I think that your map looks good, I especially love the tiles. When I first saw it something felt off, and I figured out what it was. I think you should add a building onto the platform towards the top-left. That space just looks empty. Its zoomed out to far for me to see what(if anything)is actually there, nothing negative about anything else though. Good job.
Here's a map mine.
Map name: East End
Game: FireRed
Comments: It took me about an hour & a half to make this, and I'm pretty happy with it. The map is all mine, but major credit goes to Zel & all those who worked on Shiny Gold because the tiles/palettes are his(theirs?)
You really should have posted this in the rom-hacking section, but since you've posted, I might aswell rate it.
I give it
4,5/10
I know, a little harsh but anyway here's my opinion:
Pro's:
-Your natural mountain placement is pretty good.
-Real nice natural tree placement.
-Fluid, nice placement of water.
-Good use of other elements (Flowers, small grass straws, headbutt trees, etc.)
Con's:
-There's WAY too much space. You should make it so wherever you stand, you can see SOMETHING of interest on your screen area. If you can place your character somewhere, and pretty much only see grass, then you have too much space.
-Empty rows between trees. Trees dont' grow like that. Remove the small trees and fill out the empty space with one more line of trees.
-Too few roads. Dirt roads appear where people walk a lot. So there should be significantly more roads from the PokeCenter for example.
-Flowers in grass. Don't place the flowers in the middle of the tall grass. Place them separately in regular grass, like you did in the town-part.
-Move houses closer to each other. People build houses closer to eachother in real life, than in this map. Study nintendos maps a little more.
I think I've posted nearly every type of map here except indoors, which I'm not good at.
Uhm here's a indoor map of some random NPC's house. It's featured in my game Pokémon Fiesta.
EDIT: Oh and btw, I got the thread for my game up, link's in my sig.
And yeah I noticed the tile error at the exit.
9/10
Excellent map!
One thing though; Try placing white kitchen tiles as floor in the northwest part of the house! (Look at some of nintendos inside maps)
Then, it'll be perfect!
tImE~