Legend of the lost Latias and Latios

[latioslegends]

Now this story I hope you enjoy if there are any mistakes you think I should fix feel free to tell me I will like to do this story the best I can I am going to do chapter one for now so here it goes.



Chapter 1 Carth and Teila

"Kyle"
"yes Susan I have A very important question"
"yes"
"do you think we should have kids hear"

"what are you talking about across we should"

"I know Kyle it is just that this place it is to dangerous I think"

"Susan you me and professor Nash have studied the dragon pokemon here and they pose no threat."

"Along with that Susan I have seen kids less than eight on the islands small town"

"that is true Kyle but we live away from the town making it not a hundred percent safe for kids!"

"Suan please it is a little dangerous I understand but we have never got hurt!"

"Are you forgetting your scar now, Kyle? From that charizard last year?"

Kyle unconsciously touched his other arm. There, a long scar stretched the length of it. He remembered so well the roar of the red beast as it soared toward him on blue wings. He also remembered the moment of sharp pain, and the days of just recovering.

"Ok but it was Nashes fault he was the one who got it going crazy!"

"But happens if that charizard decided to cook you instead of giving you a long scar on your arm!"

"Maybe your right but maybe I'm right Susan lets just think about it and just continue our walk for now!"

As Kyle and Susan continued there walk Suan notices something odd down the beach.

"Hay Kyle look over there!"

"Where I don't see anything!"

"There by the water look somethings moving in that blanket!"
"Here I'll go see what it is just probably the wind Susan it gets strong this time of the year you know."

As Kyle walk up to the blanket he started to hear a very odd noise coming from under the blanket.

When Kyle got to the blanket his heart started to beat fast, but it didn't stop from seeing what was under it.
"OH MY GOD!"

"What is wrong Kyle what is it!"

"Susan come here quick and don't worry they look harmless!"

"What looks harmless let me see Kyle!"

"Look for yourself Susan here just hold the red one!"

"What are they I never seen a pokemon like this in my entire life do you know Kyle your the expert?"

"I wish I knew Susan they are very interesting pokemon I never seen any pokemon like this before."

"Hey look there is a message on the blanket"

Kyle immdiently held the blue pokemon in his left arm and flipped over the blanket and began to read it.

I hope to whomever is to find these two Pokemon is a loving and generous person. The two which you see before you are named Latias and Latios; both are brother and sister. Latias is the red one and Latios is the blue one. I can only ask one thing out of whomever finds these two to take care of them with love and kindness. They are Pokemon babies at the moment but by tomorrow you will see human babies. As these kids grow they will get closer to there true form. Remember this they are to never know that they are Latias and Latios it most be kept a secret they will find out by there selves.

"Kyle what should we do!"

"we will take care of them there babies they need somebody"

"Kyle this is nothing I had in mind at all I mean it's just unbelievable that they can be human at all!"

"Susan what are the chances of this happening it is like it was meant to happen to us and for them!"

"Well I guess that they are family now then but we should at least tell them that we are there step parents!"

"Alright then but what should we name them I was thinking Carth for the Latios"

"Alright then the Latias Teila."

"Well then that settles it then welcome to the family Carth, and Teila"

"lets get home it's getting dark out.

When they got home Latias and Latios fell right to sleep and when morning came they were human babies.

"Well Susan this looks like where there adventure begins."


Kyles entry-Over the years I have been watching Carth and Teila grow up in many different ways.
Susan and I always half to home school them. Carth really seems to like to draw and he loves to dance at every festival our community has here every year. Teila she seems to go where Carth goes it is quite amusing how much she follows him around on the island. Now I'm always very happy that the two are very healthy. They are very athletic but I can never bring them to doctors I fear that there blood is the same as there pokemon form so I can't ever bring them to any doctors. When Carth turned nine he had met his rival Tyler I remember they were racing to the Nash's lab. Carth won but after that Tyler try to prove that he was
better and this led to what I didn't want Carth to do he wanted to be a pokemon trainer. The day I heard him say that I was shocked the thought that came right into my head was how can pokemon become a pokemon trainer. There was no stopping it for sure especially after him watching the pokemon league.
Tomorrow is the day he will be getting his first pokemon from Nash along with Tyler but today I will take Carth to the field to study dragon pokemon with me and Nash. End Entry


"Carth hurry up we got to go before the sun rises"

"I'm coming don't worry"

"Ok ready hey where is Nash"

"He will be meeting us there now remember the rules I taught you when doing this"

"I know them don't worry"

Kyle and Carth ran to the field as fast as they could but Nash was already there taking pictures.

"Sorry for the being late Carth forgot to set his alarm"

"actually Kyle you are right on time I just came here early so Carth excited for your first pokemon"

"Oh I am I have been even thinking of what pokemon I will catch here already"

"Good now lets just wait for the salamence to show up"

"look there they are"

Carth, Kyle, and Nash laid down on the ground and began watching and taking pictures.

"Hey Nash"

"what Kyle"
"this is group C right"

"looks like it why?"

"Well where is the fifth one because I only see four"

THUMP!

"hey Nash what was that?"

Nash turned his head around to see the fifth salamence looking down at them with a mean glare.

Nash began to sweat his heart pounded.

"Carth, Kyle run!!"

the three ran down the hill with the salamence behind them beginning to attack with flamethrower.

"keep running guys don't stop or we are going to be cooked!!" Nash yelled.

As Carth kept running suddenly something went threw his head the thought was ridiculous but he trusted it.
Carth turned around and went towards the rampaging Salamence.

"Carth what are you doing!"

Carth went in front of the Salamence as it flew down to attack. Carth then dodge the attack and as it flew
over him he grabbed it's tail he was barely holding on the Salamence but some how it fell to the ground in pain.

Kyle came up to Carth and started to yell. "Carth that was the most reckless thing you have done in your life what were you thinking!"

"I know but I think I know what is wrong with it I think I heard it say it was in pain"

Nash looked at Carth in a strange way and said "What makes you so sure about that lets just get out of here just let it lay there before it gets up!"

"No I'm going to help it"

Nash just looked at him like he was a fool.

Carth started to look over the Salamence he spotted which looked like a big sharp rock in it's back.

"This might hurt but it will get rid of the pain"

Carth then put both his hands on the rock and pulled as hard as he could the rock came out right away.
The Salamence screamed loud from the instant pain but it stop in a couple of seconds.

"That did it it's out"

The Salamence turned it's head around and starred at Carth but not in a mean way it looked like it was
thanking Carth for what he did Carth got down and it took off.

Nash looked at Carth and said "Carth how did you know I mean really"

"I'm not sure some how I felt that I understood."

"I don't know how you did that but I will see you tomorrow at my lab oh and happy birthday Carth"

Carth almost forgot it was his and his sisters Birthday today he got so caught up with going out here.

When Carth and his dad got back Teila came running out of the house with her friend Sarah and Carth's friend James.

"Hey James sorry for being late incident in the field it's nothing really we need to talk about."

"don"t worry it's your birthday now come this will be your last birthday of not being a pokemon trainer."

Carth and his sister were having a splendid time at there party but it would be the gift that his father gives
that shows that he started to trust him with pokemon.

"Come over here guys it's time to open the presents"

Teila got a beautiful neckless from her mom and a poke nav from her father.

Carth got a load of art gear from his mother Carth always loved drawing it seemed to be relaxing to him
but his fathers is what amazed him the most.

"Now Carth I know I have tried to stop you from this pokemon trainer idea of yours but that doesn't seem possible so I guess I should support it now."

Carths father gave him a poke ball with the symbol of the town on it."

"Now Carth these are rare around the island but you and your sister need all the help you can get on your journey so I spended an entire month trying to find one so go throw it in the water and see your new friend."

Carth threw the poke ball in the water and a Lapars came out of it

"You got me a Lapars I believe you support me but I didn't know this much."

"Hey guys me and Sarah are going to split alright it's beginning to get a little dark out and I must be ready for tomorrow"
"got it James be seeing you tomorrow at Nashes lab"

"Hey kids I think you should get to bed you have a big day tomorrow and happy birthday"

As Teila and Carth walked inside the house Teila grabbed Carth and brought him outside in the back she seemed to be very scared.
and started to talk "is there something wrong Teila?"

"well it is Nash"Nash what happened Teila"

"Over the last couple of months I have seen Nash spying on me when I'm alone but he was wearing some weird pair of sunglasses something ain't right Carth Nash has been acting very strange."

"do you know why Nash is doing that at all"

"I have know idea but I have much concern for you now why would Nash allow you to come with dad to the field you should be at least fourteen or a good pokemon trainer when doing that I mean look at dads scar and he's a pro you know."

"Why don't you tell dad?"

"because I don't want him to worry Nash has been his best friend since he moved here please don't tell for now"

"Alright but here when we go to Nashes lab tomorrow try to find out anything just look around the building while he is busy with me James and Tyler now come on we need some rest.

As Carth and Teila went in Carth saw his parents sitting on the beach and when they do that he knew that he should not bud in.

"Well another year gone I wish that it didn't go by so fast one day we are going to be looking into the eyes of our kids true form and who knows what is going to happen after that Susan I mean will they leave us will they stay with us I mean time is running out I think Carth and Teila will realize what they are sooner or later to tell you the truth I think Carth is developing the ability to talk to pokemon now."

"Maybe Kyle but we just got to accept it I mean we just got to let go one day oh I almost forgot some package arrived for you while you and Carth were at the field"It looks like it is from your brother."

"Um I should look at it"

"Honey why are you acting so secretly"

"Well lets says I told my brother the kids secret"

"What!"
"I couldn't find any information on latias and latios so I turned to him but don't worry he won't tell anybody"

"And how do you know?"

"Because he promised And you should know by now breaking a promise is like killing to him"
"All right just make sure the kids don't see the book"

"promise"

"I'm going to clean up what you going to do?"

"study what ever my brother gave me"

When Kyle took the package up stairs he ripped it open to see a strange book.

As Kyle looked threw the book was seeing so many things about latias and latios.

Kyles breathing and heart beat got faster because he was so excited.

"Lets see a gem named the soul dew there guardians of some city looks like I can make it out alti altmor wait altomare that must be the name Altomare.

 

[Astinus]

Firstly, welcome to PokeCommunity!

