Little help with my team?

[Eleventyseventy]

Claydol@Leftovers
Modest
252 speed, 252 sp. atk
Levitate

Ice beam
Stealth Rock
Explosion
Earth Power


Archy/Arcanine@Razor Fang (to heighten chance of flinching, good for T-Fang)
Hasty
252 speed, 252 attack
Intimidate

Flamethrower
Reversal
Crunch
Thunder Fang


Feraligatr@Razor Claw
Modest
252 defense, 252 sp. atk
Torrent

Crunch
Surf
Ice Beam
Superpower (thinking of changing this to Earthquake if I had the TM -.-)


Snorlax@chesto berry
Naughty
252 attack, 252 sp. defense
Thick Fat

Return
Earthquake
Rest
Crunch


Spinner/Hitmontop@Leftovers
Calm
252 speed, 252 attack
Technician

Triple Kick
Agility
Rapid Spin (use this to get rid of spikers or stealth rockers, or maybe an Fake Out would be better with Spinners ability to power up weaker moves?)
Earthquake


ShlumBum/Slowbro@Quick Claw
Calm
252 defense, 252 sp. atk
Own Tempo

Slack Off
Psychic
Brine
Earthquake

wont anybody help me?? :(

 

[TB Pro]

Ok first no Razor claw,no Quick claw,and no Razor fang!they are Bad items use like Lefties,Focus Sashes,Life orbs ect.ummmmm your EV spreads kinda follow the same rule.Ok for Snorlax follow the Curselax set or the Restalk set you choose.well Ill help more l8r

 

[Anti]

Ok first no Razor claw,no Quick claw,and no Razor fang!they are Bad items use like Lefties,Focus Sashes,Life orbs ect.ummmmm your EV spreads kinda follow the same rule.Ok for Snorlax follow the Curselax set or the Restalk set you choose.well Ill help more l8r

Well, quick claw, etc. aren't bad items, they're hax items, so they are banned. They rely on luck, and are often far too cheap.

 

[TB Pro]

well that is what I meant by Bad items I mean if they are banned then they are bad... for you!sorry for the confusion!

 

[Anti]

Slowbro fails with EQ, end of story. I'd do a full rate, but my best friend on PC needs my help right now. I'll get back to ya soon.

 

[Eleventyseventy]

ok thanks that'd be good :) yeah i was thinking about using different items anyway
because most people dont like battling against me with them

 

[TB Pro]

Well also the EVs are a thing to look at....

 

[Anti]

Flare blitz or some other physical fire move on arcanine would be batter than flamethrower, unless it's for skarmbliss killing, in which case I'd use overheat or fire blast for added power.

 

[Azonic]

Claydol@Leftovers
Calm/Bold
252 HP/ 172 DEF/ 80 SDEF
Levitate

Ice beam
Stealth Rock
Explosion
Earthquake

With Earthquake, Claydol murders the SkarmBlisses, making it so much more diverse.

Archy/Arcanine@Life Orb
Jolly
252 speed, 252 attack/ HP
Intimidate

Overheat
Extremespeed/Return
Crunch
Thunder Fang


Feraligatr@Choice scarf
Adamant/Jolly
252 ATK/ 172 SPEED/ 80 DEF
Torrent

Crunch
Waterfall
Ice Punch
EQ

Wayy too slow. lol Special Sweeping Gatr

Snorlax@chesto berry
Adamant
252 attack, 252 sp. defense
Thick Fat

Return
Earthquake
curse
Crunch

ShlumBum/Slowbro@Leftovers
Calm
252 HP/ 80 SATK/ 172 SDEF or DEF
Own Tempo

Slack Off
Icebeam
Calm Mind
Surf

wont anybody help me?? :(

That should do well for ya

 

[n3croart]

Your EVs are like screwed up. You should have at least HP/Atk/filler three is ideal to fill up the maximum of 510. Don't know about leading with Claydol. Oh and, don't use hax items like the above posts mentioned.

~lugialord