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diamondpearl876

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    Okay. My third one-shot...

    It was inspired by a picture of two Pikachus looking at each other, when I was looking for pictures for the Pikachu/Pachirisu fan club. So, I thought, "What could happen when two Pokémon of the same species are forced to battle with each other?"

    It steers away from the "omg the trainer is such a horrible person1!!" thing, but no, it's still not happy.

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    I thought it was a joke at first. It had to have been . . . right?

    My trainer could have effortlessly sent out his Sandslash instead of putting me through misery. It was immune to electricity; it was a great advantage! But, no . . . When I saw the other Electrike on the field, I could already tell what kind of battle it was. It was a battle to see which Electrike was a better fighter. Who could give off the most electricity before fainting? Who had the best attacks, and be able to use them to the best of their ability? If my trainer had already thought I was a superior fighter compared to the rest of the team, like he always tells me I am, then he wouldn't have sent me out for me to prove it to him.

    As expected, the other Electrike had the intention of defeating me. I, on the other hand, didn't know how I was going to carry out this battle. It wasn't anything out of the ordinary . . . My trainer yells out a command, and so does the other one. We attack; we take severe and life-threatening damage if we don't dodge. We hear more demands; we struggle to even stand back up.

    This had never happened to me. I couldn't face another Electrike. Before I belonged to my trainer, I lived in Petalburg Woods with a wild group of them. Since I was captured, I've had no contact with my family or friends, and it's not like I could sneak out of my Pokéball in the middle of the night and go find them. The fact that we're in an entire different region could only keep me hoping that one day, I could possibly return to my home and pay a visit to them.

    "Electrike, use Thunderbolt!" my trainer yelled. I couldn't count how many times I've heard that exact sentence before. It was a waste of words; a memory was already playing in my head, and I wasn't about to let it fade away.

    I could feel the morning dew beneath my four tiny paws as I crept towards the oak tree that was roughly fifteen feet in front of me. There was a prize waiting for me at the top. It looked like a delicious apple to me; a perfect gift to bring back to my sick friend back at my home. It would certainly brighten her day!

    I looked up, and thought about forgetting about this and finding something else as I realized just how far away the apple really was from the ground. I decided to take a risk, and began by grabbing on to the lowest branch possible. I made my way up, pushing several leaves out of the way to make sure I could see where I was going. One wrong move and I'd be sent back to the beginning.

    When I finally made it, a feeling of glee passed through me until I took the apple off of the branch it had been attached to prior to when I arrived. I examined it for a brief moment, and became more aware of my surroundings when I heard a buzzing noise. That was never, ever delightful news to hear.

    Before I got a chance to escape, I felt myself stabbed once in the back, and was sent flying off the branch. As my back faced the ground, I could see the Beedrill who had ruthlessly attacked me to gain ownership of the apple. I crashed at the bottom, and saw the Beedrill fly away without even looking back before falling into unconsciousness.

    The next thing I knew, I saw another Electrike hovering over me. I had seen him a few times around our home, but never really learned his name or talked to him much at all. Knowing it wasn't an enemy, I recalled everything that had occurred, and I could feel my face burning up out of embarrassment. The other Electrike told me it was fine, and offered to help me out.

    I stood up slowly, attempting to ignore the pain in my back. I assumed he would walk me back to the rest of the pack so I could rest, so I wanted to get moving as soon as possible.

    That Beedrill must have hit me pretty hard, I thought.

    The other Electrike told me to put my tail to his, and so I reluctantly obeyed. Next, he used his Thunderbolt attack, and I could feel some of his energy transferring to me! I felt severely grateful, and I asked how I could repay him. He told me to never try to get an apple from a tree again.

    I snapped back to reality, grinning at what I had just seen in my head, then frowned once more when I saw my opponent. I just stood there. What else could I do? Obey? I think I've done that too many times in the past. A little break couldn't hurt, could it? The other boy yelled to use Quick Attack while I was still vulnerable. With fierce speed, I was tackled by the Electrike, much like when I was stabbed by the Beedrill. The only difference was it was a tackle to the stomach, and it wasn't a giant stinger. I was sent flying back towards my trainer, and collided with the ground. I opened my eyes shortly after, and saw him with a shocked look on his face.

    I slowly stood back up with nearly every part of my body aching, just to look at the Electrike. I couldn't tell if she was one I knew way back when. We all had the same body, the same eyes, the same tail. . . It was difficult to distinguish one from the other. I could take a picture of her, stare at it for days on end and still never find anything that could make me remember that I once knew her. The only thing that could ever make her seem familiar was her voice, but it was worthless because her voice was as cruel as she was.

    "Please don't," I whimpered, silently praying that the other Electrike would stop listening to her trainer, too.

    "Why? We were born to fight, you know. Live up to your name!" She laughed at me, at how weak I appeared to her.

    She then began to quickly duplicate herself, and all of them were surrounding me by the time she was finished with the attack. They all stared at me menacingly, getting ready to pounce. I barely took notice of it, however, as another flashback was playing in my head.

    Roughly forty Electrike, including me, were gathered in a clearing near our home. Most of us had woken up just fifteen minutes before we began our daily discussion about what we would do that day. What would we eat? Were there any trainers in the forest this morning? What would we play for fun?

    "Stay away from the river near here. I saw two trainers camping out there last night. We can not lose another one of you!" an older Electrike announced.