Okay, let's see what we have here. It looks like you want to focus on the "lost" years of the Latis' lives. That's a great area to explore, because there's not much canon evidence about it!

To really get in readers, you have to make a good presentation. Center or bold the title of the chapter so that each one stands out. It'll just make your work look more professional.

Let me start off with the basic mechanics. You seem to have a lot of spelling and grammar errors throughout your fic. The spelling problems can be taken care of if you use a word processing program, such as Microsoft Word. The next problem is grammar. I know grammar is a tricky thing to learn, so I'll start off with something simple.

You need punctuation. Take a look through your first chapter. See how many full stops you have at the end of each sentence? You need them to make your work more grammatically correct. And hey, full stops allow for the reader to take a breath. I'll show you an example from your chapter:

I hope to whoever is to find these two pokemon is a loving and generous person the two which you see before are named Latias and Latios both are brother and sister Latias is the red one and Latios is the blue one I can only ask one thing out of whoever finds these two to take care of them with love and kindness they are pokemon babys at the moment but by tomorrow you will see human babys.

Read that sentence, stopping only at punctuation. Kind of hard to do so, right? See, punctuation helps that. And if you correctly punctuate it, it'll look something like so:

I hope to whomever is to find these two Pokemon is a loving and generous person. The two which you see before are you named Latias and Latios; both are brother and sister. Latias is the red one and Latios is the blue one. I can only ask one thing out of whomever finds these two: to take care of them with love and kindness. They are Pokemon babies at the moment but by tomorrow you will see human babies.

Better, neh? I think so. But that's not all. When you finish one sentence, and end it with a full stop/exclamation point/question mark, you capitalise the first word of the next sentence. And that's your grammar lesson for this chapter.

Next is the actual writing of the fic. You jump right into a scene of Kyle and Susan taking a walk along the beach. It's perfectly all right for you to start off like that, but slow down a bit to describe the setting. Until you actually say beach a few paragraphs below, I had no idea where Kyle and Susan were! And even though you do say beach, you should describe the beach. The color of the sand, the color of the water, the time of day... All those things will help the reader get more clarity of your story! And that's a good thing.

You know, you could also describe the feelings of the characters. It'll make them more human, and make your readers feel for the characters. If the readers feel for the characters, know them well enough that they feel like family, then readers will keep coming back! You want that, neh? So what to do? I'll show you through example:

"Are you forgetting your scar now, Kyle? From that charizard last year?"

Kyle unconsciously touched his other arm. There, a long scar stretched the length of it. He remembered so well the roar of the red beast as it soared toward him on blue wings. He also remembered the moment of sharp pain, and the days of just recovering.

Not the best, but it shows you what I mean. ^-^

Well, I've given you a lot of advice to work with. Take a look around at the stickied threads of this section and the Writer's Lounge. Those are full of advice that can help! Same with reading other people's fanfiction. But most of all, keep practicing, using the advice that I've given you here. I'll check back in to see how you improved. Good luck to you!

 

[latioslegends]

Thanks alot for your advice I will be using it. Now I think your a little off on my story Carth and Teila are diffrent ones. There are more than two latis infact at the end of pokemon heros you see three latis heading for the garden probaly were siblings of Latias.

 

[latioslegends]

Chapter 2 A New Dawn

Teila burst into Carths room and started to yell

"Carth, Carth wake up"

Carth fell out of bed onto the floor he looked at his clock and he was shocked it was 9:40.
Carth was moving all around the room getting change he didn't want to miss his first pokemon. Carth ran down the stairs he saw it was 9:50 he only had 10 minutes before the pokemon were given out.

Carth grabbed Teilas arm and burst out the door with a lot of worry that he would not get a pokemon.

"We got to run Teila hurry aw what were the options um Trapinch, Bagon, and Charmander."

Teila just began to laugh a little she remembers all the fun things they did going up and own this hill.

"Carth slow down I doubt they are all going to be gone."

"Yes but I want to get that charmander I don't want Tyler or James getting it."

"Wait you want Charmander when that thing evolves into Charizard dad is going to have a heart attack he has a been afraid Charizard since he got that scar."

"Don't worry Teila I'll just get dad to get use to Charmander if he makes friends with it he might loose his hear of Charizard."

Carth and Teila arrived at Nashes lab at 10:08 Carth saw James and Tyler getting ready for there first pokemon.

Carth was so full of confidence he can finally battle his friends.

Nash came out of his research room with three poke balls and begun to explain about them.

"Now you three new trainers this is the first time I did this but you don't pick your guys they are randomly given to you. Now the reason I am doing this is because I very sick and tired of new trainers always complaining if the pokemon they wanted was already taken so go first James."

All of the boys seem to be nervous now that they don't know what they are getting.

"Alright I will take the one in the middle."

"Tyler go pick one"
Tyler just glanced at the balls and grabbed the one on the left.

"Well I guess you get the one on the right now Carth."

Nash just said "open your ball first James."

James jumped in the air with so much excitement he got a Charmander.

"Alright open your ball Tyler."

"Well I guess this Bagon will make a neat Salamence."

Carth just looked down and didn't say a word he knew what he got, Trapinch.

Tyler just teased Carth that he got Trapinch."

"Ha you got that pathetic little thing."

Carth opened his ball but not disappointed in fact he looked very proud of what he got.
Carth kneeled down to the Trapinch and said

"Just ignore him because I know you can beat him you will grow and sprout your wings as Flygon one day. You and me will make a great team."

Nash walked up to everybody and gave six poke balls to each of the kids.

James and Tyler left the building but Carth and Teila stayed.

"Aren't you guys going yet it's beautiful day out!"

Carth face began to go from excitement to anger he just began yelling at Nash. "Why have you been following my sister around!"

Nash began to go to his desk but didn't say a thing.

"Aren't you going to answer me!"

Tears started to come from Teilas face she had never seen Carth so mad before.

Nash sat down and started to speak. "You got your pokemon now leave."

"Carth I thought you said we would spy just please stop your beginning to scare me."

"I'm sorry Teila but I want to know from Nash so tell me Nash now!"

Nash was getting furious he threw a poke ball and a scyther came out "Now I said leave!"

"This ain't over Nash if you spy on my sister again I will get the best pokemon on this island and I will make sure you never study pokemon again "

Carth and Teila left the building. Carth began to cool down a little but right when he took a turn he saw Tyler acting so cocky at him.

Carth looked at Tyler and said "f you want a battle then lets have one."

"Good just one rule you are not allowed to use that Lapars you got from your dad just to make it fair."

Carth anger went away he was fully concentrated on the battle

"Alright go Bagon!"

"I choose you Trapinch!"

Tyler with acted like he battled before he gave commands like it was nothing.

"Alright Bagon use ember."

"Trapinch dig now!"

"Bagon blast the whole with another ember!"

Carth began to grind his teeth he had to think hard how to win this battle bagon had a advantage.

"Trapinch get out of there quick!"

The battle paused for a moment Bagon and Trapinch just starred at each other Tyler just smiled
like it was ensured victory.

Carth then heard a loud roar threw the sky he new what it was by the noise it was a salamence clearly visible and Carth had an idea how to win right there.

"Trapinch get it to look at the salamence before it's gone!"

Trapinch quickly was able to make bagon see it and bagon concentrated on looking at the dragon then the battle.

"Bagon what are you doing I command you to attack Trapinch!"

Carth began to laugh and said. "Don't you know bagon wants to fly at this stage just seeing that Salamence is good enough to make it not to obey you!"

Tyler was getting very frustrated no matter what he said the Bagon just looked at the dragon.

"Now Trapinch bite it as hard as you can!"

Right before the attack Tyler returned Bagon he knew he couldn't

"Well Carth you got lucky this round but you won't be so lucky next time!"

"We shall see Tyler!"

Teila ran up to Carth with so much joy and jumped on him giving him a hug."

"Carth you did it you really did it you won your first battle!"

Carth and Teila ran back to there house to see there parents waiting outside for them.

Kyle walked up to the two and tears began to run down his face. He gave Carth a backpack and said "Well I guess this is good by Carth and Teila this is very to loose you but I understand that you want to become a pokemon trainer."

Carth looked at his parents with a face of so much care and said "Dad I have thought about this last night I know Tyler and James are leaving but I have decide to stay for a few more years to train."

Carths parents went from tears of sadness to tears of joy.

"Thank you Carth, Teila we are just not ready to let go yet."

"But remember one thing dad it ain't going to be the same any more around here."

"I know Carth your destiny has only begun now!"

 

[Astinus]

Getting better! ^^

Okay, so your grammar has still improved. You have more full stops than you did in the first chapter, so that's good. Just remember to make sure that you have them at the end of every sentence...that needs one.

Let me tell you about proof-reading. This is a process done after you get done writing a chapter, but before you post it. Proof-reading is when you read back over what you have written to make sure that it is the best that you can get it. With this, you can make sure that you have all the full stops in that you need! Because you still have some missing in places, and with proof-reading, you're no longer focused on getting the story down, but making sure that everything is how it should be.

So, you have some description of the character's emotions. But how about we focuson emotion in dialogue. Don't worry. This is fun.

Look at your battle scene's dialogue, especially the punctuation. Now it's good that you have the full stops in there, so that's grammatically correct. But, do you know how dull full stops are? They are the calm punctuation. What you want in a middle of a scene like a battle is exclamation points! These are the loud punctuation marks, the ones that signify yelling, shouting, feelings of surprise or fear! So when you have a battle, make the characters yell their commands. It'll wake up your story and make your characters more human. No 10-year-old kid can be that calm in their first battle!

Next grammar lesson: How to make possesives. When you want to show that something belongs to Carth, Nash, or any other character, you add an apostrophe and a "s". So it'll be:
Carth's
Nash's
James's

Just keep working on writing and don't get discouraged. Good luck!

