with Black or...'.The other example is the encounter Black or White Kyurem in Pokémon Black 2 or White 2 respectively
Apologies for the delay, AF stuff was rather timely and then other stuff happened.
I like the additions of images and descriptions!
A few more nitpicks:
I'd say 'but it is'.
Ghost type - we're opting for capitals for the names of types like in the games/etc and other articles.
'...encounter with Black or...'.
After those I feel it's good to go! Needs another person to approve as well beforehand, mind. *goes to bug*
Your instances where you mention the Silph Scope need "scope" to be capitalized. It's part of the name.
Aside from what Marcin pointed out, that was all that I saw. So just fix those things and I'd say you're good to go!
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I herped and forgot to ask this earlier - please provide an email address, account name (cannot be changed!) and nickname (can be changed, and will be how you are credited as an author). Using that info to make you an account on the Wordpress side for easier author-crediting (and fancier too - you can write up a bio and include an avatar!)