    "We could take their food for today's lunch and dinner! It'd be something different," a nearby voice suggested.

    After much discussion about that, we chose three Electrikes to do the work. One to distract the trainers, and another to grab the food. The third was in case the trainers whipped out a Pokéball and decided to throw it at someone. The rest of us agreed to play hide-and-seek a few times throughout the day. The only rule was that you had to have a partner, so he or she could report if you got lost or were attacked . . .

    That's how it always was. We looked out for each other. We cared about each other, and no one else. We were happy.

    "Come on! Use Bite on the real one!" There was a frustrated tone in his voice, but I didn't care. Eventually, all the Electrikes began to start charging towards me, beginning another Quick Attack. This was not a charge to a nice group hug. No . . . Instead, the Electrike clones in front of me disappear and I am slammed from behind by the real one. I fell a few feet forward, my face buried into the dirt.

    When I managed to look up, I saw the Electrike smiling, as if she was having the time of her life. Surely, she's had more fun than this . . . Hell, this wasn't entertaining in any way. I looked away, and pretended to faint. It was the easiest thing to do at the moment. What would happen to me next is what I didn't know. The other Electrike was recalled back to her Pokéball, and I prayed that she realized one day why I didn't fight in the first place. It didn't seem likely, but it didn't hurt to hope.

    My trainer did not recall me. Instead, he picked me up gently and asked me what had gone wrong.

    "I can't fight someone who reminds me of the ones I loved, and the ones I was forced to leave behind. I'd feel as if I was destroying them, and the memories along with that." It didn't matter what I said, as he didn't understand Pokémon language. He could only hear me speak my name, and nothing more. He could never understand.
     
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    So...did my advice on staring at the four walls help? xD You managed to write a fic after all.

    I'm not sure if the title fits or not. I mean, with the two Pikachu fighting one another and one refusing to fight, I couldn't help but connect this with the first movie. Ash's Pikachu didn't want to fight his clone Pikatwo and so he took the beating. That's my main gripe about this. You wanted to do something different from the clone thing, but yet all I could picture was Pikatwo slapping Pikachu.

    It could just be me though. I dunno. Maybe you could have tried a different Pokemon.

    Other than that, I still enjoyed this. I enjoy all of your one-shots, so that shouldn't be a surprise. I particularly liked the last paragraph. Very few humans seem to understand what's going on in their Pokemon's minds. And few seem to try to understand.

    So, good luck staring at the walls while waiting for inspiration to strike!
     
    I think language wise this is a great read. I really enjoyed it, but like Hanako said I couldn't help but picture Ash's Pikachu and its clone from the movie instead of a story of its own. But one thing that did seem to stand out to me was seeing that not all Pokemon/Trainer relationships are close. We are so used to seeing Ash and co befriend their Pokemon with relative ease that we probably don't think that some Pokemon wouldn't enjoy their time with a trainer at all.
     
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    Actually, Hanako, one of the most interesting things about mirror images is that they reflect everything in reverse. And by the way, this was an amazing one-shot. I especially liked the secondary flashback, and the contrast between the two Pikachu- one doesn't want to fight, the other one is like "Come on, chicken-wuss!" It's a classic set-up. I also kind of enjoy the fact that despite the Pikachu complaining about how his trainer is sending him out on purpose to fight another Pikachu just to prove he's better, the trainer does seem to care about him at least a little bit, as evidenced by his picking the poor thing up at the end. The great thing about this story is it can be viewed by different people in different ways, since the Pikachu's judgement of those around him, such as the other Pikachu for example, could be biased or wrong in certain respects. All-in-all, it was a very enjoyable read.
     
    No, I did not stare at four walls. LOL. I'm just going to be gone for 5 days so I promised myself to write something before I left.

    Anyway, I didn't think about the first movie with the two Pikachus at all while I was writing this . . . Maybe if I edit this I could change the pokemon, but I didn't even think about that. >>

    To me, the main difference is that the clone of Pikachu in the movie is of himself. It wasn't even born like a normal Pikachu or anything. The one in the story refuses to fight because he thinks it'd be destroying the memories of everyone he knew, when they are all so similar to eachother. Though, I do see why you guys pictured that.
     
    I could change it to Electrike. Not used often and knows Thunderbolt/DoubleTeam.

    edit: i changed it anyway, and i hope those that have already read it still won't picture pikachu if they were to read it again.
     
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    i think its ok it give it 7/10 i like it
     
    When there are more than one Pokémon, dont use an "S". Pokémon has no plural form.
     
    Hm.

    "Roughly forty Electrike blah blah" wouldn't make sense to me really, but I see what you mean. I don't know if you liked it or not but whatever.. xd
     
    It was good, I liked it. I read the edited version, by the way.
     
    It'd be kind of nice if you told me why you liked it, or how I could improve since you couldn't get into it.... =)
     
    "About fourty Electrike blah blah blah" is really grammatically correct. You dont say fourty fishs, right? If you have ever watched one episode of Pokémon with more than one Pokémon in it, you notice when there's a group they dont say "Look at the Pokeemons!" Or "All of these Magikarps". I dont know why, but its another crazy rule in the five ton book of rules and regulations.
     
    I don't like to revive old threads but whatever..

    I guess you're right, though. Thanks. I don't watch the shows a lot so I wouldn't know.. =P
     
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