 

[latioslegends]

Chapter 3 Good by is not forever

Kyles Entry- Over the last couple of years I almost forget my children are latis. I just seem to be concentrating on Carths pokemon training. He has also has seem to become very good artist I know that he was good but Susan just keeps making him better at it he might just become better than her. Carth has been teaching Teila how to battle usually when trainers vist the island Carth and Teila would double battle but Teila uses Carths pokemon. Carth has seem to caught only one pokemon the regular way it was a charmeleon in the woods I am trying to get use to the thing in the house because Carth's Trapinch made it to become a Flygon and I know that Charmeleon will become a Charizard. Carth just seems to get more stronger everyday he is the best trainer on the island to my opinion, he loses a battle once in a while now. Last year turned my knowledge of the dragon pokemon changed on this island because one night Carth was attacked by a Salamence. It suprised him when it attacked but when it landed it bit Carths belt and ripped it off. I saw a empty poke ball role off the belt it touched it and went in I was shocked to see that but it didn't struggle for some reason and that's when it hit me it had to be the Salamence he helped when Carth was 10. The only thing that I could think of is that it wanted to make up the favor Carth did for it. I have been seeing over the last three years that Carth and Nash hate each other I don't let it get in the way of my research but I am beginning to think Nash is up to something I have seen him talking to different people over the phone who don't seem to be to friendly. I didn't know what he was talking about but it doesn't sound good. I would probably head to his lab tomorrow to do a little more field work with him and hope for answers to what he is doing. End Entry

Kyle was walking home from some shopping in town and some night work with Nash it was dark out all he can here and see were the town lights and can here the wind and a roar from a dragon pokemon.

When Kyle got home all the lights were out he put down the supply he bought and looked at the clock. Kyles eyes lit up like a light bulb to see it was midnight.

"Oh no should have been home three hours ago how did I loose track of time "

Kyle just walked up stairs quietly to not wake up anyone but when he got up stairs he looked out the window. He saw Carth and Flygon on the beach. Kyle put on his jacket and walked out the door.

Carth was sitting on the beach right next to the water. Carth just looked at the moons reflection on the water he let the cold water run up his legs he didn't seem to mind. Kyle just began to walk up to him he can see that Flygon was fast asleep next to him but Carth was wide awake.

Kyle came up to Carth and sat down he looked at Carth and gave him a smile and just sort of
joked around with him but Carth looked very serious.

"So why are you up so late Carth it' pass midnight "


Carth looked at his dad and began to talk softly "I had a dream that told me something "

Kyle looked very concerned he asked. "What was the dream that lead you to here "

Carth looked up to the stars and said softly "The dream I had told that I am not who I think I am "

"What do you mean by that "

Carth raised his voice "Forget about it dad "

Kyle moved over a little bit and said "You don't need to be so defensive about it "

"It is just so confusing the dream it felt so real I mean "

Kyle said calmly "Try to forget about it and try to get to sleep."

Carth yawed and said "I think I'll sleep here on the beach if you are ok with that "

Kyle smiled and nodded at him.

"Alright I'll be going in you sure you don't need a blanket or anything."

"I'm sure dad"

"Ok oh and I'll be heading to Nashes early tomorrow he said he has something special planned "

Kyle walked back to the house looking back at Carth lay his head on Flygons back. Kyle began to worry a little that Carth might discover who he really is soon all the signs over the years just keep making Kyle worry Carth and Teilas ability to talk to pokemon and now they are having dreams.

Over the night Carth had another dream he saw his dad in trouble at Nashes he was surrounded by men in every direction but the dream ended.

Carth woke up screaming "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh "

Flygons eyes sprung open.

Carth knew that his dad was already at Nashes. Carth didn't want to believe the dream but he

didn't want to take a risk Carth ran inside and grabbed his poke balls and ran and got on top of Flygon and said "We got to get to Nashes Lets fly "

Meanwhile

Kyle was walking to professor Nashes lab the morning sun sparkled the water. Kyle entered the building to see Nash standing in the middle of the lab.

Kyle was a little nervous he said "Nash is something wrong "

Nash looked at Kyle and said "You know over years we have seen rare pokemon but what I found is nearly hard to believe for me but you have always suprised me I never thought when I met you that you can get very lucky to bad you don't work for my boss he would had made you a big figure for the man who brought Latias and Latios to him.

Kyle was shocked when he said that Kyle had never had so much fear and worry in his life before. Then all f a sudden men broke threw all the doors all were in a black uniform with a R on them.

Kyle gasp he was surrounded by the men but a man in a orange suit with a Persian next to him came behind Nash.

The man had a serious and cruel voice he started to speak with Nash.

"Excellent work Nash our first attempt was a disaster for Latias and Latios but you brought them right to me these new ones "

"Thank you Giovanni "

Giovanni started to yell at Kyle "Now Kyle give the kids and we don't half to have a pointless fight "

Despite the major disadvantage Kyle yelled back at Giovanni "You will never take my kids they might be powerful pokemon to you but they are my children you shall never put a finger on them "




Giovanni had a mean grin on his face and threw out a Nidoking. "I would start rethinking about what you just said Kyle or your leaving with more scars all over your body "

Kyle gripped his arm with the scar he knew the horrifying pain from getting scars.

Kyle looked over to Nash with a grin and started to ask him questions "Nash how did know anyway and why are you a rocket your just being a fool "

Nash pulled out a pair of sunglasses out of his pocket and started to explain. "Now I learned this when they were nine you see one day I was having a Kelceon problem around my building. I got these sunglasses from my boss. I got rid of the problem but Teila was around the building when I was doing it. I was amazed at what I saw when I had the glasses on I saw Latias instead of Teila. Now I had always had found interest in your kids since then "

Kyle was shocked to hear that all he said next was "How long have you been a rocket?"

"About five years now I'll tell you that you should join if you want big bucks "

"Why did you wait to strike now and why are you even a researcher "

"Well that is simple you see I did not know what pokemon they were in the first place so over the next four years I been trying to find info on the two pokemon since I saw your daughters and sons true form. Now I was a researcher before I joined the rockets but I was getting bored of all the work so I turned to crime and I got to say it has made me wealthy over these years "

Kyle was very disappointed with Nash he grinned and said "You are a complete idiot how can you do such stupid things your just hurting yourself I remember you being a very nice guy "

Giovanni pointed his finger at Kyle and told it use horn attack but right before the attack Kyle heard Flygon.

Carth was riding Flygon he told it to "Flygon Hyper beam blast the door and Nidoking "

The hyper beam burst threw the door and blast Nidoking out the window


Flygon flew into the building all the rockets were in disarrange from the hyper beam

Carth yelled out to Kyle in the smoke form the blast he was getting scared that he had might hurt his father in the blast he yelled out "grab my hand "

Kyle was ok he got on Flygon and they took off.

Nash yelled out "don't let them get away "

Carth had no fear of them he just told Flygon "Faster Flygon faster "

Kyle was sitting behind Carth he told him "we got to get back to the house "

Carth was just having fun despite the rockets he just loved flying he laugh a little and said "Alright "

Flygon brought back the two but Kyle was very scared.

Carth was trying to be as calm as he could but there were so many questions that he wanted to know about what is going on.

Kyle ran in the house Kyle was getting two backpacks. Carth could se Susan looking very scared Kyle was putting supply and clothes in the backpacks.


Kyle and Susan ran out of the house with Teila he gave a backpack to each of them.

Kyle and Susan were beginning to cry a little but Kyle wiped his tears off his face and said "Carth, Teila you guys half to leave I am so sorry but you are in danger and you must go "


Carth stood up and tried to be brave he said "We are not leaving you we will fight the rockets there are other trainers here we can beat them "

Kyle put his hand on Carths shoulder and began to beg him to go "Carth you must leave we will see each other again soon. The rockets want you and I don't want to risk you falling to them we will be fine here we will head for the town there are a lot of trainers there who will help!"

Teila looked up at Susan and Kyle and said "where will we go then!"

"Susan didn't seem as sad anymore she knew she had to be strong. Susan gave Teila her poke nav and told her to go to the city of Altomare.

Carth and Teila got on Flygon Carth was trying his best to not to worry.

Kyle came up to Carth he didn't seem to be afraid anymore all he said was "Good luck we will come to Altomare one day when you are there just try to have a good time just think of this as a vacation for you two. Make sure you look out for each other protect your sister Carth!"

Carth nodded and said "Alright Flygon lets go lets fly fast!"

Flygon flew as high and as fast as it can Carth and Teila waved to there parents good by.
As Carth got higher he never saw his island from above he was amazed by it's beauty.

Carth was excited by how high he was he felt he can fly to but he just said "Next stop Altomare!"

 

[latioslegends]

Chapter 4 Altomare

"Carth tell Flygon to slow down Ahhhhhhhh "

"Are you kidding this is great faster Flygon faster "

Teila was freaking out how fast Flygon was going. She never had flown this high with him and this fast neither had Carth but he was enjoying it the thrill of speed always sparked something inside him.

Carth was laughing with a big smile on. "Now Flygon dive down head straight towards the water "

Teila screamed out "Your completely insane ahhhhhhhhh "

Flygon was heading for a dive Carth was hanging on tight with Teila holding on two him.

"Stop this Carth stop this at this rate we won't get to the city alive "

Carth yelled out to Flygon "Pull up "

Teila started yelling at Carth "What was were you thinking I have seen you do stupid things but this is the worst yet "

Carth sort of began to tease a little "Aw come on Teila I was just having a little fun before we go to the city and speaking of that how far is it from here?"

"Well according to my poke nav it is about an hour flight if you stop your crazy ideas "

Carth looked ahead upon the ocean and said "lets try to make it a half an hour flight FLygon full speed "

"No not again ahhhhhhhhhh " Flygon burst to incredible speeds making it's cry.

Over the time Carth thought of what the city would be like he never been to big cities ever. Carth knew that Tyler and James would have been to them since they are on there journeys. His island had a small community of less than sixty people wasn't much but it felt like a hundred to him since it was so active all the time.

Carth was looked at his watch it was 3:00 he had been flying on Flygon for nearly five hours but he stated to see something in the distance.

Carth saw Altomare "Hey Teila were here "

It was just a minutes flight before they would enter the city
Flygon entered the city Carth noticed a girl on the dock painting she just starred at him. Carth waved to her before he entered the canals he loved that it was canals instead streets he thought it was amazing.

Teila was astonished by the beauty she looked at the gondolas going by under them.

"Alright land on that bridge over there Flygon " Carth yelled out.

Carth was getting starred at by everyone that saw him he was the only thing flying accept for tons pidgy.

