Master Cheif's World

[PrinceOfDarkness]

Now this is a horrible sprite comic made by me, so please make as many crits as you would like XD I really can't accept comments cause I'm a newbie to sprite comics >>

https://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2172/stupidspritecomic4zx.png
^ my stupid sprite comic featuring Master Cheif, Leon (from Kingdom Hearts), Frieza, some Megaman guy and this girl Master Cheif is obsessed with XD

AI O.O I made a mistake on it "as" is suppose to be "has"

 

[Signomi]

You want a crit? o.O Ok..

-looks at comic-...AHH! MY EYES!...MY EYES! Your comic BLINDS my eyes! x.x;

That ok? XD

 

[Karasuma]

You remind me at how I started. Don't worry, you'll get better.

 

[PrinceOfDarkness]

Thank you Signomi XD *hugs you* XD nice crit, it made me feel good XD

MysticTrunks o.O I guarentee I will never get better at Sprite Comics, ever >>

 

[Allstories]

It is a horrible sprite comic made by you.

 

[PrinceOfDarkness]

see, thank you, I confirm/agree, I thought that sprite comic looked horrible

but the way you said it sounded like an insult XD

It is a horrible sprite comic made by you.

^ makes it sound like your trying to call me horrible XD^

 

[Lucy Lu]

Aww...it is very good. It is funny. ^___^

 

[Allstories]

see, thank you, I confirm/agree, I thought that sprite comic looked horrible

but the way you said it sounded like an insult XD


^ makes it sound like your trying to call me horrible XD^

I just said what you yourself acknowledged. Quit being so negative. Quit wasting our time and pull off something that YOU'RE content with. Because if you don't like it, why should we?

 

[Gohan]

Shuttup Allstories. He knows its pretty bad and you'll just make things much worse. You know, from all of your criticism, I've never seen a sprite comic from YOU.
Good job, LunaticJohnny. It might be bad, but I'm sure it will get better. Much better. Only thing I might suggest is a background? Yours is okay but, everything looks warped to me.

 

[armadilloHD]

You know, from all of your criticism, I've never seen a sprite comic from YOU.

Doesn't mean he doesn't know how to make one right ;>>

 

[Gohan]

Yeah, doesn't mean he doesn't know how to make one, but it seems like he's a hypocrit, telling others, when he doesn't have a comic. At least they've taken the time to try and think up a bit of a plot and put it together.

 

[PrinceOfDarkness]

please, don't argue in my thread XD I want it to live just a couple more posts =3 I know it'll die in a day or two >> XD

 

[Jarman]

Yeah, doesn't mean he doesn't know how to make one, but it seems like he's a hypocrit, telling others, when he doesn't have a comic. At least they've taken the time to try and think up a bit of a plot and put it together.

You don't have to do something to know the rules of it.

And the text bubbles are horrible. They should be filled.