after the colour problem and the dyslexia problem[spelling] i disided to redo my story as the previous one started in the middle. feel free to correct my spellings.
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a big thanks to Astinus for spell checking my work before it goes on to this thread:)
please comment on the story on this thread although i appreciate the pms i would prefer it to be with the story or as a visitor message if you must tell me directly.
the start my seem a bit odd but is necessary.
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Prologue
Mewthree, the first ever being, can kill a pokemon with just one glare. Said to have the coldest heart of all pokemon when she left them when she was needed most. She is a human and a pokemon.
At first Mewtwo doesn't feel like he belongs, but later finds out he does belong when he get's thrown into Mew's lake turns, silver and is healed. He also unknowingly completes the prophecy about Mewthree's return.And although he deeply loves a human he is saddened by the fact that she hasn't realised it.
Mew was the founder of all non-legendary pokemon. Now there is only three true Mews left the fourth having become a mirage. Shiny Mew also helps her friend Mewtwo bring back Mewthree.
Lugia is the guardian of all pureness. Though he cares for the sea around the bird trio's islands he mainly makes sure that the pureness balance is stable. He will normally only reveal himself to those of the purest hearts.
Ho-oh watches the world form above having vowed never to come back unless pokemon and people are in harmony.
Celebi is the keeper of the forests, only living where humans and nature are at one. He also is master of time travel.
Suicune is the pokemon who keeps water pure. His power over water is not as great as some of legendaries. He is however master of the north wind dashing around but not as fast as Rayquaza.
Mespirit is the being of emotion and thus very playful. She was the one to ask Aruceus for an equally playful friend, who is Mew.
Uxie is the being of knowledge. At first she did not use her powers for she thought it unfair but when Behoof asked to see her eyes and she obliged wiping his mind by doing so she then took advantage of her power locking her self away so she would see no one until the one who could share eyes with her would come.
Azelf is the being of will power. Giving all the ability to think for themselves he rests at the bottom of a lake only emerging in spirit form to play.
Rayquaza is the being assigned to keep comets and meteors for hitting earth. He is the fastest being in existence.
Kyogre and Groudon: one lord of the sea the other lord of land. Each one battles as to who would have the most of their element. This is why the land and sea are in odd places. After no one won, Kyogre returned to her lair and Groudon his.
Dialga and Palkia are the keepers of time and space.
Aruceus is the being who made all but one, his creator. She asked him to make a wonderful world of people and pokemon but never to intervene and so he watched even out side of Ho-Oh's view a secret to everything as those he made can no longer remember him.
Blurb
The pokemon realm is in chaos and it's only hope is.... fast asleep! The new king Ash is under someone else control and the only thing stopping them from having complete control is the resistance. But even they are failing as slowly some of them are vanishing and not coming back.
Will Star wake up in time or is life in the pokemon realm gone forever as we know it.
Key:
underline for correction.
a big thanks to Astinus for spell checking my work before it goes on to this thread:)
please comment on the story on this thread although i appreciate the pms i would prefer it to be with the story or as a visitor message if you must tell me directly.
the start my seem a bit odd but is necessary.
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Prologue
Mewthree, the first ever being, can kill a pokemon with just one glare. Said to have the coldest heart of all pokemon when she left them when she was needed most. She is a human and a pokemon.
At first Mewtwo doesn't feel like he belongs, but later finds out he does belong when he get's thrown into Mew's lake turns, silver and is healed. He also unknowingly completes the prophecy about Mewthree's return.And although he deeply loves a human he is saddened by the fact that she hasn't realised it.
Mew was the founder of all non-legendary pokemon. Now there is only three true Mews left the fourth having become a mirage. Shiny Mew also helps her friend Mewtwo bring back Mewthree.
Lugia is the guardian of all pureness. Though he cares for the sea around the bird trio's islands he mainly makes sure that the pureness balance is stable. He will normally only reveal himself to those of the purest hearts.
Ho-oh watches the world form above having vowed never to come back unless pokemon and people are in harmony.
Celebi is the keeper of the forests, only living where humans and nature are at one. He also is master of time travel.
Suicune is the pokemon who keeps water pure. His power over water is not as great as some of legendaries. He is however master of the north wind dashing around but not as fast as Rayquaza.
Mespirit is the being of emotion and thus very playful. She was the one to ask Aruceus for an equally playful friend, who is Mew.
Uxie is the being of knowledge. At first she did not use her powers for she thought it unfair but when Behoof asked to see her eyes and she obliged wiping his mind by doing so she then took advantage of her power locking her self away so she would see no one until the one who could share eyes with her would come.
Azelf is the being of will power. Giving all the ability to think for themselves he rests at the bottom of a lake only emerging in spirit form to play.
Rayquaza is the being assigned to keep comets and meteors for hitting earth. He is the fastest being in existence.
Kyogre and Groudon: one lord of the sea the other lord of land. Each one battles as to who would have the most of their element. This is why the land and sea are in odd places. After no one won, Kyogre returned to her lair and Groudon his.
Dialga and Palkia are the keepers of time and space.
Aruceus is the being who made all but one, his creator. She asked him to make a wonderful world of people and pokemon but never to intervene and so he watched even out side of Ho-Oh's view a secret to everything as those he made can no longer remember him.
Blurb
The pokemon realm is in chaos and it's only hope is.... fast asleep! The new king Ash is under someone else control and the only thing stopping them from having complete control is the resistance. But even they are failing as slowly some of them are vanishing and not coming back.
Will Star wake up in time or is life in the pokemon realm gone forever as we know it.
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