Carth looked at Flygon when he got off he still looked amazed by the city "Flygon thanks for the lift I'll make sure you get something special tonight now return "

Carth stomach began to growl he knew he didn't anything to eat all day yet.

"Hey Teila lets get something to eat I'm starving "

Teila was a little hungry herself.

Carth looked around but all of a sudden he saw that same girl by the entrance to the city walking across a bridge. Carth saw that she was looking at him in a strange way but the girl seemed different in some way to Carth than when he was by the entrance. The girl seem to want him to follow her.

"Hey Teila heres some cash just pick me up something I'll meet you at the center of the town "

Teila just looked puzzled and said "Where you going?"

"Nowhere don't worry "

"Alright but you better hurry up "

Teila ran off and Carth started to follow the girl. She was pretty fast in that outfit but Carth was fast himself. The girl was moving threw the streets Carth thought it was a complete maze.

Carth was starting to get frustrated with her "She wanted me to follow her but she keeps taking random directions or is she just trying to get me mad "

Carth was wondering threw the streets he knew he had lost her. "Great lost in the alleyways it is official she just wanted to get me mad and it work "

Carth pounded the wall but he began to here something coming his way.

Carth began to yell out in the direction of the noise "Hello is someone there "

Out of the dark an Aridous and Espeon came out.
The Espeon looked completely messed up it's fur was all covered in filth and it looked hurt and the Aridous had scars and web all over it's body.

The two pokemon started to attack. Aridous string shot Carth and the Espeon used a psybeam on him.

Carth screamed from the psybeam "Ahhhhhhhhhhhh "

Carth fell to the ground. He couldn't move his arms the string shot kept him down he knew he had an ability to talk to pokemon. He tried to talk to them.

"Why are you doing this what is your problem "

The two pokemon ignored him. The Espeon scratch him in the face hard the Aridous used a Night Shade on Carth.

Carth was in pain he tried to reach his poke balls but the web held his arms in place.

Carth cried out "Help me please somebody ahhhhhhhhhhh "

The two pokemon just kept hurting him they would not stop.

Then the Espeon made a noise Carth knew what it said "This is revenge "

Carth yelled out "What did I do to you I just got here " The Espeon didn't answer.

But all of a sudden something flew down hitting the Espeon against the wall of the alley.

Carth was suprised by the attack "What was that "

The attacker was invisible but with the two pokemon distracted with all his might he burst the webbing and made a run for it.

Carth was trying to find his way out of the alleyways. All of a sudden the Aridous jumped in front of him it was about to use night shade. Then another three invisible attackers hit the Aridous dead on.

Carth was now getting scared he headed where the fight didn't seem as bad. Carth ran down threw the alleys as fast as he could. Carth came to an exit and he was relieved that it was over.

Carth began to run to the center of town he just sort of guessed where he was going he just followed the canals.

Carth was right about his idea of the canals he saw he huge museum and two pillars in the court yard he figured that this must be it.

Carth began to yell out in the crowd "Teila, Teila where you "

Then somebody grabbed Carths hand but he knew who it was.

Teila looked at Carth shocked at his wounds he had.

"Carth what happened to you?"

Carth tried to be calm about it he never wanted Teila to worry "Nothing Teila lets just say I tripped."

"Tripped you look like you might collapse right now "

"I'm alright don't worry just forget about it please "

"You sure Carth I mean you should at least put some band aids on "

"I'll be fine lets just get a hotel "

"Oh here is some is ice cream it very good you got to try it "

"Thanks but lets get a hotel now "

"Alright just chill and you said your ok "

Carth and Teila walked to a hotel near the museum it had a nice view of the town Carth thought it was the perfect one to get.

Carth and Teila walked in they saw loads of paintings on the wall of the figures he saw of the pokemon statues in the pokemon in the court yard.

"Um hello we will like a room please."

The man at the counter just starred at Carths wounds.

Carth looked him in the eye with a mean look "Do you have a problem sir "

"Oh sorry um how many nights "

"Three for now I guess."

"Alright here is your key"

"Oh before I go I have a question I have seen statues and paintings now of two pokemon what are they?"

The man at the desk look sort of suprised "Well it is obvious that you just got here then the two pokemon are called Latias and Latios according to legend they watch over us in Altomare.

Carth was starting to think about the incident he had with the Aridous and Espeon he then started to ask questions to the guy..

"Do people ever see them or even helped by them?"

"Well when I was about your age I did some research on them and there kind there are a decent amount of them I believe according to the books. It is just to bad no one ever sees them but you could walk right by them without realizing it in one of the books I read they can take the form of a human "

Carth and Teila looked impressed by what the man told them.

Carth thought "was that girl possibly a Latias no she couldn't be "

"Come on Carth lets get these backpacks off "

Carth liked his room it had a balcony over the canals and a clear view of the museum.

Teila looked at Carths wounds and said softly "Take a shower Carth if we go to the museum I don't want you looking like this "

Carth just nodded and went in the shower. Went Carth got when the water touched his skin where the wounds were they glowed a blue light then they disappeared.

Carth was amazed at what just happened he couldn't believe it he knew this wasn't natural he asked him only one question.

"What am I?"

 

[StarryLatiasGirl]

Hm, good idea for a fanfic, I like it! Although, as said before, your grammar could use a little bit of touching up, but other than that, very nice! I can't wait to read more!

~StarryLatiasGirl

 

[latioslegends]

Chapter 5 The Museum
Carth got out of the shower he didn't have any more wounds all of them were gone from the glow he was breathing fast he was getting worried.

"What happened how is this possible this ain't right at all!"

Teila knocked on the door "Hey Carth are you ok?"

"Um yes I'm fine I will be out in a minute!"

Carth came out the bathroom but Teila looked shocked.

"Carth your wounds there gone what did you use in there!"

"I don't know when the water touched my wounds well lets just not talk about the rest!"

Teila groaned she knew if her brother did not want to talk about things he would never tell anyone.

Carth sat down in chair and began to talk softly "Teila does it ever concern you that we can talk to pokemon or the fact why our step parents so secretive."

Teila sat down and begun to look very concern about what Carth said "Carth we are just gifted well at least what dad told us."

"Gifted listen Teila we have some of the most weirdest dreams!"

"Carth there are people in the world who have physic powers and I don't want to know what kind of dreams they might have!"

Teila stood up and began to walk out the door "Lets just get to the museum now come on I think it will be fun!"

Carth and Teila ran threw the streets Carth knew that Teila was trying to beat him to the museum she had that look on when Teila was racing him.

Teila was full of joy she was beginning to think that she can beat Carth. "Come on Carth you usually beat me!"

Carth ran threw the court yard as fast as he could he couldn't tell where his sister was in the crowd of people. Carth came into the entrance of the museum he didn't see his sister he thought he had beat her.

Suddenly Teila ran threw the doors looking a little mad "Carth what were you doing!"

Carth felt a little confused about what she was talking about "What did I do now!"

"While you were running a poke ball fell off your belt looks like it was Lapars so I ran back to get it!"

Carth felt embarrassed that something like that happened "Whoops I guess I got to be a little bit more careful then but I still won the race!"

"What! I would have won if I haven't ran back for your poke ball!"

"Alright you win just stop this you are going to embarrass me!"

Teila and Carth started to walk threw the museum Teila seemed to like the fossils under the floor.

"Hey Carth look at these looks like a Aridactyel and Kabutops to the looks of it."

Carth just stood there he didn't seem interested with the fossils. "Sorry fossils never seem to interest me at all you know me I like myths and legends real or fake."

"Ok then go vist the Latias and Latios area I'm sure you would find interest there I think."

Carth nodded and walked off to the Latias and Latios area. Carth was getting excited he always loved legends and myths his favorite one was about Groudon, Kyogre and Rayquazza that his mother told him when he was five.

Carth begun to look at the lati artifacts but in the middle of two lati statues he saw a book behind a glass case. The book was opened Carth walked up to the case and starred at the book.. While he was looking at the book he didn't blinked or even moved. Images flew threw Carths head he saw a massive garden and a jewel.

"Carth, Carth!"

"What oh hey Teila!"

Teila looked worried "Carth are you ok I mean what happened you I come in here and you looked like you were off in another world!"

"Images Teila that's what happened they were beautiful but they felt so real!"

"What do you mean Carth?"

Carth looked away from the book and said "A garden!"

Teila looked puzzled but grabbed Carth's hand and brought him bind one of the lati statues.

"You might just had been day dreaming Carth it was nothing probably!"

Carth thought that she has to be kidding she always took concern when anything weird happened to us.

"Teila aren't you going to take concern about this I mean you always think that stuff like this needs more talking about!"

Teila grinned and whispered in Carths ear "I have had the same images myself but more over the years like you have had your dreams."

Carth thought about his dreams why do they feel so real and what were they. Since Teila told her image then Carth thought he should tell her his dreams and what they are.

Carth took a breath and spoke out calmly "Teila my dream that I have is I am on top of a mountain above the clouds. I see dragon pokemon and if I am correct I think I saw Rayquazza in the distance. At the end of the dream a man in black robes and his face hidden behind the robes walks up behind me and says "You are not what you think you are" and then I wake up."

Teila looked suprised at what he said but she only was interested in the man Carth saw "Carth did you ever seen the mans face!"

"I wish I could the dream just keeps ending but the voice sounded so familiar for some reason."

"I hope that you figure out who that guy was one day but lets get going I saw this huge machine when we got in here I want to check it out!"

When Carth and Teila got to the machine Carth was amazed but not by the machine but by the light that went threw artistic windows above the machine.

Teila was astonishment of the machine but she had no idea what it was. "Carth do you even have a clue of what it is even I mean look at it!"

Then an old man walked up to them. "That is called the D.M.A. the defense mechanism of Altomare."

Carth turned and seemed interested in what the man was talking about it sounded like a legend to him.

Carth asked the man "What does it do really?"

The man smiled and said "Lets just say I like to keep that a secret to myself. You see about a year ago it was activated by to villains named Annie and Oakly."

Teila replied "What had happen and how did they activated it?"

"Well you see a terrible thing happen at the end but it cost the life of a good friend to stop it and activating it I can't tell you that want make sure nothing like last year happens again."

