Muh sprites

[Umbreon's Shadow]

*Digs into photobucket acount*Well here are my sprites.I do recolors,fusions,animations and some more stuff(except custom sprites).If you want a sprite just ask.

 

[Alex_]

1)The animation is creative but you cant read the yellow text,and the lighter parts on the Raikou are white which isnt good.Overall:5/10
2)Good animation but the colors are messed up,or are they meant to be white? Anyway the shading isnt good at all.Overall:5/10
3)The animation is okay not the best. And yet again,some of the colors are white and the shyading is bad.Overall:4/10
4)Shading is atrocious XD Overall:3/10
5)Again,shading needs to be worked on. Overall:3/10
6)Good,but it needs shading big time and it looks like you're using default paint colors. Are you? Overall: 6/10
7)Shading is really bad this time. Overall:1/10

Just work on your shading and you'll be a good spriter ;) If I were you i'd look at this which is a tutorial which helped improve my shading. Anyway good luck on your spriting =D

 

[Vicener]

1)The animation is creative but you cant read the yellow text,and the lighter parts on the Raikou are white which isnt good.Overall:5/10
2)Good animation but the colors are messed up,or are they meant to be white? Anyway the shading isnt good at all.Overall:5/10
3)The animation is okay not the best. And yet again,some of the colors are white and the shyading is bad.Overall:4/10

He's right the animations are cretive but the sprites just dont look good. I'll give you an overal 4/10

 

[Umbreon's Shadow]

Well shading never was my best XDAnd the colors on Typhlosion sure looks like i messed them up,or maybe the sprite i got was messed and here isnt text on raikous bolt its the spark.Thanks for the comments anyway.