Teila nodded and said "Well I'm sorry about your friend Mr."

"Well at least I know his soul rests in peace and you can call me Lorenzo if you like."

Carth Teila walked around the machine but then Carth noticed the girl that he followed painting on the balcony above the machine.

Carth was getting a little mad that the girl nearly led him to his death.

Carth yelled out "What was your problem why did you leave me back there I could have been killed!"

The girl looked down and seemed to be very confused "What are you talking about I don't even know you!"

Carth kept walking with Teila right beside him Carth thought she was being stupid with him "You know what I mean the alleys remember!"

"What are talking about now leave me alone you jerk!"

Teila said softly "Come on Carth lets go you are just wasting your time."

As Carth and Teila walked around the machine they stepped on and odd circle on the ground.
The circle started to glow under them.

Teila was getting scared "Carth what is happening!"

Then lighting came from under them hitting Carth and Teila.

The two screamed from the pain "Carth help please Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!"

Carth was trap in the pain to but he rememberer what he said that he would protect his sister from danger and despite the horrifying pain he pushed his sister out of the rings which began to rise.

People ran to the machine Carth was trapped in the lighting and the rings kept hitting his skin the pain was to intense for him. Images flashed threw Carths mind of a garden the mountain in his dreams and the man he saw in his dreams.

People grabbed Carth by his legs and tried to pull him out.

The people got Carth out Carth had little consciousness left he saw his sister was out cold on the floor. Carth saw Lorenzo in complete shock and the girl on the balcony looking like she was shocked herself to.

People started to yell out "Get a doctor quick hurry!"

Carth was picked up by two people he saw that Lorenzo was trying to get into the crowd of people "The man that was carrying was saying "Hang in there we are going to get you to a doctor!"

Then everything went black for Carth he was out cold.

 

[latioslegends]

Chapter 6 Latis

Bionca and Lorenzo started to walk back to the garden as soon as possible after seeing what had happened to the two kids at the museum.

Bionca was completely overwhelmed by the fact that the kids at the museum could had been a Latias and Latios. "Grampa how is this possible I mean really that kid was a pokemon trainer I saw his poke balls on his belt!"

Lorenzo looked at her thinking about the fact that he was a trainer "I wish we could find an answer Bionca but they must be a Latias and Latios the machine only activates if a Lati is put on the rings."

Bionca was confused about the fact of him being a trainer but couldn't drop the fact of the machine activating to the two kids.

As Bionca and Lorenzo entered the garden Bionca yelled out "Latias come here I think you want to here what we got to tell you!"

Latias flew out of a tree running straight into Bionca with a big hug. Latias was full of joy she was making her cries then she stop and began to listen to what Bionca had to say.

Bionca took a breathe and begun to speak "Latias what if you had more family I mean you do already from when your other younger friends came last year remember."

Flashback
Bionca looked at Latias with tears having to see her like this. Latias was in her form of Bionca sitting on the swing where she had reveled herself to Ash she was not moving or wanting to do anything.

Lorenzo stood by Bionca trying to cheer her up "Bionca I know it is hard now with Latias brother gone and her friend Ash leaving a while ago but things will get better!"

Bionca tried to get rid of her sorrow and tried to think what things that she could do to help her friend Latias. "Grampa how can we help Latias she is completely depressed?"

"There is a way and sometimes the answers come to you be patient for these things and have hope!"

Bionca wiped her tears off and begun to smile. "Grampa your right things can get better we just have to wait!"

Bionca stated to walk to the pool of where the soul dew was she didn't look over to Latias on the swing.

When Bionca got to the pool she looked down to the soul dew and tried to remember the good times with Latios. Bionca sat on one of the steps by the small pool and said softly "Latios please Latias she needs your help if there is anyway you can help her please try your best I beg of you."

Bionca stood up and begun to walk back to the entrance to Lorenzo's work shop. Bionca saw Lorenzo heading to the his work shop to but before she entered Bionca heard the chimes going off in the garden.

The chimes were spinning non stop something very fast was in the garden.

Bionca and Lorenzo were getting worried thinking that someone else has discovered the garden and feared that whatever was there might want Latias as Annie and Oakly did.

Lorenzo was looking around the garden he saw nothing at all he knew those chimes spun when there was an intruder.

All of a sudden Bionca heard a small cry behind one of the trees. Bionca began to walk up to the tree it sounded like Latias but she was under still in her form of Bionca on the swings.

Bionca was very curious what it was she walked up slowly trying to not scare what it might be.

Bionca saw something peek it's head behind the tree but Bionca knew what it was when it showed it's head it was as she thought a Latias.

Bionca bend down and tried to show that she meant no threat. The Latias poked it's head out and begun to move slowly towards Bionca.

Begun said with a kind and gentle voice "It's alright I won't hurt come on you don't half to be shy."

The Latias came close to be Bionca and the Latias raised it's hand and touched Bionca's hand.

Lorenzo looked Bionca and the new Latias with so much joy thinking that this will help the depressed Latias.

All of a sudden the Latias made a cry. Then two Latios came out behind some trees. They seemed to trust Bionca but were not sure with Lorenzo yet.

Bionca was amazed seeing all of these Latis they looked younger than the Latias under the swing.

Bionca called out to Latias her voice was full of excitement "Latias come here quick!"

Latias got off the swing holding her left arm looking down Lorenzo walked right along side her.

Bionca introduced Latias to the other Latis in front of her.

Latias looked up to the other younger Latis. The Latis started to speak to the depressed Latias.

Bionca was very curious about what hey are saying "Hey grampa what do you think they are saying?"

Lorenzo rubbed his head and said "Well I don't know that but I think they are trying to help Latias."

Then Latias looked up at the two Latios and the one Latias. Latias decide to turn into her true form.

Bionca looked at her friend Latias and said "Go have fun Latias I think they want you to play with them."

Latias and the rest of the Latis started to play in the garden. Bionca looked at them to see that Latias had a new family even if she was the older one this time.

Bionca realized something what nicknames to give them. "Hey grampa what should we name them since now there are two Latias and Latios.

Lorenzo was a little confused himself about what to name them "Bionca why don't you decide what to name them!"

Bionca thought for a minute and had an idea "What about we call the new Latias Peppy and the Latios on the left Zippy and the one on the right Flash!"

Lorenzo looked up at the Latis playing and making there cries and said "Well Bionca I guess it seems like they are ok with those names! but where did they come from?"

Bionca was confused herself but she just looked at the fact that Latias had a new family "Grampa I think that the answer might come to us one day!"

Bionca and Lorenzo began to leave the garden but then Bionca nearly forgot to tell Latias something. "Latias why don't you show your new friends around Altomare they are going to need to know the city if they want to fly around in it!"

Latias flew back to the other Latis.

Bionca and Lorenzo left the garden wondering where they came from.
End Flashback

Bionca looked at Latias and said "Now Latias I don't know how they are Latis but you should try to find!"

Lorenzo said softy "They should be at Dr. Beth's house, the one close to the museum with the Latios statue on it shouldn't be to hard to find!"

Latias turned invisible and took off to Dr. Beth's house.


"C, Carth where are we!"

Carth saw that he was outside with Teila Carth felt strange about it until it hit him it must be a dream. Carth saw a newspaper it was year ago on the date.

Teila gasp at the newspaper "Carth there two things very weird one how are we sharing the same dream and two this is in the past!"

Carth was acting calm he knew that he got weird dreams "The dream will end Teila but this dream is new! Here let me go ask somebody about today usually my dreams tell me something!"

Carth walked up to a man and asked "Um hello is there anything in particular today."

The man didn't respond.

Carth was about to tap his shoulder. When Carth did his hand went threw him.

Carth was shocked he knew it was a dream but it was a past image.

Teila was getting scared about the dream she had dreams that felt real but the dreams made sense.
"Carth what is going on here I am getting worried!"

Then a light surrounded them and they disappeared.

They reappeared but it was on a boat.

Teila officially scared "C, Carth what just happened and why are we here now!"

Carth saw three people on the boat the boy with a pikachu with him got off.

Carth was now took concern about the girl that led him to death nearly. The girl was quite she then kissed him and ran off. Carth then saw the girl and the man looked shocked about seeing the boy kissed.

Carth laughed a little he figured this kid had problems getting a girl to like him a lot. The girl on the boat then said. "Was that Latias or Bionca!"

Carth and Teila laughed seeing the guy in the boat all jealous he figured he had worst problems with finding a girl that likes him.

Then the boat took off Carth was thinking about the girl that kissed the kid. Carth was concern what the girl with the Togepi said was she really a Latias.

As the boat went out to sea the kid and the Pikachu looked up like they saw a ghost.

Carth and Teila looked up they saw three figures flying towards the city.


Latias was flying as fast and as excited as she could be to meet which might be another two Latis.

Latias got to Beth's she saw Carth on a couch on the second floor. Latias floated down towards the first floor and knocked on the door.

Beth was helping the two kids out "What is somebody there at this time!"

Beth went down the stairs. Latias went into the open window and turned into Bionca.

She walked towards Carth. Latias could see that Carth was out cold. She laid her hand on Carth's head then she saw a red glow coming under Carth's shirt. Latias lifted Carth's shirt up a little she saw a red triangle on his stomach.

Beth opened the door nobody was there it was 7:30 PM and there wasn't even anybody around the area. Beth figured it was a prank by some kids he was a little mad about it "You bunch of dumb kids if I catch you are going to get it!"

Beth was coming up stair. Latias began to panic she wanted more time but she turned into her real form and flew out the window.

Carth was then opening his eyes. Carth saw a lady walking towards them he never been to a doctor but it was one.

 

[oni flygon]

Okay, just a reminder that a lengthy story doesn't necessarily constitute to a good one. Your story has some glaring mechanical errors--simple ones to boot. I'd advise you to read those couple of stickied threads in the Fanfiction Lounge or listen to people who would actually dedicate their time in giving your constructive criticism. You wouldn't happen to be mean and waste their time, would you? :o

According to the rules, if you don't improve the next time, I'll have to close this, so please do show some sign of improvement. Thanks!

 

[latioslegends]

All right I am going review all my chapters today and fix any promblems I can find. I was never the best when it came to typing but I will do the best I can today.

 

[latioslegends]

Chapter 7 An Old Friend

Carth was waking up he saw a couple of burn marks on his skin they didn't seem to hurt.

Beth walked up to Carth with her hands folded behind her back she seemed nice. "Well you finally came around I was beginning to get worried about you."

Carth started to get up he put his right arm on his stomach he felt unusual there. "Where am I what happened and who are you?"

The young doctor was glanced at Carth and turned around "Listen I have not a clue about what happened? listen whatever did happen kept you knocked out for a nice four hours! Two people came threw the door holding you two they didn't say what happened!"

Carth interrupted and blurted out "Where is my sister is she ok please tell me is she here!"

Beth turned around and handed Carth a picture she looked very pleased some how "Your sister downstairs! And don't worry she is fine she will probably come around in a few minutes!"

Carth then looked at the picture. He saw that it was a picture of him and Teila in pain at the museum.

Carth looked back at Beth he was trying to be calm about the picture "Listen Beth I don't know what is going on but I just want to leave now!"

"Alright then kid just go wake your sister up."

Carth went down the stairs he saw his sister was standing up. Teila ran up to Carth hugging him. Tears began to come out of Teila's face "Carth I was so scared what happened!"

Carth said softly and in a gentle voice "Teila I don't know, please just try to calm down I know that something bad happened but I am sure that it won't happen again."

Teila and Carth left Beth's house. Once they left Carth blurted out "So that dream did you think it was weird at all Teila!"

Teila looked up to the night sky she said "Carth that dream we shared I am beginning to think that we share a very important bond!" Teila didn't seem worried in fact she looked proud.

Carth was confused about what she meant "A bond what are you saying I mean sure weird things happen to us all the time but hey we grew on quite a weird place anyway!"

Teila giggled a little she was thinking about all the weird things that have happen on the island. "Huh Carth just accept the fact that we are a very special two! And who knows Carth we might have an important purpose in life!"

Carth looked at Teila with a lot of concern she never acted like this before "Teila I never seen you like this before! Your like a whole new person now?"

Teila said happily "Carth now it is just sharing a dream with you is something amazing! I have always wanted to see the world threw your eyes you know! The world of pokemon we both see it in different ways I just want to see how see it."

Carth looked down thinking about what she said he never thought that no one cares about him that much. "Teila I never thought that you think that kind of stuff about me!"

"Carth you are surely a very gifted person! You're a very carrying person you have always protected me from danger despite what happens to you! I just want to see what you see what drives you to do these things you are the bravest person I have ever met!"

Carth felt proud about what Teila said about him he felt enlighten inside "Listen Teila I see the world of pokemon as a chance for adventure and excitement but there is much more about me you don't know but I keep that personal!"

"I understand Carth now lets get back to the hotel I want to get up early!"

Carth and Teila started to run back to the hotel.

Carth and Teila were running faster than ever Carth never knew he could go this fast he not even tired.

Teila was going fast herself but not as fast as Carth she yelled out to Carth "Come on wait up!"

Carth just kept running he felt like he could go even faster. Carth closed his eyes as he ran across the court yard of the museum.

Carth looked behind seeing his sister just entering the court yard. He was already at the entrance of the hotel Carth yelled out "Come on Teila you run faster I know you can go faster!"

Teila was impressed with Carth going that fast. She was trying to go faster she began to feel like Tyler he was always trying to prove that he was the best.

Carth then saw a boy run up to Teila. Teila was faster but the kid just kept pushing himself.

Teila and the kid came right up to Carth. The kid was breathing hard from trying to go that fast. The kid then took off his cap Carth lit up with a load of excitement it was his friend James.

Carth was very excited all he could think about was asking James about his pokemon journey. "James this is a miracle I mean you being here now tell me about everything please being on an island for more than twelve years you don't get to see much!"

James was trying to keep his cool he thought Carth was out of his mind he always saw Carth as a calm kid. "Slow down Carth there is a good reason why I am here! But first let introduce myself to Teila!"

James lifted Teilas hand and he kissed it. Carth jaw practically fell he felt like this wasn't even James all "Ah James is that even you anymore you always had trouble when it came to girls!"

Teila blushed she never seen James like his he would be even hyper on the island he was calm and very gentle how it seemed like James turned to Carth and spoke in a loving like voice "Listen Carth I sort of had changed over the years going on a journey can either bring you many things I have seen some the most beautiful that you can only imagine!"

Carth tried to forget what he saw he acted as calmly as possible "Lets just get to our room and you could tell me James why you are here."

Carth, Teila, and James came to the hotel room. Carth sat down in chair and began to talk to James. "James tell me why are you here the last time I heard from you were just entering the Kanto region?"

James at down he showed some sorrow Carth knew something was wrong "Listen your step parents called me they told about the Team rocket attack on the island and now they said the rockets are coming here!"

Carth laid back he could only think about if his step parents were ok. Carth figured he could take on the rockets now that James was here.

Teila sat right by Carth she didn't looked or felt scared of a bunch rockets coming "I think together we can fight those rockets what about you James and you Carth!"

James stood up his voice was full of confidence "I will fight them along with you two I think we can beat them I have been training since I left the island!"

Carth rose he felt like he was the ultimate pokemon trainer to fight against the rockets with James "I know we win we have always had prevailed when we are in trouble!"

Then it hit Teila it was like a sudden Flash of light in her head "James how did you know we were here anyway?"

James happily said "Well your parents told me! But I don't have a clue about why they told you to go here it seems ridiculous to me you I was spending all day trying to find you guys!"

Carth laughed a little, he thought that it was sort of funny knowing that he was going everywhere around the city "Well I am sorry if you had trouble but trust me on one thing me and my sister have been having one painful day!"

James looked at Carth's burn marks on his leg. There were only a few but there clearly visible.
"So what happened did you get attack by a deranged ponyta or something!"

Carth then remembered something when he got to the city. Carth remembered after he got attacked by the Espeon and Aridous he took a shower. When he was taking the shower his wounds glowed a blue light and disappeared.

Carth grabbed Teila's hand and brought her into the bathroom. Carth turned the water on in the sink and Carth lifted his leg and said "This might be startling to you James maybe not as much to you Teila but watch!"

Carth had out his leg in the sink and the water went down his burn marks. The water as before made his wounds glow the same blue light as before and they disappeared.

James fell back in shock of what he saw landed on floor and began to crawl backwards. "What just happened please tell me I am just seeing things please!"

Teila looked with amazement she was not scared but really suprised. "Now that was very, well how should I say this weird!"

Carth took his leg out of the sink Carth saw James freaking out on the floor. "Ok Teila now you should give it a shot!"

Teila lifted her leg, she was shacking a little but if her brother did it she thought it was ok. "Alright here it goes and stop acting like a nut I am sure you have more crazier things on your journey!"

As the water touched Teila's burn marks they glowed not a blue light but a red light instead.

Teila looked at her leg it healed instantly she thought that this was remarkable, Teila took a breathe and walked over to James.

James was overwhelmed seeing something like that happen he got up and breathed slowly he was trying to relax the best he could. "Now Carth do you have the slightest idea of how this happened? I am beginning to see why team rocket is after you!"

Carth exclaimed "Why would you think that I am different from you so much! We like the same things I have been your friend for nine years you shouldn't compare to this gift I have!"

James felt like a fool, he was ashamed of himself to be afraid of his best friend, Carth had always shown respect, care, and he always looked out for him. James exclaimed "Listen I am sorry what I did what was I thinking you're my best friend you have looked out for me in the past and I should look out for you!"

Carth felt sympathy for James, he knew that James had grown up around normal people his whole life but Carth was glad that James was looking at the fact that Carth was his friend instead of what had just happen.

Teila exclaimed "Here lets get some sleep! Oh why don't you stay with us James or for at least tonight!"

James nodded and exclaimed "Thank you Carth it is almost an honor to me to meet the person who inspired me to be a pokemon trainer it has been a long time since I ever been able see you! It is just thanks to you I have been able to see the world I have felt feelings that I have never felt in my life!" A tear fell from James eye

Carth felt curious about what James had have seen on his journey all Carth asked James was "Get some sleep tomorrow lets try to have some fun around this city this is my first time being in a city and I want to have a marvelous time!"

Teila, James, and carth fell right to sleep Carth an unexpected was about to happen to Carth.

Carth then woke but it was in his dream he was on the mountain that he usually was on in his dream. Carth stood to feel the the breeze of the wind it felt amazing the light of the sun in the distance over the clouds. Carth felt glory, compassion, and the urge for adventure he felt like the luckiest man on earth to have his dreams feel so real.

All of a sudden somebody came up behind Carth.

It was Teila she exclaimed to Carth "I never thought this was your dream it is more magnificent than I ever thought before I feel like I can even fly!"

Carth felt like everything was amazing that now Teila can see what he dreams but all of a sudden the man with the black robes slowly walked up to Carth he began to speak his voice sounded so gentle and peaceful "I see that you now share your dreams with one another now you should be proud with yourselves I have only one thing to tell you two remember my words good and life will treat you well!"

Carth and Teila Came close to the man the man then told them "All dreams are but another reality for the ones who forget the memories then which are carved into there hearts the dreams are a key to unlock the heart to find the answers to the past and to the future remember my words well you two!"

 

[latioslegends]

Chapter 8 A Morning Alone

Carth was waking, he stretched his arms as far as he could. The sun rays came threw the opened balcony door Carth listened to the ringing of the city's bells, Carth thought it was the perfect way to get up after such a wonderful dream.

Carth jumped out of the bed he saw that James and Teila weren't there. Carth then noticed a small sticky note on the door. Carth ripped it off he saw that the note was Teila's hand writing.

Note
"Hey Carth I figured that you would want some more sleep so me and James woke up around 7:00. Me and James are going to be hanging out around the Altomare. I hope you don't mind but I borrowed your Salamence I know James has pokemon but I just want to be safe so be seeing you later."

Carth crumpled the note in his hand and tossed it in the trash. Carth opened his bag he took out a white T-shirt and a blue vest. He kept the vest open and put on some black pants.

Carth walked out the door he saw that it was only 9:50 AM Carth figured that there must be dozens of fun things to do in Altomare. Carth felt like his Flygon so full of energy and up for anything but when he thought Flygon Carth slapped himself in the face he was disappointed with himself he said himself "Ah I am a complete fool, my mom was right I am not cut out to be a pokemon trainer if can't even remember my own pokemon!"

Carth came into the room he saw his poke balls on the small coffee table. Carth grabbed them and attached them to his belt. Carth felt discouraged that he nearly forgot his pokemon he can only apologize to his pokemon Carth took the three small balls and held them close to his face and whispered "Sorry guys I got to admit I am sometimes a fool and maybe a little stubborn sometimes but don't worry I won't forget you so easily again."

Carth ran out of the hotel he felt hungry he didn't have a bite to eat yet he figured he should get something for himself and Flygon since it got him to the city in one peace. Carth ran across the stony path way the morning bells still ringing. Carth ran down block by block until a paper blew right into his face. "What in the world ah stupid trash!"

Carth took the paper off his face, before he threw it on the ground carth saw something interesting on it he began to read it "Lets see now what is this the Altomare water pokemon race hmm.....!"

Carth felt some interest about this he began to read about it. He grasped the poke ball with Lapars tightly in his hand "Ok it is tomorrow well this sounds fun I am always up for a good race I think that Lapars will like it to!"

Carths felt excited inside he kept reading about it but he came across the prize "The prize the glass medallion of Altomare! I wonder who won last year? Lets see um ah here we go some trainer named Misty wait a second!"
Carth remembered in his first dream he shared with Teila that he saw here on the boat with the other two trainers, Carth shook his head trying to think that this meant nothing at all.

Carth continued to run down the stony sidewalks, he looked upon the canals with a smile he was hopping to bump into James and Teila. Carth turned a corner he saw a nice restaurant on the edge of the town looking upon the sea, Carth's stomach growled a bit he figured he should get a bite to eat. Carth grabbed the poke ball with Flygon in it, Carth threw high in the air "Alright get out here Flygon!" Carth said cheerfully.

Flygon came out ball in the air, it flapped it's wings and floated down to Carth.

Carth exclaimed "Hey Flygon since you were the one who brought me and Teila to Altomare I think you deserve a little reward!"

Flygon stated to make it's cries it sounded like it was full of joy Carth new what it said "Well then Carth what is it then because when I am flying over an ocean for hours my wings get little soar you know, Ahh just kidding I can fly ten hours without getting tired!"

Carth starred into Flygons red eyes and exclaimed "Well I was thinking you would want to eat at a restaurant with me! Oh and if you do decide to just don't cook the food they cook the food because you are more likely to cook the people instead!"

Flygon nodded, Carth and flygon took off to the restaurant carth was feeling a little nervous bringing a dragon to a restaurant.



Meanwhile back at the secret garden............

Bionca was in a rush she was trying to find her art bag she remembered drawing in the garden but it wasn't there she figured it was one of the latis that took it then. "Okay enough joking around so who has it Flash, Zippy, Peppy, or Latias come on I won't be mad at you guys! Bionca said happily.

Suddenly something tapped Bionca's shoulder. Bionca didn't move for sec but then she turned around as fast as she could grabbing the Lati by the neck and fell on the soft grass along with it.

Bionca was laughing she saw the blue figure that it was Flash she saw the bag in it's mouth.

"Well then Flash I guess I might half to call you sticky fingers!"

The Latios laughed a lot it held it's claws close to it's stomach, it flapped it's blue wings every time it moved.

"Hey Flash do you know where the other Latis are I didn't see them at all this morning?" Bionca said in a curios voice.

The Latios pointed it's right claw at the water entrance to the garden.

Bionca knew where the three Latis went. Bionca figured that Latias must have told the other Latis about the possible new Latios and Latias.

"You should go look to Flash for the new Latis, it's a big city you know they can be anywhere Latias is going to need all the help she can get from you!"

Flash nodded he flew high up and dived right into the pool, Bionca yelled out to Flash "See you later Flash!"

Bionca began to walk to the exit of the garden she grabbed the art bag and her hat. Bionca went threw the wall and ended up in the alleys she saw a bunch of pidgy in the bird bath.

Bionca reached into her art bag she wanted to make sure Flash didn't take anything else "Lets see huh what do you know he takes half the utensils uhhhhhhh.........."

Bionca grinned but she said to herself in a happy voice "Ah well I guess I should buy some new art supplies anyway." she giggled and took off.



Meanwhile back with Carth and Flygon.............

"Now Flygon it was a good breakfast but why did you make fireworks after you got done eating!" Carth said gently

Flygon turned it's head out at the sea trying to be as relax as it could "I am so sorry master the food was hot and I decided to do a little entertainment! I know it was a hyper beam but hey people were clapping for the show I gave in the sky!"

Carth felt weird about what Flygon said not about the hyper beam but calling him master? "Flygon I understand I am your trainer but calling me master? it makes me feel like you are my slave, you are my friend not my servant!"

Flygon jumped in joy and hugged Carth tightly it's claws tightened into Carths back.

"Flygon I really like you but here is a hint on how to make me like you even more your claws are about to bust threw my skin so please let go it really hurts!"

"Oops sorry Carth I didn't mean to do that are you ok?" Flygon dropped Carth and rubbed it neck smiling.

"Ya I'm fine but seriously I think we should get moving everyone is starring at us!" Carth replied

Carth returned Flygon into it's poke ball and walked off.

Carth began to look around the city with his arm folded behind his head. "Maybe I should do a little drawing in this city I have plenty of poke dollars with me just got to get to a store to buy some good art supply and why am I talking to myself!"

Carth grabbed the poke ball with Charmeleon in it and tossed him out "Alright get out here Charmeleon!"

The red pokemon looked at Carth and was completely overwhelmed of where he was "Where am I! Only two days ago I am on an island and now I am in a gorgeous city surrounded by water, Water!"

Carth rubbed his hand behind his neck and exclaimed "Whoops sorry Charmeleon and the city long story and I don't feel like explaining it now but the reason why your it is just because you're the only pokemon I have that understands my passion about art but don't worry I won't let you fall into the water!"

"How can I trust you with that? If I fall in my life is over Carth seriously I like the buildings her but not the canals!"

Carth giggled a little and said "Charmeleon you are a brave pokemon and I think that if you just stick next to me and you'll be fine!"

Back with Bionca........

Bionca crossed a bridge and headed strait for the store. Bionca entered the store the small bell rang above her when she entered.

An old man came behind the counter and said happily "Ah Bionca nice to see you again here for art supply or just visiting." The old man came up and shook Bionca's hand.

Bionca exclaimed "just here to get some supply!"

The old man exclaimed "Well I think you know where the supply is!"

Bionca walked off to get the supply she always had liked this store it always was simple to her.

Carth entered the he withdrew Charmeleon "Well now this is neat store!" Carth then noticed some drawings on the wall he was impressed, they were all well drawn.

The old man came up to Carth he exclaimed "Well now a new face around here so what do you need today!"

Carth replied "Well some art gear that is just about all I need!"

"Well then you came to the right place kid this store has been known for good supplies for art!"

"Great then I am just going look around then now!" Carth replied

Carth looked around the store he was finding almost just about everything he needed.

Both Bionca and Carth didn't notice one another Carth got everything he needed he went up to the counter to pay for the supply. Bionca got done and went to the counter to. Bionca was behind two other people Carth was in front paying

Carth was relaxed it was only 12:30 and he had the whole day to himself not a cloud in the sky and wind with a wonderful breeze. "Well this should cover the supply I guess!"

Bionca then heard Carth. Carth was going out the door with the supply in a bag on his right side.

Bionca knew who it was she pushed threw the other people in line and said quickly "Can I leave this here I will be back for it later it is just a emergency!" Bionca was panicking she was thinking that she might loose the kid

Bionca ran out the door she saw Carth going across a bridge she ran as fast as she could to catch up with him she was positive it was him she saw a glimpse of his face and he was a pokemon trainer it had to be him.

Bionca was worried that she might loose him. She thought about him being a Latios but she wanted to meet him even if he was sort of a jerk to her at first but she kept running after him with hopes of meeting a new friend.

 

[latioslegends]

Chapter 9 Carth meets Bianca
Carth kept walking down the stony path ways not realizing Bionca was trying to get him.

Carth began to here somebody yelling out "Hey trainer can wait a minute please I need to speak to you!"

Carth thought it was to somebody else he just kept moving in the crowd of people. Carth looked up to the sky and watched as a flock of pidgy fly across some gondolas. Carth then thought about where he should do his first piece of art work with his new supply.

Carth was getting annoyed by all the people around him he thought about going threw the alleys as a short cut. Carth went across another bridge there was no one on it at all. Carth looked across the bridge on the right it was a clear exit of the city to the ocean.

Carth entered the alleyway but it was sort of dark all he can here was the wind behind him.

Bionca entered the alleyways she getting exhausted from running after Carth she yelled out once more hoping that Carth would here "Please whoever you are can you se come here just for a minute!" All of a sudden Bionca heard something "Hello is it you oh thank goodness!" Bionca saw two figures coming her way.

Then a string shot burst out of the shadows it was perfect hit on Bionca she could barely move a muscle. The figures came into view it was the Aridous and Espeon. Bionca was frightened she remembered what happened when Ash was at the city she knew that they were mad.

Bionca let out a scream as loud as she could hoping someone or something will save her "Please someone anybody please help Ahhhhhh!" The Aridous hit Bionca with a night shade making her fall to the ground and almost rendering her unconscious.

Carth heard the scream he ran back as fast as he could he took out the poke ball with Flygon on his right hand just to be safe.

Bionca was in terrifying pain the Espeon and Aridous showed no mercy. Bionca was crying a little she was begging to think this was the end of her life she knew that these to pokemon have been threw a lot over the year and they are extremely angered by anyone who was friends with any Latis.

Carth came along to a corner in the alleyways where he had now will face the pokemon that had nearly killed him.

The Espeon and Aridous stopped hurting Bianca and starred with a mean glare into Carth's eyes Carth did the same thing at the two pokemon.

Carth then yelled out to Bianca "Don't worry I am going to help you I just got to take care some these insensitive pokemon!"

The Espeon started to make it's cries to Carth "Well then I guess you came back you need another beating or should I just kill me and Aridous have had a hard year so prepare to die!"

Right before Carth grabbed the poke ball with Flygon he took a good look at the pokemon the Espeon was limping on it's left front leg and the Aridous was scared all over. Carth thought about what he was about to do they were to weak fight an actual battle Carth thought he might kill the two if he over did it he try to talk to the pokemon he did it in a gentle voice and tried to show kindness "Listen you two I do not want to harm you at all you can't fight just look at yourselves!"

The Espeon wasn't bothered about what Carth said at all it said one last thing before it moved "I guess you show mercy but I do not I have been taught by my master Annie that it is pointless to show mercy your just don't got it in you are weak!" the Espeon replied

The Espeon charged at him and jumped up high in the air ready to attack his face.

Carth then bend down. The espeon flew over as the Salamence did when he was 10 he was about to do the same to the Espeon. As it flew over Carth he grabbed the Espeon's tail. The pokemon shrieked Carth then threw the pokemon hard against the wall.

Carth then charged at the Aridous. The Aridous used a night shade it missed Carth was running sideways on the wall at speeds that were impossible for humans to do. Carth stopped for a sec and kicked off the wall with both his legs right at the Aridous. Right before he hit the Aridous he lifted his left leg and kicked it hard as he could. The Aridous flew back landing right on it's back it's down.

Carth stood there and took a breathe he saw the Espeon getting up looking like it still wanted to fight it exclaimed "I guess you can fight then but you won't soooooooo e, easily ah!"

The Espeon fell to the ground unconscious Carth had won the fight but Carth said to himself silently "How did I fight like that I felt like I was not even in control how was this possible."

Carth ran over to Bianca and ripped off the webbing and lifted her to her feet.

Bianca held her arms around Carth's neck and began to speak quietly "Thank you so much I thought that it was all over for me please I need to speak to you whoever you are?"

"Don't worry it's all over and the name is Carth, wait a minute it's you but I guess we are even now!" Carth replied

The relaxing moment was over Bianca got mad by Carth's stubborn behavior "I told you it was not me I just met you I mean up close!" Bianca replied

"Alright maybe it wasn't you because you both did seem a little different and can I get your name!" Carth replied


"It's Bianca, but please you must come with me someone really wants to meet you today she might not be there but soon she will!" Bianca replied

Carth laughed a little and said "Sorry have a nice day planned out swimming drawing and other things to do!" Carth replied happily

"Please just for an hour or two it will go by fast I promise!" Bianca sounded like she was begging Carth she grabbed his hand and pulled him.

"I ain't moving okay so leave me alone alright!"

Bianca was disappointed but she grabbed two off Carth's pokemon off his belt and quickly made a run for it hoping that he would follow.

Carth was furious he took off after her "You are so ungrateful I help you and you try to steal my pokemon now you are so in for it!"

Bianca was running as fast as she could she had a head start but she could not run as fast as Carth especially in a skirt the good news was the garden was not to far.

Carth felt loss it was a maze Bianca would take a left then a right where was she leading him he thought it was getting ridiculous but he would not let his pokemon down.

Bianca was to tired from jogging she stopped and laid against a wall she saw Carth coming strait at her.

Carth was upset but cooled down once he got to Bianca "Ok I am going to be nice to you now just hand over the two pokemon and we can just forget about this alright." Carth's voice was calm he just wanted to make it easy on her.

Bianca spoked out to him "I am begging you to come with me now! Please I know who really are there is no reason to be scared about it, if you want you can even show me right here what you really are there is nobody else you don't need to be shy!"

Carth felt great concern about what she said. He then thought about things for a sec his ability to talk to pokemon also how he was able to fight at speeds like that and much more weird things but then Carth talked in a whisppear "What am I? what do you mean I have been like this for 12 years you are crazy or is there something else......

 

[latioslegends]

I hope people have enjoyed my fan fic so far it is only my first fan fic but if there is something that I can improve on can anybody tell me thank you if you can.

 

[Adventure-Chan]

Great story! Please contiue! This is so awsome!

 

[oni flygon]

I hope people have enjoyed my fan fic so far it is only my first fan fic but if there is something that I can improve on can anybody tell me thank you if you can.

Please avoid double posting unless you're posting a new chapter. ><

As for advice, there isn't much advice at this point since it's up to you on how you can develop. Once you've reached a certain standard, it's up to you on how you can embelish it or improve it. Some previous errors you had are lessened, so that's good. I guess rereading those threads I've pointed out earlier might help again.

 

[latioslegends]

Chapter 10 A Secret Garden

Bianca was deeply confused by him saying that. "What? You mean you have looked like that for 12 years!"

Carth felt quite nervous about what Bianca was saying "I have looked like this for nearly 13 years you must have me confused with someone else, I hope!" Carth replied

Bianca felt strange about the Carth being a Latios if he doesn't know it.

"Everything will make sense if you come with me now and don't worry there is nothing to be nervous about it, four very good friends of mine are really going to like you, I promise!"

Carth thought about it for a minute thinking that "Maybe I might fine out who I am, maybe she does know the truth!"

"So will you come with me!" Bianca said happily

"Ok I guess but no more than an hour understand now!" Carth replied in a serious voice

Bianca nodded and the two took off without Carth realizing what was about to happen.


Carth and Bianca had been going threw the alleys for a little bit until Carth saw a girl at the end of the alley.

The girl looked completely like Bianca she just stood there she look pretty happy but all she did was stare at Carth.

"Well now you got back earlier than I thought." Bianca happily said to Latias

"Ok so you are twins to the looks of it, she seems very quite." Carth said in a quite voice.

"What? Sister, not at all but we are best friends!" Bianca replied to Carth

The girl that looked like Bianca came up to Carth up close. She began to walk around him in a circle looking very curious like.

"You know that some people have personal space whoever you are?" Carth exclaimed.

Then the girl came very close to Carth's face and stared into his blue eyes.

Carth felt stranger than ever about the girl not the fact that she is acting very weird but he felt relaxed like in his dreams, Carth felt comfortable around the girl.

The girl ran off she waved her hand showing Carth and Bianca to follow.

"Ok who was she if she is not your sister and why did she stared that close into my eyes!" Carth exclaimed.

"Just follow me trust me you will find out soon" Bianca replied

Carth followed Bianca until an plant covered tunnel came up. Carth walked threw it with Bianca. The sun sparkled threw the plants on to Carth's body, at the end he saw just a bunch of pidgy in a bird bath.

"Well were here come on lets go in trust me it is beautiful." Bianca exclaimed in a excited tone.

"What is here a bird bath that is it what are you trying to prove?" Carth replied.

"Why are you so impatient? here go threw the wall!" Bianca replied.

"Go threw the wall? It looks like solid brick to me and where is that other girl!" Carth replied in a annoyed voice.

Bianca grabbed Carth's hand and dragged him threw the wall.

"You see I told you! Just please trust me ok!" Bianca exclaimed

Carth felt strange he kept walking in the darkness, he was very suprised by what had happen.

The two came to the end of the tunnel Carth saw something almost unbelievable to him a massive garden, it's beauty was overwhelming he never seen anything like it before in his life.

"What...... is this place Bianca where am I?" Carth said in a quite but suprised voice.

Bianca and Carth ran down the stairs to see the girl that looked like Bianca.

Carth just kept looking around in astonishment of the gardens beauty he had seen amazing thing in his life but this beats all of it. The sun glistened down upon the trees and the small ponds with the Poliwag and butterfree.

Carth and Bianca came up to the girl she was standing in the middle of the garden. The girl looked very excited with that smile on her face.

Bianca looked at Carth and Latias and exclaimed "Here I got to go get someone stay here until I get back alright I'll be back in a little bit!"

Bianca took off leaving Carth alone with out him knowing that the identical girl was Latias.

Latias stood right by Carth. Carth then asked "So um..... who are you really, and why are you acting very weird around me it ain't right, and can you at least tell me your name!"

Latias didn't respond she just kept starring at him in a joyful look.

Carth began to walk towards the end of the garden where a fountain and pool was. All of a sudden Latias grabbed Carth's right hand and dragged him across the garden. She took him to wooden swing that hanged from a tree that looked upon the main pond. Latias made Carth sit down on the swing, she got onto the swing standing up.

Carth really wanted to know who she was but she just swinging back and forth with him on the swing.

Carth looked up at her she was looking down at him to. There eyes met the Latias with a cheerful look and Carth with a confused look.

"So is this your home if it is you must of had many good times I think, but why won't you talk to me are you shy?" Carth said in gentle and nice tone to the girl.

Latias felt very confused about him he should be able to sense that she was a Latias if he is Latios even she can tell he was one. No matter what it was she still was rejoiced around the boy he was even about her age and could sense he has a sister.

"I understand if you are shy but I can't get this weird feeling off being close to you. It's a good feeling but I can't describe it there are just so many words I would just say it is relaxing to me.

Latias was getting discouraged that he won't show his real form was there something wrong or just something different out there. Latias was beginning to think she should do it first.

Latias looked up into the clear blue sky on the swing and a light blue, white sparkling light engulfed her. Out of the light came Latias floating still pushing on the swing.

Carth was so suprised he jumped off onto the ground. Latias helped Carth up she put her arms under him and lifted him up to his feet she didn't expect him to be scared at all.

Carth starred in astonishment an image went threw his head it was one of the guardians of Altomare Latias. "You....... were Latias the whole what do you want from me!" Carth walked backwards slowly very suprised like but a little scared at the moment to.

Latias could finally talk since she was in her true form "Why are you scared I would never want to hurt you, come on do want to play with me please." Latias said happily.

Carth didn't seem nervous anymore about the girl turning into Latias but was babbled why would she be one anyway and show him that she was one.

"So I see you are the Pokemon Latias but why would you show me?" Carth said calmly.

"Huh.... what are you talking about that is a question which I think you should know!" Latias replied.

Carth was confused about what she had meant but something didn't feel right the Latias cries were some how soothing to him in a strange way.

"Ah..... why don't you turn into your true form Latios we can have a fun time together until my younger siblings get home!" Latias said happily flying around Carth.

Carth said in a shock "LATIOS?!"

 

[Adventure-Chan]

Now this is an awsome story! Please continue! Oh, I will continue my story too! Anyway great story!